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    Love Is A Fragile Thing 29

    Story written on February 28, 2006 by raspberry.
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    Story Shortlink: https://lesfan.com/?p=59763
    Author Notes:

    Melvin passes on and there is an unexpected visitor.

     

    Kit and Tina saw the two and they knew something was up when Bette just stood there frozen. Then when they saw Bette crying and the woman hug her they both went over to see what was wrong, but Shane and Alice were there at her side first.

     

    “Bette, Bette, excuse me ma’am?” Shane cut through and got a hold of Bette. Maxine stood there crying into her hands.

     

    “Excuse me may I ask who you are?” Kit was a little upset.

     

    “II’m sorryI justI just wanted to see her,” she says as she starts turning then walks out.

     

    “Kit go check on Bette and I’ll handle this okay?”

     

    Tina goes out to see the lady before she took off. She looks left and sees the lady standing at her car crying. She quickly walks over.

     

    “Miss?” She didn’t get an answer. “Miss?”

     

    Finally she looks up and sees Tina.

     

    “I’m sorry to bother you people, I’ll be on my way.” She turns to get in her car.

     

    “Wait”

     

    Maxine stands there with her back to Tina.

     

    “I’m sorry I just wanted to see her that’s all. I’m still not sure why.”

     

    “I don’t mean to be rude but who are you?”

     

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    Back inside

     

    “Alice can you get her a glass of water please?”

     

    “Sure” She walks out and is met by a few people.

     

    “Hey is she going to be okay?”

     

    “Yeah she’s going to be fine. It’s just hard for the family right now.”

     

    “Can you just let them know that our prayers are with them? Some of us are just going to go now.”

     

    “Yes I will let them know and thanks again for coming and for your support. Have a dafe trip home.”

     

    “We will.”

     

    Alice goes to the bar and grabs a glass of water and goes back into the office.

     

    “Here you go.”

     

    “Thanks Alice.”

     

    “Here Bette drink some of this.”

     

    Bette takes a drink and takes a deep breath.

     

    “What’s wrong who is that woman?”

     

    “Kit it’s just too hard.” She starts crying again.

     

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    Outside

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    14. I think you better get the next chapter posted ASAP. This is a total trip! I’m looking forward to hearing Maxine’s side of the story where Melvin is concerned. Who will Bette turn to for comfort? Tina? They have some serious talking to do that’s for sure.Please post soon!

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