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Love Is A Fragile Thing 20
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Tell me what?
Oh, I just hired Lara, you remember her right? Lara Perkins the woman Dana was dating.
Yeah, of course, wow thats great. Im glad you found some help. How long has she been working there?
Oh Im guessing a couple of months now. She was just working in the evenings first, then she started working in the afternoons. I imagine she likes it, I let her deal with the menu and stuff like that, since she knows more about the food than I do.
There was a beeping noise on Bettes line letting her know she has another call waiting for her.
Hey Kit, I have another call on the other line, hold on a sec. She answers the other line. This is Bette Porter
Bette?
Baby? Whats wrong?
I think its time, my water just broke.
OMG, hold on babe, Ill be right there.
Bette Im worried, its early.
No baby, its fine, remember youre having twins. Dee Ill be right there, hold on. She hangs up and speaks to Kit again. Kit, I got to go, Dees water just broke.
Really?
Really
OMG, Ill be right there, Im going to take the next flight out.
Okay, I really need to go now, see you later, bye
Bye They hang up.
On her way out she makes another call.
Mom? Its timewell see you there.
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When they got to the hospital Bette had to fill out some paper work while Dion went with her daughter.
Once she was finished she went into the delivery room and went straight to Danis side.
How you doing babe?
Im doing good. She had sweat coming down her forehead and Bette wipes it off. Im guessing we still need a few more ours.
What?
Dani and Dion had to laugh at her expression.
Yes babe a few for hours.
Wow, thats some grand entry.
Bette stop it. It hurts when I laugh.
Sorry Dee. I cant believe this is really happening Right when Dani was going to say something a nurse came in to check on her.
Im sorry, but there can only be one person with the patient.
What? Why?
Im sorry but its hospital policy
What?
Bette its okay, she needs you. She gets up and kisses her daughter on the forehead and she starts walking out. You take care of her now
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GREAT CHAPTER… HOPE THE NEXT ONE IS THAT MUCH BETTER AND TURNS OUT WITH BETTE AND TINA TOGETHER! WRITGE IT SOON CAN HARDLY WAIT
Oh man total bumer, Dani is dead i liked her…what is Bette going to do stay in Sydney and raise the twins or go back to L.A..
Thanks for the update Rasperry.
I knew that would happen. I’m a TiBette shipper but I don’t want them together. Let Tina stay with Kelly and get them to drop the delusion that Bette is Becky’s mother. Btw who is Becky with? Tina has no problems being away from her for a few weeks?
It’s a great story and a sad chapter. It seems Bette loved Dani more she has loving Tina. So right now it’s very difficult to imagine Bette and Tina together again. Or it’ll be take a long time. And Pan is right who is Becky with ? And what about Kelly ?
Thank you.
We have a rule in tech support: Never break a good computer to fix a broken one. In other words, if you have a computer that works, you don’t take it apart to get parts to try and fix one that doesn’t work.
While I really adore the idea of Bette and Tina together, I was saddened to see Dani die. She and Bette had a relationship that worked…
OMG! I was so happy to see an update and then so sad when Dani died. Can’t wait to see where you take us from here. Please don’t keep us waiting so long.
That sucked, i mean i guess. Bette was finally happy and moved on. She had a gorgeous wife that she was in love with and her and Tina were turning into friends. Gosh that was going to be a great story. But instead u called of Dani in favor of turning the story the story into the typical B/T story.
That is so said but absolutely wonderful the way it is written. I can’t help it either. I want Tibette back.
great to see your back another great chapter
THAT WAS SO SAD.I LOVED BETTE & DANI,I ALSO LOVE BETTE & TINA..FAB.CHAPTER PLEASE POST SOON
Razz, Razz, Razz….you broke my heart, babe. This was really sad for me. I really liked Danielle. She was good to Bette and good for Bette. You created a very likable character and though I thought you might kill her off, as the story developed I thought you might actually keep her around. I just feel so sad that she had to go. And the anagram name choices of Aidan and Nadia….that was brilliant. Love those names. Those are like the best names I’ve seen on the site. I also would like to know where Becky is.
You are too good of a writer now Razz. You have created a world where Dani was a very likable character and where I had come to really accept Tina and Bette truly as friends. You brought their relationship around even though I was resistant to the idea that these ex-loves could ever truly be just “friends”, your writing painted a picture that was too hard to resist. And because they are such good friends now, it will be hard for me to see them now become lovers (if that’s where you are headed) But if you do make this creative decision, I’m sure you will guide us down to the path with your lovely words and make such a reconciliation believable, heartfelt, and natural.
I’m curious to see how Bette will cope with double motherhood on her own. And how Dion would react to a reconciliation between B&T. Can’t wait for the next post. Love it as always!!
Been away for a bit and just read all the chapters i missed…. all i can say is that you’re damned if you do and you’re damned if you dont! The story has been brill throughout, i love it. I have got used to a story where b&t arent together because it is so well written….My story reading is in your capable hands…
whwre are you Raz? I miss this story!
Wow this is very sad, I know we all wait for Bette and Tina get back together but I’m sorry to said this, you know you don’t have to kill Dani, I think just let her and Bette be together for a while then they have a problem and Dani don’t want to live with Bette and they get divorce and Bette come back to LA and be with Tina again. I think that way will make 3 of them happy and be friends. Anyway this is your story and I love your story, it’s just sad to see Dani died that’s all. Please post soon to see what’s Bette gonna do next, thank you. Great chapter!
Oh poor Bette and poor Dion too. Man am I sure going to miss Dani. But life moves on it might take some time but they will get through it. Loving it!!
i screamed a YES when i read that Dani died, ok i know i’m an a**hole, i didnt feel sorry for Dani as much as Bette broke my heart, poor little thing.. now dont rush Bette into Tina’s arms, i love how slow u make things.. ;)
It’s sad that Dani died. It’s hard for kids to grow up not knowing a parent. Especially one who gave birth to you. To tell you the truth, I don’t think Bette was in love with Dani. I think Bette grew to love Dani as time moved on. I feel like their relationship was so rushed. They meet, Bette moves to Australia, they date then get married and then BAM they have kids. I honestly don’t think they would have lasted long. I think eventually Bette would have realized that she was just going through the motions. I feel like Bette got with Dani just to have that perfect family life she wanted and didn’t get with Tina. I just feel like Bette has been lying to herslef the whole time she’s been with Dani to try and forget what she messed up with Tina. Of course Bette is not going to be thinking about getting back together with Tina at this moment but I am certainly looking forward to seeing where you take their relationship. Maybe Bette doesn’t move back to L.A. What if Tina moves to Australia to help Bette with the kids or Kit and Tina move there. I have enjoyed your story although it has been heart breaking to see Bette move on and have a life with someone else. Post soon
Oh, how sad was that? I knew that Dani was going to die in labor! How else was it going too work out for Bette and Tina to get together again, right? Dani was so sweet and Bette really did love her and all, but…anyway… I’m glad to see that Bette is going to be able to give the babies all the love that they deserve! Hopefully she’ll move back to LA where she’ll have all the support of her friends and family. I am looking forward to your next post!
that was very sad but i have to say that i´m happy cuzz now Bette and Tina has a future i know that a shame to say that but what can i do with my “TiBette heart” the all thing begin bad and ends worse i think Bette will go back to LA with Tina and take care of all the 3 children i hope so…thanks
Sorry about poor Dani, but I hope to see what is going to happen, especially with Bette and Tina, they will hopefully end up together. Looking forward to your next chapter.
K
Very sad but excellent chapter. Love it.
Wow, that was intense, hope it goes well, The wheels in my head are already turning on what lie ahead for B/T. Post soon.
Oh you killed off Dani :( How is poor Bette going to cope
i knew where you were going and couldn’t wait till you hava an opening for bette and tina to get abck together again…but my heart broke when dani died…
grat writing and excellant story… and i can’t wait to see where you go with this… i know tina will step up and help bette and that will bring them back together …please continue
I know that dani had to go that made me cry
ms ras we are waiting for the rest of your story……… been way over a month!!!!!! please write soon we miss this a lot……..
Hey Rasperry – we MISS your story.