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Love && Basketball – Part 12
2 Weeks Later
Alot has happened since the New Port game. Carmen and Shane’s relationship has grown tremendously, Jenny and Marina broke up, and Central had won all of the important games. Winnning the quater-finals, the semi finals, and state section finals. Putting them at last in the state finals.
And the whole time Shane has managed to put Carmen in the back of her mind during the game. Then of course after the game focusing her whole world around her, she was really starting to wonder if she was falling. Even though Shane was completely focused now, Coach Long was getting different, cruely different. He was always making Shane run harder, jump higher, perform better, and if she didn’t meet his demands she’d get screamed at in the face, and forced to run more. Even though it may seem like seriousness Shane was getting un-easy at his dictatorship.
Central High Gym ( Monday Practice )
Practice was almost over, the team was in the process of running suicides. Then Coach Long blew his whistle and said
" Alright, practice is over, see you tomorrow "
Everyone sighed and headed for the locker room. Then Coach Long blew his whistle again and yelled
" Everyone except Shane ! "
Shane turned around in disbelief, he was really starting to push it now and she didn’t like it.
Carmen was watching from the sidelines, her practice had too ended and her and Jenny were walking off
" He’s pushing her too hard, she can only take so much " Carmen said angerly
" Carmen, it’s okay, Shane can handle it " Jenny soothed
" I know … but if she gets hurt i’m going to kick some ass ! "
" Woah, woah, down girl ! Just trust me she’ll be fine "
" If you say so … " Carmen said still worried
Shane was on the baseline preparing to run, waiting for Coach Long to finish talking to the JV coach. Carmen and Jenny walked by to get into the locker room. Carmen ran a hand along Shane’s back
" See you in the car baby ? " Carmen asked
" Yeah, wait for me, it won’t be long " Shane said
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(27 votes, average: 3.56 out of 5)
i like where this seems to be headed but the coach was a little extreme.
More More more please post soon I want to see whats going to go down
fuck i need the rest of this story like right now im hooked.. god if only carmen and jenny really knew.. hope it all works out.. anyways before i start to ramble. i love your fic and can’t wait for your next post.. :) pps
If this come out the coach is dead meat I’m very interested in sports and a very smart person said” If you are a male teaching Women sports, Treat them like ladies and work them like men and dont abuse them you will have a winning team .thanks
I am with student140, I think that thing with the couch was a bit extreme, but is good stuff anyways.
The psycho coach was a little too much for me. I’d like a happy Sharmen ending please…
I agree with student 140 and ORIANA1010. It was way too exaggerated, but I like this story anyway. PPS
i love this stiry but this post i dunno, i didnt mike the coach and i really didnt like the fact shane did it, shane needs to tell carmen and fight the coach it isnt right and this is high school right vuz it just seems a bit extreme for high schoolpps