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    Lover in the Dark: Chapter 11

    Story written on May 25, 2014 by phacey.
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    Story Shortlink: https://lesfan.com/?p=85662
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    “No its okay, I told you I’m not going to leave you here” “Don’t worry about me; I’ll be fine, besides I have my bodyguard here” Bette smiled and looked at Alice “That’s right birthday girl, go get your birthday gift” Alice teased Shane smiled “Alright you guys, but Bette I’ll be back ok?” “Sure”

    “No its okay, I told you I’m not going to leave you here”
    “Don’t worry about me; I’ll be fine, besides I have my bodyguard here” Bette smiled and looked at Alice
    “That’s right birthday girl, go get your birthday gift” Alice teased
    Shane smiled “Alright you guys, but Bette I’ll be back ok?”
    “Sure”
    Bette’s eyes followed Shane as she walked towards the pretty Latina; and the brunette watched as Shane worked her charm on the pretty disk jockey. She turned and saw Alice whispering something on Tasha’s ear while Dana was now busy dancing on the floor with a cute blonde girl; she then took a sip on her Blue Margarita. Bette saw several lesbian couples dancing on the floor and she thought how would be like to dance with a woman, suddenly Tina’s face registered in her mind
    “Seems our friends are quite busy don’t you think?”
    Bette recognized the accent but nonetheless was quite startled at the sudden sound of the voice
    “Oh gosh Marina you startled me!”
    “Did I?…I didn’t mean it, I’m so sorry”
    Marina’s thick accent mixed with her soft was simply alluring and Bette was not blind to see the interest in those exotic green eyes
    “That’s okay; I’m not really used to this kind of place to be honest”
    “So you are a virgin?”

    “I’m sorry what?”
    Marina laughed “I said you are a virgin when it comes to lesbian clubs?”
    “Yes” the brunette shyly admitted
    “That’s okay there’s always a first”
    “I guess so”
    “Let me make it up to you then”
    “Oh no no, no need, really!”
    But Marina heard none of Bette’s replies; she grabbed the brunette’s right hand and started walking to the dance floor
    “What are we going to do?”
    “Nous allons danser”
    Bette knew Marina uttered something but she didn’t know what the meaning was; although she was quite hesitant she just followed the club owner who seemed to be leading her to the dance floor
    “Pardon me?”
    Marina suddenly stopped and faced the brunette and said in a very sexy voice “We are going to dance”
    Bette gasped when Marina spun her around so her back now facing the stunning owner of the club, Marina’s hand encircled Bette’s waist. The club owner started swaying her body to the beat of the music and so did Bette.
    “Is this how you bring a woman to the dance floor?”
    A sexy smirk showed on Marina’s face “No not really, I only do it with a beautiful woman like you Ms. Porter”
    Bette never danced with a woman before and most especially with a sensual and gorgeous woman like Marina Ferrer and if she was honest with herself she enjoyed the attention. Although Marina found Bette very attractive she kept her flirtation at a minimal level as a respect to her friend Shane, but she thought if Bette would come back to her club then she might not restrain herself anymore, beautiful women was her weakness and Bette Porter was one stunningly gorgeous woman.
    The brunette had a wonderful time but thirty minutes later she said goodbye to Shane and her new friends as she had work the following day and she had to drive home.
    “Bette thanks for coming, your presence means so much to me”
    Shane said as she walked Bette to her car in the parking lot
    “You don’t have to say thank you, I had a really great time tonight and your friends are truly wonderful”
    “Yeah and they’re your friends now”
    “Yes I guess so, I hate to leave but I gotta go now, enjoy your night my friend”
    “Yup I will”
    The two friends hugged then Bette went inside her car.
    “Have a safe drive”
    “Thanks and practice safe sex tonight ok?”
    Shane laughed and said “Fuck you Bette!”
    “You wish”
    “Yeah right”
    “Bye”
    “Bye”

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    1. This should have been posted yesterday but the site was having issues for the past few days. In my case the text was incomplete and I didn’t want to just post knowing that there are missing paragraphs but I think it’s already fixed now, well I hope so. It was actually a good thing because I was able to make the chapter a little longer.

      Btw thanks to all who read the previous chapter, silent or not most especially to those who left their comment, you know how I love reading them. I also want to thank those who sent me private messages and wished me to get well soon. I’m okay now, thank God! Just need a lot of rest.

      Want to say hugs to these wonderful women for leaving me a comment

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      Btw the song used was the same song used in the movie The Bridges of the Madison County, I put a link so hope you’ll try listening to it and oh one more thing in case you want to reach me aside from sending me a pm in here you can also check my personal site MyTIBETTEFanFiction below is the link
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      Anyway hope you enjoy this new post and please let me know what you think, thanks a bunch!

    3. Glad you are feeling better! Now, please not “Randall, I’m sorry that we have not been intimate lately —-rather—-I’m sorry, but I’ve discovered that I am really in love with a woman named Bette.” Time for Tina to make her transition up the gene pool from males to females ;-)

    4. The building tension between Tina and Bette is great. Hoping they get a little release soon. Thanks for posting. I love your writing!

    6. Hey, you forgot something to finish, this chapter:)

      I’m glad you are feeling better.

      Tina, so in denial, her feelings for Bette are so strong, nog need to throw them in the garbage stupid woman.

      I pray Tina is so sorry because she is breaking up with Randall.

      Thanks for the update.

    7. Hopefully after tonigh Randall will b history… please please….and Tina will stop her nonsens and she and bette will work there stuff out. Thx for your post. Love it.

    8. Phacey,

      I am glad you are feeling better and happy to see your post. I am ready for Tina to break up with Randall. I wish Bette had stayed to explain to Tina that she only liked Tim as a friend. I worry that Tim will think their outing is a “date” and tell Tina he is dating Bette. Glad that Bette had no attraction to Marina. That tells me that things are getting ready to heat up between Bette & Tina soon, right?

      Keep feeling better so we can find out what happens next!

    10. oh, Phacey! Why always the most exciting section you finished? That’s not fair! :P
      I just love what you’re writing, and yes I admit I was addicted to this story!
      The tension, in Tina’s office was also felt here :D
      the scene in the club I almost cried out: “Don’t Bette and Marina!” but I was glad to see that even though Bette enjoyed the attention, she’s not attracted to Marina.
      Tina finally made ​​up her mind to send Randall warmer climate :) please tell me that Tina did, and broke up with him, please?? :)
      I can not wait a week to the next chapter :) could not be tomorrow? (pleading puppy eyes) :)

    11. Yes byebye randell I realy think tina and bette need to talk away from work were theres no distractions im realy enjoying this story so pps

    12. Okay, Tina has already assumed she is in love, It is a respite that even without knowing what to do with this and jealousy, finally finished with Randall and troubleshoot the governor, if both occur at the end.
      Bette will tell Tina that was with Shane? Complicated to give Shane a snub, but had a very clear request of Tina.
      I loved the birthday scene with the whole gang. You scared me a bit with Marina.
      I can not imagine that after the end of the previous chapter, and the discussion between them in this, Bette will be insensible and then quit on Friday with Tim. But I know does not mean it does not happen, this story still has a lot of intrigue and tension.
      Phasey thank you very much for your effort and I hope you never get sick ; )

    13. Oh finally a new post! Tina is getting a little help from a former client thats good but time for her to get rid of Randall she knows her heart belongs to one Bette Porter. I loved all of their conversations when its just the two of them its full of sexual tension. phacey you had me worried when Marina came into the picture that woman is a hunter! but i feel much better now knowing that Bette is not attracted to her. Take good care of yourself my sweet friend(-;

    15. Thank you Jesus! Glad you are feeling better and we got a update. So, to make up for the time away can you please post again tomorrow. I’m exhausted but happy.. PPS

    16. Hey phacey so happy to see a new post fr you! I dont know if im alone in this but Bette and Tina fighting is so hot and the sexual tension is delicious. Time to say goodbye to Randall i hope he is man enough to accept Tina’s decision. Take good care of yourself phacey because we miss u when you are missing in action.

    17. I hope Tina will not hit the roof when she finds out that Bette went to Shane’s party. I was half expecting Tina to turn up at the bar! What is Tina’s back story? Why does she find it so hard to trust Bette? Do take care and thanks for posting even though you were ill.

    18. I love that Tina is jealous, that make it so much hotter. I hope you put a lil more arguments between them before they get it on, omg the tension will make for the best release when it happens, ..ok ok im just excited you update the chapter I check everyday to see if you posted so im too thrilled. Love this chapter but they need to be LONGER! Lol.. please update soon and glad you feeling well!

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