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Love Is A Fragile Thing 18
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You might want to breath Tina.
She let out the breath she was holding in.
You all right?
Yeah
Okay, now just follow me They began moving together in unison. Move your feet from side to side, back, now forward, good, just like that
Tina wasnt sure how much more she could take of this. She looked over to Dani and Kelly and it looked like they were kind of having a hard time. Tina knew that Kelly always had to think things through before she actually did something. So she knew she was having a hard time because she was thinking about it too much. It looked like Dani was kind of getting frustrated. She turned her attention back to Bette.
You okay?
Yeah
They didnt talk much but looked immensely into one anothers eyes, never missing a beat. The music was fast tempo. There were women dancing all around. Some knowing what they were doing but others not but they were having a good time anyway. Bette was beginning to remember all the times her and Tina danced. Some was here at the Planet and some were at the beach, the house. All these thoughts were beginning to reappear. Then she began to put her thoughts to what was happening now. Okay just keep your cool, youve done this millions of times, just go with the flow.
They began moving their hips freely, none of the dance moves they were doing looked forced at all, it was as if theyve been dancing partners for a very long time. It was beginning to get hot now, other women were beginning to pay more attention to them than their own partners.
Oh ***** look at them Shane swallowed hard.
Hey ladies, sorry I didnt come over earlier She stopped what she was saying when she noticed all their attention was on the dance floor. She looked around. Oh hey theres Dani andKelly? What thewhere is Bette (looking) where is T(at that moment she saw the two of them dancing like there was no one around) What the *****?
She looked over to Dani and Kelly and they had no clue to what was going on, they were too consumed in what they were trying to do.
Bette placed her hands on Tinas hips and felt a little jolt come from her touch, Tina did the same, but she pulled her closer. Bette was surprised but went with the flow anyway. Bette knew the song was almost over so she wanted to do one last move. She grabbed Tinas right hand with hers, held it up, twirled her a couple of times, and for the finish she tipped her back. Everyone began clapping their hands, which brought them back to reality. Bette brought her back up and they both smiled and thanked everyone for their applause. They smiled but deep down they were both terrified, they couldnt remember the last time they danced like that. The four of them walked back to the table.
See? I told you it would be fun, everyone was clapping for the two of you.
Tell me Bette, where in the ***** did you learn to dance like that?
Bette just blushed. Well Dani and I took some salsa lessons. We figured we try something new and different so thats where we learned to dance. She looked over to Tina.
Yeah but Bette was always the fast learner. She just smiled. Everyone began talking again trying to let go of the small tension in the air. The girls knew what they saw but wasnt about to bring it up to either one of them. So they just kept it to themselves.
Bette began to feel guilty. *****, what the ***** am I doing? I hurt Tina once and I cant do the same to Dani. What was I thinking? God this is crazy.
It was getting late. Everyone went home all consumed of thoughts of the night. What the ***** happened tonight?
TBC…
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WOW THE STRONG CHEMISTRY BETWEEN TINA & BETTE IS JUST BEAUTIFUL..I DO WANT BETTE & TINA TOGETHER ,BUT POOR DANI & KELLY…PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE POST SOON
God I hope your not going to break Dani and Bette up. It’s been to great of a story so far just to turn it into all the other ‘and bette and tina live happily ever after’ stories
Kelly and Dani should fall in love…….then leave everything open for B&T :)
THis is more like it, please let things make sense again and bring bette back to tina!!!!!!!!!!!!
You’re making this tough. Want to see Bette and Tina back together, but feel bad for Dani.
You got yourself (and us) in this. Now, how are you going to get us out? I hope you can be as graceful as their dance!
As everyone guessed, Bette is still in love with Tina, and Tina is in love with her, let usa see them back together, put Kelly and Danni together, as this should be a better pairing, loving the story, post the next chapter soon.
I’m with Shaz as well. Thanks for updating.
yeah…count me in with shaz, bette&tinaforever and focus!
I am with Shaz as well.
Ok more dancing! I’m liking this, hey BnT are just ment to be together, so do what you have to do!
DITTO! SHAZ thank you Please post soon.
Grreeeaaattt update. I’ve just watched the movie “Let it be me” with JB and in the movie she does the salsa – wow (wipes away the drool). So I could just picture her doing the dance with Tina – va va voom.
Great story…..Crazy Love ..that is what these two are in!!!!Hope they get together soon…
Ditto on what momo said…Thanks
Bette and Tina still have feelings for each other, the chemistry is still there. This is going to get interesting.
Thanks Rasperry, looking forward to the next chapter.
What can I say. You know we love T & B together. Loved the story line, but gotta go with Shaz.
dute do you pretend FIX this nightmare when?? i dont know..in 10 yaers???
Hey Razz….so much love between them. So much pain, hurt, and so many new obstacles. I wonder how you will resolved this?? And what is up with Dani? Having her woman go dance with her ex-wife? I wouldn’t have done that? What was she thinking? Well, i guess she might feel secure enough in Bette’s love to think nothing of it…but I just hope she doesn’t get hurt. She seems so kind and loving. You’ve really created a likeable character in Dani. And Kelly was way out of line with her “pimp mama” comment. I can’t wait to see where this goes. Thanks for another great post.
Yep I’m with Shaz, they should get back together. Good chapter, post soon. Thanks!