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Love Makes A Family Chapter 11
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“It’s an art Babe. You’re an artist and it’s definitely an art!” Tina looked back at Bette. “You mean everything to me Bette. You do know that don’t you?”
“YeahI know Sweetheart. I know what you mean. I feel the same way about you. You are everything to me too. I can’t do this without you.” Bette kissed Tina again. She took her hand and opened the door. “Here goes nothing T.”
Bette and Tina went to the kitchen where Jackie and Melvin were sitting at the table drinking coffee and laughing hysterically.
“Soummmm.Mom.Dad?” Tina figured it made sense for her to break the ice and start the conversation. She knew that Bette would have a difficult time talking to Melvin and Jackie. After all, it was difficult to talk about it with her.
“What is it Tina? Is there something wrong?” Jackie looked at Bette and Tina with concern.
Bette looked at Tina and then at Jackie and finally at Melvin. “There is something we need to tell you.”
“Oh my GodSunshinewhat is it?” Jackie looked very concerned. She looked at Bette and reached out her hand to her. “Come here and sit.”
Bette sat next to Jackie. “There’s something wrong with one of the babies.”
Melvin looked at Bette. He looked extremely confused. “What are you talking about Bette? Those babies are all perfect. There is nothing wrong with any of my grandchildren.”
Bette sighed and looked at Tina who sat next to her. Tina spoke hesitantly again. “Wellone of the tripletshas.”
Jackie stared at Tina. “There is nothing wrong with any of them Tina.”
“Yes there is. Dante’ has significant hearing loss in both ears Mom.” Tina spit it out and then waited. Bette hung her head as if waiting to be crucified by Melvin or Jackie.
Melvin spoke next. “How can that behe looks so perfect.” Melvin shook his head back and forth in disbelief.
“Daddy?” Bette looked at Melvin with tears in her eyes. “They didn’t notice until right before he left the hospital. They said he wasn’t responding to noises like the other babies in the nursery. They did some kind of basic testing on him and he isn’t deafbut he does have significant impairment.
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Such a beautiful story and chapter as always from you.
LISA… you know how much i love this story… and ilene can go to hell… just keep writing bette and tina like this… thanks…later baby
PHEW — as ever that was just superb —
nothing is wrong with B&T together always, loving each other…it’s just perfect
nice
“I don’t see nothin’ wrong with a little bump n grin” Great job Lisa, I knew that both Janice and Melvin would be supportive. Maybe IC & Co. can read along and take notes :o)
Awesome like always! I miss the all the kids awake though ;) lol
thank you everyone. shortyw -hmmm. i’d love to meet with them. believe it or not i could write alot of angst too. i just love seeing bette and tina happy. i prefer speed bumps to mountains as far as conflict for them. unfortunately the show isn’t mine. it’s theirs. i wouldn’t begin to tell them what to write – i’ll just keep writing my stuff and shake my head with the rest of the bette and tina fans who are unhappy with the plot twists. i also think the show writing is a reflection of the creator’s life…i hate to say it – mine is as well. i guess i just deal with it differently. i appreciate the compliment. you guys are all great. Lisa
u need to set up a meeting with illeneand tell her u want to be one ot the writers on the show because u write better than they do.
I love this story so much. Looking forward to more chapters.
Damn IC & Co.!!! :( At least I’ve got you to count on, Lisa. You’re always good for B&T happiness and loving. Thank you!
lisa, thank you. IC and her writers can do whatever. ill still watch but my ff heart goes to you girls that give us such enjoyment.so…. with those thoughts in my head, i now will go to church. teehee. its was beautiful and thanks.
Damn, what a pleasure it would be to live inside your mind!!! You have such a talent for writing stories that can go from heart-wrenching to such beautiful love and make us (well, I can only speak for myself) feel/experience it all. I have to say — I was speechless and even my fingers stopped moving in the beginning — I think my heart stopped beating for a few minutes. Then, as I got to the end — My heart just about burst with the love these two have for one another & their entire family.