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Love Revisited – Coming Home Part 68
and placed her soaked fingers to Tina’s lips, gently pressing down in a request to enterand then in a trance Bette watched as Tina savored each drop.
“My god, baby”
Their mutual groans fanned the bonfires in the core of their beings.
Bette slid to Tina’s side; looking into one another’s eyes they entered each other simultaneously; their hot, sweating bodies moving in unison to the rhythm of the sounds of their fingers moving in and outthe pressure each put on their throbbing ***** taking them to the point of exploding.
and now Tina’s body began its trip into the stratosphere, stopping only long enough to take Bette along with her. They were joined as the launch switch was flipped which pushed the explosive rockets of their climax through the outer rim of control in their minds
desperately trying to keep their eyes locked as this ***** ripped through themand there it was, the moment in time when they saw pass between them the traded promise of trust – of love – and of hope.
Bette rolled on top of Tina so each could feel their hearts beating. She nestled her face on Tina’s shoulder.
For a moment Tina cradled Bette’s head and ran her fingers through her hair. She spoke a selfish prayer to herself and fought to not let a tear fallwhen it’s time for the final parting, please let me be the first to go – I could not bear a future without feeling the beating of her heart next to mine.
A light wind caused a stir of candlelight and starlight to pass across the length of these lovers covering them with a delicate blanket of golden and soft white light beams, weaved together with the words, “do not speak of parting, your hearts are as one – your love will transcend time.
Tina held Bette tightly as they both lay still letting their bodies settle back to their normal rhythms. She could feel Bette’s lips and her warm breath on her shoulder.
“Baby?”
“Um..yes, T.”
“Please know, through it all, you were – you are my everything.”
Tina felt the warm tear of acknowledgment on her skin.
She looked up into the expanse of the night sky and watched as the worlds of planets and stars twinkled and gleamed noting their existence in the Universe.
and Tina knew in her heart and mind that her existence in this Universe revolved around the world she held in her arms
Her Bette.
TBC
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“No. Ooh, you’re so butch sometimes, Kennard.”…..“I’ve got to air out the flannel shirt sometimes, baby.
“Je veux vous aimer, je veux vous lécher… Je veux que vous mettiez vos doigts à l’intérieur de moi… Je vous veux tellement.
I don’t know what Bette said, but I’m turned on – (pushing Tina out the way ~ Come Here!)
…and now Tina’s body began its trip into the stratosphere, stopping only long enough to take Bette along with her.
I don’t think Bette is the only one that went along….(QQ @ u horny FF readers)
RC….another fantastic chapter….so HOT I think I broke a tooth!
I am with FIREFLY7 on that.NOW I MUST TAKE AN EARLY LUNCH..THANKS FOR THE GREAT LOVING BETWEEN OUR FAVORITE GIRLS…
wow wow wow!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
wow wow wow!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
this sucks too
Simply sublime, rc. Thanks!
OMG! That was fabulous! I was so moved. I feltthe emotion. Thnak you, it was beautiful. Post again soon.
weaved together with the words, “do not speak of parting, your hearts are as one – your love will transcend time.
AHEM!!!!
That was so ******* good…….I think I’ll be reading that a few times…
oh yeah…. WOW… enough said…
I think is the first time I left a comment so first of all what a sweet chapter you sharing with us Thank you I love the hole story .
OH MY GOD!…That was truly BEAUTIFUL!! Damn RC…I’m breathless and speakless. Totally awesome.
snQQpy, dayum girl. i dont know wether to laugh, cry or take a shower.
i guess ill do all three. rc. shit. that was so good. my heart is sooo feeling it. it had everything.
how can I thank you for something so beautiful?
very very romantic and sexy.
That was beautiful and sexy at the same time. I have to admit that is the first time that I’ve read your story. I’m going to go to the beginning and catch up over the weekend.
that was absolutely incredible – I am tearing up as I write this – thankyou
To echo Van — Double WOW !!
That was beautiful :)
One word…..WOW!!!!!!!!!!!!!
That was so beautiful :). You captured their love and happiness for each other beautifully.
Absolutely BEAUTIFUL!!!!. more please.
WOWZA…!!!!!!!!!!!
OH MY GOD!!!OMFG!!!!!!!! That Was the Best Love Story I’ve read in a long time and I’ve been reading quite a few of these fan fictions and message board stories lately!!! Were in heavens name did all that come from??? You are indeed a true romantic. You must be a beautiful lover. If you are not taken arc please let me know. I am in awe of you and your writing!!!I am Breathless right now!!!!!!!!!!!
Why Oh Why must I read this stuff at work. Hmmph. Beautiful.
Stunning and beautiful. You have a gift for romance, pleast contiue.
Arce,
What a chapter!
All of the love and lust languishing on the screen.
Bette’s acceptance that she had to open up and let Tina in shows just how much these characters have moved on together.
Then the hotness that was astounding. My screen is still steamed up after that sexy, sensuous and sizzling scene. Bette and Tina united in the most primal and powerful passion moved my world too.
Thank you for this wondrous diversion from all the devious developments.
Awaiting your next post with some moist areas of my own.
Thank you,
Your Loyal Fan.
Exquisite.
OMG…WOW. I can’t find the words…