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    Love At First Sight Chapter 9

    Story written on October 16, 2004 by marg.
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    It is a long way home

    Whatohoh yeah ..sorry. Bette sheepishly stammered as she move her hands reluctantly back up to Tinas waist. Both women silently smile to themselves as they continued their dance.

    After the third song Tina finally pulled herself out of Bettes grasp. I think we need a break Bette. We are still slow dancing and for the record the last two songs were a little bit up tempo for that. We are starting to draw an audience. Tina blushed

    Sorry Baby I was a little too lost in your perfume to notice. Or maybe just because I am so drunk I am unable to focus. Bette teased Tina

    Or maybe you are just too old to move that fast. Tina offered with a smile that made Bettes knees go weak. Anyway you looked drunk to me. An easy mistake to make. Tina couldnt help but smile at her pathetic excuse for breaking up Bettes budding romance with Little Miss Twenty Something.

    Alice, Dana, Shane and Kit had not taken their eyes off of Tina and Bette since their little dance began. If we dont break that up soon Tina is going to be the first straight girl in the history of Milk to be converted, molested and arrested all before she has even had her first drink. Alice announced

    It does seem to be getting a little heated out there. Kit agreed as Bette stepped her right leg in between Tinas as the couple continued to follow their own rhythm.

    A little heated??? I am expecting Tina to light up a cigarette any minute now. Alice added.

    I thought Tina was straight. Dana asked as she fantasized about Bette holding her the way she was Tina.

    I am sure at some point in her life she may have been Dana, but from where I am sitting Tina is about to ride the Porter Express all the way to ***** Town. Alice proclaimed.

    You have to admit there would be worse ways of getting there. Shane said They are so ***** cute.

    Bette and Tina headed back to the table still holding hands. Hey Porter what was that all about. You werent actually keeping up with the beat of the music out there. Do you have some sort of an infliction because if that is the case maybe we could have a telethon? Alice snickered

    The only telethon I am interested in supporting Al is the one raising money to buy you a seat on the next NASA shuttle to outer space. Bette dryly replied. Tina locked eyes with Bette and winked her approval at Bettes remark.

    After a few more drinks and a few more dances the gang decided to call it a night. Before Bette could reach Kits car Alice had already secured the front passenger seat and was try to coax a somewhat tipsy Tina to join her there for the ride home. Knowing it would drive Bette crazy Tina happily agreed as she piled in on top of a very shocked Alice. Oh ***** Bette is not going to be happy about this. Alice thought as she smiled from ear to ear at the prospect of Bettes reaction.

    Very funny Al. Now get in the back seat before I remove your liver through your nostrils. Bette glared

    You know the rules Porter. Once shotgun is called it is a done deal. Alice looked at Tina and both of them in unison yelled. Shotgun. and smile up at one angry Bette Porter.

    Bette furiously climbed into the back seat of the car as she plotted Alices grizzly and painful demise.

    Before Kit could even pull out of the parking lot Alice had begun her game of Lets torture Bette.

    Tina, please keep your busy little hands off of my body. We are in a moving vehicle for Petes sake. Alice said loudly enough for Bette to hear.

    Oh come on Alice dont get all shy on me now. Tina played along. You said you liked it when I did this.

    All Bette could hear now was the stifled moans and groans from the two women in the front seat. All right that is just about enough you two. I am not even slightly amused. Bette half shouted

    Tina froze in the front seat. She could tell Bette was really annoyed and not finding any humour in this situation what so ever. Tina turn around in the seat to look over at Bette who was now staring out the window refusing to make I contact with Tina.

    ***** Bette. Im sorry. Tina said

    Yeah, whatever Tina. Bette quietly uttered

    Tina knowing she had pushed it way too far crawled between the two front seats and placed herself directly in Bettes lap in the back. Is this where you prefer me to sit? Tina softly asked

    Bette turned her head from the window to face Tina. Seeing that tears had formed in Bettes eyes tugged deeply on Tinas heart strings. I really am sorry Bette. I didnt mean to hurt your feelings. That was selfish and thoughtless. Tina said in a trembling voice.

    The other women in the car remained completely silent included Alice who was feeling nearly as badly as Tina.

    Bette tried to blink away her tears as her eyes met Tinas. Tina looked intently back at Bette before she finally lean in to kiss Bettes soft full lips. Bette instinctively reacted to Tinas kiss and slowly began to part her lips hoping Tina would respond to Bettes desire. Bette didnt have to wait long as Tina gingerly slid her moist tongue over Bettes lower lip and finally into her opened mouth. Bette could feel her body begin to tingle as Tina slowly moved her tongue across Bette’s. Ms. Porter was in heaven. She softly pushed Tinas tongue out of her mouth and gently followed it with her own back into Tinas mouth. Both women were in a total swoon at this point and were completely unaware of their surroundings as their tongues continued to intertwine. Tina had now stretched her legs across both Dana and Shanes laps as she ran her fingers through Bettes long curly hair. Bette wrapped both of her arms tightly around Tinas body and simply revelled in the most passionate kiss she had ever experienced.

    Alice, Kit, Dana and Shane all sat with their mouths hanging open as Bette and Tina continued on and on. Finally Alice broke the silence and the kiss. For the love of God Porter if you dont want to see me perform oral ***** on your sister, right here and right now, you better stop kissing Tina like that. I am getting more than a little turned on now myself.

    Just out of curiosity, would I have any say it that at all? Kit asked.

    No Kit you wouldnt, but dont worry Hot Stuff you would write me a letter of recommendation after it was all over. Alice quickly replied with a wink

    Tina snuggled into Bettes neck and quietly whispered into her ear. I cant wait to get you home.

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    Comments

    1. Hmm.. finally Tina is succumbing to Bette’s pursuit. But you did write a great flirty banter of B&T dancing around each other. Hope that’s not going to diminish too much after they get together. It’s really fun to read! Loved your sense of humour and those bold naughty lines.

    4. Ok, Marg, there you go… you just made my Saturday afternoon! This is such a great story with lots of fun and flirty dialogue. I can not say enough of how very addicted I am. Please continue and Soon!

    7. “Ride the Porter express all the way to Gay town”. Is anyone selling tickets for this ride? Coz I gotta go liquidate my assets!
      Great job with the story! Keep teasing Bette…!

    9. As usual this is great. Tina is human eventually she would have to break down. Bette is HOT. The dialogue is great as usual. Please update soon. I absolutely love your story.

    10. Thanks for another great chapter. Since it is the weekend, that means work won’t interfere with another chapter getting out this soon right???? Loving this story

    15. I am serious. Am I the only straight girl here who is honestly thinking about riding the Porter Express? I am not kidding? Is it possible to switch teams from reading fan fiction? Someone answer me please:)

    17. Words will never do justice… this story gets better and better. Glad you have your inspiration back ;o)
      So when are we getting home? I mean the girls ;o)

    20. Jessie..I am really worried about myself cause I can imagine myself as Tina being kissed by Bette.. Actually, I want to be kissed by Bette:)

      Marg.. What do you have to say about THAT!:)

    24. I guess playtime is over?
      Where do you get this stuff? This dialogue is really snappy, there’s not one losing line in the whole piece!
      I think T&B are having a captivating effect on each other, no one has the upper hand!
      Keep the banter going, Marg!

    25. Marg… thank you for this wonderful writing I found myself grinning from the beginning right through to the end of the chapter. You are also very consistent with the dialogues they are simply a delight to read um… hmm this series is very entertaining indeed. Looks like Ms Kennard reserves are melting and finding playing hard to get with the delicious Ms Porter is not at that easy LOL.

      Thanks for posting *S

    30. str8 absofuckinglutely???is that a word. Maybe I can’t work that into my next chapter. Sorry to disappoint but my heart has already been captured by lone star….however I am sure there are plenty of other girls out there who would want to make you swoon. girls??? form a line str8 is handing out tickets

    31. Marg… I thought you were putting your Bette Porter outfit and coming to see me:) Let me paint you the picture in your own absofuckinglutely orgasmic words: “Both women were in a total swoon at this point and were completely unaware of their surroundings as their tongues continued to intertwine”.. Do I need to say more?:)

    33. Str8 I am a bit more of a romantic than that. Hand cuffs and chains are not required. However having lone star in my lap is a nice thought. Where are you Peanut??

    34. Marg.. Ok.. Fine.. Reject me..Did my boyfriend get to you in that phone booth? Don’t listen to him. He is a freak:) Can I at least have another chapter tonight as my rejection present?:)

      Lonestar.. You are one lucky woman.. Just think about the nice words you get to hear every night:)

      Yes, I am handing you tickets and they are free:)

    37. Sorry Str8 but what is a girl to do. And for the record I am the lucky one not lone star. I would like to get out another chapter tonight but you are going to have to convince lone star to supply me with a bit of stimulation. It is amazing the things that go through my mind when that girl is around.

    38. Lonestar.. Please, provide Marg with the stimulation she is requiring for the sake of all of us. Do humanity a favor by pleasing her and inspiring her.. I am handing you some handcuffs and some chains and…. We need another chapter here as we are dying for B&T to get home.. Be a doll and be her muse once again tonight:)

      Marg… She is heading straight (oops!) to your lap.. Be ready!

    39. I’m on my way babe ;o)
      Str8 I’ll try my best… although I don’t know how I can have her writing if I’m going to be pleasing her and inspiring her all at the same time? *winks*

    45. Marg, they’ve been in that car for days now. We need to know what happened next. Lonestar, give her a break and let her write for us. Just a little while, please.

    50. You are just hilarious!!! I’m loving the dialogues, the teasing hell i’m just plain loving everuthing… please keep it up don’t stop…take them home please

    52. Hey Marg, Where are you? Did you forget about us fanfic addicts out here patiently waiting for you to continue with this great story you have going here. I think it’s time you get Bette and Tina home now.

    55. I know life keeps us really busy some more than others. You really spoiled us with this story and we MISS YOU! Please come back soon. I have looked for an update so many times and :( it hasn’t been there my birthday is coming up so I’m hoping that you will leave us all a surprise soon and update this EXCELLENT story of yours.

    60. i’ve been reading this for the 2nd time…personally i think it was the BEST story EVER…but please marg…where r u hiding? u stopped writing? feel demotivated? please…let us know what we can do to get u to continue this story..please please…i’m on my knees begging you….PLEaaaSSeee!

    61. Sorry Denise …I have been more busy than de-motivated. A very demanding job and girlfriend have been taking up most of my time. I am hoping to get something written over the holidays as I have a few days off and Lonestar (the girlfriend) is off to visit some family for a few days. I will try my best to satisfy you and the other readers who have been so patient. I apologize as I know it is an awful place to leave the readers hanging.

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