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Love and Pride chapter two
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“You holding auditions ? “
“Next week “
“My sister is a good singer “
“Oh the always studying one — how is she — I’ve only seen her once “ Alice asked
“Working and working and working “ Helena assessed
“What does she do for amusement — I mean does she ever do anything but study ? “ Shane asked
“She’s plucking up courage to go on the Amensty International march next weekend. “
“Oh that will be fun – that all ? “ Alice asked with a sneer.
Helena frowned — she was very protective of Bette.
“No — she is super fit . She has a cross country race on Saturday, she goes circuit training and she swims. Bette is happy in her own way and I wouldn’t want anyone to say anything that might hurt her — do you hear me Alice ? “
“Gee — sensitive aren’t you. I’d just expect your sister to be more like you
“
“Well she is my step sister but apart from that we are sisters. I love her
and if anyone was to hurt her they would find out how protective I am of her “
Shane flashed Alice a look that warned her that to keep making comments
about Helena’s sister was not a good idea
“Is she gay or straight ? “ Alice persisted
“She doesn’t know “
“Well she isn’t going to find out if she spends the next three years in her room or running “
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Helena had just finished a lecture and was heading towards the library when she spotted the blonde a few feet in front of her. She quickly picked up her pace and caught up with her
“Hia “
“hey there “
The blonde smiled at Helena who felt the same ache for her that she had the night before when she had not been able to look at any other woman in the disco apart from Tina Kennard.
“Where are you off to ? “
“Meeting Lara in the coffee bar and then we are going to hitch into town to get some shopping “
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Tina need to meet Bette asap! they together can find a lot of thing that they don’t know!
LOL@B&TF’s comment! After 2 chapters this story is addicting.
Since Bette doesn’t have any experience with woman before, I guess she will try to get some advises from Helena! Helena seems so caring and protective of Bette, no doubt that she will spill out all “tips” to her. Helena helps Bette to get “her” Tina! That’s just hilarious. Can’t wait for next chapter. Thanks.
Both Tina and Bette are runningmaybe they will met that way or have met and Tina didnt know that Bette was Helena sister. Helena is so sure of herself. She need to lose and then want be so high and mighty thanks
I’m a big fan of your L wing story, and this one has so much potential. Can’t wait for the next chapter. Hope B & T meet soon!!!
So here is why I love this story so far:1) Helena is super protective of her sister Bette2) Tina has no sexual interest in Helena whatsoever3) Both Bette and Tina are just coming to terms or realizing that they be into womenPost soon please! Oh and I lughed my ass of at Helena saying that b/w her and Shane they could have any lesbian they wanted… that was great.
Okay Ally, now that you have this hook in my mouth, don’t lead me a stray; just reel me in with another B&T tale :o). I can hardly wait for B&T to meet while running or in the pool, and start their discovery together. I hope that little green monster doesn’t get the best of protective sister Helena.
Oh bummer, I was really getting into this chapter and then it ended. So glad that Tina is not interested in Helena, not that Helena is not cute and all, but Bette has it all going for her. I can’t wait to see the reaction of both Tina and Bette when they do see one another. Even if they see each other from afar, it will be intersting if they are head over heals in love at first sight.
NO don’t let Hel be Tina’s 1st, of course it has to be Bette….pps
Can’t wait for bette and Tina to meet
Good chapter and let see Bette and Tina meet!
Whew!!! That is a relief. Tina has no feelings for Helena. NOW bring on the BETTE and TINA MEETING! Let the sparks fly.
You are amazing! Such an imaginative and fertile mind! We are lucky to have you as an author on this site.
Please hurry with the next post. This story is so AWESOME!!!!
Ally, all I know is that is takes a very talented writer to have two stories going on at the same time. But you now have three and they are all so very different. You my friend are so very talented and yes I am biased, but even you must admit that is an awesome feat. This is going to be a great story.
It’s not good, Ally,… not good at all!!! It’s only the second chapter and I’m already hooked! God, woman, how do you do it??? Damn, I’m so looking forward to this story. And I agree with Bandtfan, it takes a hell of a writer to write 3 stories in the same time, and all of them awesome and so different! Thanks for making it clear that Tina is not interested by H, and that hopefully H won’t get too hurt as she’s a player. Oooooo, and how I love the idea that Bette might be singing in a band…. How romantic is that??? I love your genius ideas, you always manage to find something that adds this extra plus to the story! Oh, and just to conclude… Getting a lift out off campus and into town to go shopping to Sainsburys… hits home for me… big time!!!! How many times did I have to do that! Lkg fwd to many more campus habits of these good old days! *heavy sigh* Anyway, thanks a lot, Ally!
Heehee, can’t wait to see Bette’s and Tina’s first meet. The story’s great!
so tina and bette have some of the same interests huh? i can’t wait until they meet. great job ally.
I’m curious Ally. What kind of accents are they all speaking with? We assume Helena has her usual plummy tones and Bette her standard American accent, but what of the rest? Are Shane, Alice, et al American exchange students or local products? Shane’s a commie? Might appeal to a rebellious counter-culteral soul, but history shows it’s rarely provided a safe place to queers or indeed anyone who thinks outside the box. Ah, the confidence of callow youth! Pity Tina’s prejudging Bette with no more than her aversion to Helena. But that just gives you something to work with down the road, doesn’t it, Ally?
so is this a tibette story? just making it clear, though i will read anyway, unless hellbette will emerge from it and you’ll pair tina with a german shepphard, then i would have to think about it :) i wonder what other tactics helena has in mined to get tina but i think as soon as tina sees bette, nothing else will matter
Ally, you are and AMAZING writer. I love this story line, with Helena and Bette being step sisters. And, I love the fact that Helena is trying so hard with Tina…only to get shot down. LOL! I hope her and Bette cross paths soon, maybe jogging? (wink, wink)
ALLY, Please post soon. This story is just great. I can not wait for Tina to meet Bette. Thank you
Great chapter Ally! Pls continue… ^_^
This is fun!
I hope Tina will be Bett’s trophy. And, please go on Ally, this story is so different from the other two, and three of them are awesome.
Well I’m hooked on this story already and I did notice that TÃna and Bette have the interest. Sounds very promising :o)) Post soon, also on L-wing please
love it, it makes it so much more realistic for me that it’s in lancaster as i live here and i was in the water witch the otherday lol cant wait for b&t to meet and bette to come out of her shell , thank god you made helena, bette’s sister agreeing with BTF no helebette ever again, obv not you tho bye ;)
Excellent chapter Ally. Ps..i think I’m all in for a HeleTina. Please Post soon!
This’s good! I’m hooked with this story… I chuckled when you mention Sainsburys, as I just came back from there..lol.
My god this is good, you managed to write in two chapters already as much as other writers write in ten and yet I don’t have the feeling that it is goin’ fast. Really love what you do with these characters and for once Bette & Helena are no rivals, I really hope it stays that way. Great job.