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Love & Pride – chapter 70
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“I couldn’t sleep with anyone but you “ Bette said
“Pleased to hear it – if you even THINK about it just remember that I have a vicious temper . I make Helena look like a two day old kitten. I would kill you Porter “
Bette pulled her body up the bed and kissed Tina softly so they could both taste her juices.
Tina’s eyes sparkled
“Would I kill you Bette ?”
“Yes you would “ Bette smiled “ and it would never happen – do you think I want to taste any woman but you ? I cannot imagine what another woman tastes like “
Tina rubbed Bette’s face “If you did – I would hope it was a woman you loved – not just someone you wanted to fuck “
“Not going to happen “ Bette replied
“I hope so “ Tina said “ I just don’t know how bad the pain would feel if I wasn’t beside you night after night “
“Not going to happen “
“You are beautiful – you could have anyone you wanted – any woman would say yes to you asking her to sleep with you “
“Not going to happen “
As Bette looked down at Tina a song came on the radio – Bette smiled
“This is what I feel for you Tina “
In you I’ve found a story I want to keep hearing
In you I see all colours
Not just black and white
In you I find a reason and hope for all dreamers
You are my fill
You are my supply of love and pride
That’s what my heart yearns for now – love and pride.
Next door Helena heard the same song coming from her radio – she rolled over and clutched the discarded pillow case that was her reminder of the love that she had lost. All she could feel was pain at her own grief and envy that Bette and Tina had something so perfect. All she had wanted was her own piece of happiness and all she was left with was a pain that she feared would never go away
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God I am Helena. Don’t tell anybody or you’d ruin my reputation as the worst Bette Porter addict ever!
Loved the sweet Bette and Tina stuff. They are the heart of the story. I don’t sympathize with Helena over her drunken exploits but the girlfriend thing sucks. However, she needs to just let stuff happen. She can’t try and force love just because she sees it with Bette and Tina. While they are really good friends to her.. I wonder if it wouldn’t be better for her if she didn’t live with them. PPS.
I really feel for Helena. Just when she is getting her self together. Life bite’s her in the butt. This sounds so familiar…..Hey it’s a bit like my life. lol
damn, i like helena. i feel bad for her and still for you. cheating, bad, bad, bad. thanks.
Poor Helena. Helena’s recital of what she knows about B & T’s sex life made me laugh but then think about my neighbors. Uh oh. Bette’s biggest flaw is that she is a sore loser? No wonder Helena is intimidated.
geeze louise, this version of Helena is like Bette in season 1, 2, and 3. one poo sandwich after another. When will you give her a break Ally? Hope your version of Helena is gonna be a strong one and not attempt to take the easy way out. Looking forward for an update.
Very very good! i love this chapter and i feel sorry about Helena cause i can imagine how difficult could be for her to see B&T happy and know that she cannot have that but just for a period of time caus her will find her perfect match it’s just take sometime. I realized either Laurel should have son clons or many of us will share her! take care!
Hey Ally, about the blone “Laurel” you never know what will happen, maybe she is close or in frond of you, you never see, well she is out there and you will meet her one day soon. Well take care my friend! Poor Helena, her life is drama and living hell, sad for her to see B&T happy and so in love. Well hope she will find her mate soon. Anyway please post soon, thanks!
A fresh wound is painful, but in time Helena, as all who lose in love, will realize that she’s better off for the loss of one unsuitable for loving her.
Oh I believe you on the Laurel bit. I like to think my own “Laurel” is out there too. :D
Poor Hel. How bad can it get… But they say everything happens for the best ;-) Great update Ally.
HEY Ally, Another fabulous chapter from your fine fingers. I just love the depth and honesty that you embody this terrific tale with. Bette and Tina are near perfect but both still have flaws. I adore the moments when Tina and Helena talk about real relationship and intimacy issues. They manage to speak from the heart. Bette is often a topic of conversation so it is wonderful to have her sister and lover discuss her. Tina sees the real Bette and is able to show that side to Helena. Now I can’t wait to see what mommy dearest will do. Please continue this must read melodrama soon. Much gratitude from Your Loyal Fan.
Ouch. :( I really feel bad for Helena. It’s one thing to be a fuck-up, but to overcome that only to get knocked back down again for one reason or another just freaking well sucks.
Poor Helena. She’ll find someone too eventually. As for you Ms. Ally, I will wish for you a blonde with hazel eyes. Great chapter babe!