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Love & Pride chapter 68
“Well I kind of love it actually “
“I gathered “
“You have no idea what that thing is doing to me “
“It’s called a teddy “
“Whatever – it could also be called a clit twitcher – hell T – oh God “
“Would you like to touch the material ?”
“Would I ? “
Tina nodded “ If you would like to touch the material you will enjoy the feeling “
“I am still getting over the sensational sight – if I touch it I might just become a puddle on the
floor and that would be such a shame “
“Yeah cos I would have to ring for an ambulance and I don’t think you would like anyone else to see me dressed like this ? “
“I would have to kill anyone who looked at you – either that or gorge their eyes out- this sight is mine “
“I guessed you would be protective of it “
“Wow Tina “
“I gathered that “
“Have told you that you are incredibly beautiful – wow honey – this is some gift for me”
“How about you take a few photos of me like this ?”
Bette’s smile became even bigger “ Really ? “
“I trust you babe – but just for the record – if the rest of the band see a photo of me dressed like this my anger will not be fake — do I make myself very plain ?”
“Very – you know I respect you too much “
“I know that – what do you think ? Would a photograph of me dressed in this teddy keep you happy while you are revising ?”
“Who says I would get any work done ?”
“Well you could keep the picture in your drawer and look after it when you have done a certain amount of revision “
Bette smiled “I really am not sure how I would draw that on my revision chart “
Tina raised an eyebrow warning Bette that any hint that she was thinking about revision would cause a serious piece of damage to her health.
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Tina in a teddy…*dies!* Hearing that your sister got hauled in is NOT a fun wake-up call.
Well, that’s not fair indeed, but it does look pretty bad for Helena this time, and as you put it yourself Ally, Helena really seems to have the knack of being in the wrong place at the wrong time. Anyways, I hope counsellor Kennard is going to be able to come up with some luminous idea for Helena not to get a criminal record, a “rap sheet” as they say in the US. Could it be that Helena was trapped ? Or maybe that she got arrested while trying to help Alice stay out of trouble ? Could this actually all be Alice’s fault ? You have certainly piqued my curiosity, Ally, and I’m really looking forward to reading your next chapter. Thanks !
Way to stick up for your sister Bette! It was obviously all Alice’s idea getting so drunk you can’t think straight is never a good idea. Hopefully B&T can deflect some of peggy’s wrath from Hel. PPS
I can’t wait to see what happened to let the gang in jail!!
great update….
Hey Ally, as long as you have a good chunk of the gang in jail (or gaol if you prefer), why not borrow a page from those 50s B “women in prison” movies? You know, sadistic bull-dyke matron, hard-boiled older woman who calls the shots and has enforcers at her command. I loved those movies! Peggy would be a welcome sight after that! Oh well, what ever way you do it, Helena is in some deep shit.
Drama, thy name is ally emmerson. Keep it flowing.
Helena, Helena, Helena……what are we going to do with her?! She does get herself into some situations. I hope Peggy won’t be too hard on her. Ohhhh, I love Tina in a black lacy teddy!
Ally, Helena is so in deep shit!!! I just hope Peggy does not push her to far. B&T are so damn cute. Thanks PPS
Really wonderful update – poor Helena not a good mother to disappoint, darling.
Hey Ally…This wasn’t an NC-17, but still very sexy. Love the way you write. I think it’s the humor mixed with the sexy banter that make all your stories so wonderful. Thanks for the visual of Tina in the “clit twitcher”!!
Hello Ally, Good to have you back with this terrific tale. Boy, it looks like Helena is way in the doghouse with Peggy. Can’t wait to see what Helena and the gals have been up to. Guess, college hi jinx don’t wash with the local constabulary. I really feel for Bette as she is split between disappointment at Helena for getting into trouble again and fear at what punishment Peggy will dole out. Yes, Helena has been stupid but does she deserves Peggy’s wraith. Time will tell. As Aaways you astound me with the dialogue and emotions each scene emparts. Loved the honesty of Bette and Tina’s love. It just sparkles on screen. Just perfect. Thank you so much for coming back and posting more of this fabulous fan fiction. It is a joy to behold. Your Loyal Fan.
Hello Ally, Good to have you back with this terrific tale. Boy, it looks like Helena is way in the doghouse with Peggy. Can’t wait to see what Helena and the gals have been up to. Guess, college hi jinx don’t wash with the local constabulary. I really feel for Bette as she is split between disappointment at Helena for getting into trouble again and fear at what punishment Peggy will dole out. Yes, Helena has been stupid but does she deserves Peggy’s wraith. Time will tell. As Aaways you astound me with the dialogue and emotions each scene emparts. Loved the honesty of Bette and Tina’s love. It just sparkles on screen. Just perfect. Thank you so much for coming back and posting more of this fabulous fan fiction. It is a joy to behold. Your Loyal Fan.
Hello Ally, Good to have you back with this terrific tale. Boy, it looks like Helena is way in the doghouse with Peggy. Can’t wait to see what Helena and the gals have been up to. Guess, college hi jinx don’t wash with the local constabulary. I really feel for Bette as she is split between disappointment at Helena for getting into trouble again and fear at what punishment Peggy will dole out. Yes, Helena has been stupid but does she deserves Peggy’s wraith. Time will tell. As Aaways you astound me with the dialogue and emotions each scene emparts. Loved the honesty of Bette and Tina’s love. It just sparkles on screen. Just perfect. Thank you so much for coming back and posting more of this fabulous fan fiction. It is a joy to behold. Your Loyal Fan.
Hello Ally, Good to have you back with this terrific tale. Boy, it looks like Helena is way in the doghouse with Peggy. Can’t wait to see what Helena and the gals have been up to. Guess, college hi jinx don’t wash with the local constabulary. I really feel for Bette as she is split between disappointment at Helena for getting into trouble again and fear at what punishment Peggy will dole out. Yes, Helena has been stupid but does she deserves Peggy’s wraith. Time will tell. As Aaways you astound me with the dialogue and emotions each scene emparts. Loved the honesty of Bette and Tina’s love. It just sparkles on screen. Just perfect. Thank you so much for coming back and posting more of this fabulous fan fiction. It is a joy to behold. Your Loyal Fan.
B&T are hot and sweet. Damn drama coming and hope its not Helena fault, mayne someone set them up. Anyway please post soon, thanks!
The gang in jail!! Maybe you can write the deleted Alice and Shane (plus Helena) jailhouse scenes from S1 (you know, what they were up to while Bette was wallgasming). I love all three of your stories and am always pleased when I see that a new chapter has been posted. As for the NC-17 stuff, Shakespeare didn’t write any either (though you can’t completely discount those rumors about sales of elicit parchments in a dark alley behind the Globe Theatre….).
Interesting. Bette needs to see things from another perspective. Two arrests while Mommy is funding your educationa and giving you everything? Peggy should come down hard. Not to mention if she were in America she would have a really hard time passing the character portion of the bar. Really hard. Even if Helena didn’t do anything she needs to keep better company. PPS.
uh oh, dont want to be hel. peggy in a rage id like to see but not a hel. thanks.