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Lover in the Dark: Chapter 16
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“Alright boss thanks!”
“You’re most welcome”
“I can almost imagine James smiling from ear to ear at what you just said”
“He’s a great person and a reliable and loyal employee, he deserves it”
“I couldn’t agree with you more…”
Silence
“So are you going out for lunch? Or do you want to order?” asked Bette Tina didn’t answer instead she smirked and threw back the question at the brunette
“What about you?”
Bette raised a brow and smiled “I brought a pack lunch and I’ll eat at the pantry”
“Sounds like a plan, I’m hoping it’s good for more than one person?”
The caramel skinned beauty’s smile turned quite flirtatious “Actually I think it can feed two persons, yeah I think so” the brunette said then nodded
An hour later…
“God Bette I’ve never eaten so many food in my entire life! I don’t even think that I can get up from my seat!”
Bette chuckled “I’m glad you liked it”
The two women opted to eat inside Tina’s office to give them more privacy at the same time it’s the place that had the best view in the entire building.
“Are you kidding me? Their delicious Bette and I must say that you are really a great cook! Have you ever thought about opening a restaurant or a catering business? I’m pretty sure you’re going to be a big hit!”
The brunette blushed “I don’t think I’m ready for a restaurant but maybe a catering business someday” Tina placed her elbow on the table and cupped her chin with one hand
“You know Bette you look so cute when you blush”
Bette’s red cheeks turned even redder “Will you stop looking at me like that” The blonde’s smile grew bigger
“What?”
“No never mind”
“Oh ppfffft come on Bette!”
The brunette laughed at Tina’s reaction “I said never mind” Bette said while cleaning the table
“Okay I’m gonna be serious now. Please Bette tell me, how do I look at you?”
Bette stopped what she was doing and looked at Tina straight in the eyes “Do you really want to know?”
The smile on the blonde’s face was gone as she looked deep in those gorgeous brown eyes “Yes I want to know…”
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HEY I’m back and let me just say how I love all the comments that I’ve been getting so far. Thanks to all who have been reading this humble story, silent or not but forgive me I wouldn’t be able to do individual shout outs for I’m in the hospital right now and I don’t have that much time I just really want to post this before I change my mind and wait for another week. As always hope you all like this new chapter and please let me know what you think, thanks in advance!
–phacey
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Hospital oh no! I hope you working there or if you’re getting treated that it’s for writers block because you took so long to post this chapter lol..And all seriousness I hope everything is ok and thanks for posting. I love where their relationship is going but can they please get there already, omg the wait for them to get together or for Tina to me Angelica is killing us lol. Be safe and well my friend.
Hey you! We missed ur story so much :) So glad to finally read an awesome update from you..
Hospital? Why what happened? Are you a doctor or nurse on duty? Or a patient? I hope that you are doing fine.
Scribe
Glad you’re back. I’ve missed this story. Hope all is well.
Great update, missed this story.
Hospital?! I hope for work, if not, i hope everything will be fine for you.
Their relationship is developing in the right direction. I am glad Bette told Tim they can be friends and nothing more.
Even better is that she told Tina about it.
Take care and i hope to see another update
Soon.
I like where their relationship is heading. This is such a wonderful story.
I hope you get out of hospital soon and mend quickly! Hope to see you post as soon as you’re feeling up to it. Thanks.
Phacey:
Hope that’s okay
and not in the hospital because you are sick
Thank you very much for the update, I was expecting too much.
I am glad that Bette and Tina are starting a relationship, slowly TiBette be routed, I love your writing.
I can not wait for the next chapter.
Hope all is well Phacey, thanks again.
Delighted to see this story update and hope it’s going to be followed fairly quickly with more!
Sorry if you are in hospital for your own health reasons and if you are please get better quicker.
Love how you are using Bette and Tina here and will wait, rather impatiently, for your next post!
Finally an update!!! I just love how you write this B and T lots of fun stuff i like it when Bette told Tina the way she looked at her and that last scene when Bette called the jealous Tina after her date with Tim.
Phacey i hope nothing serious is going on with your health and please take care of yourself. Post soon when you can.
First off! Still prayers up for your quick recovery of your health! Second, thanks for this wonderful post. I loved the ending the best. I’m glad Bette told Tina what she told Tim. I’m glad they are getting to know each other more. I don’t understand how Bette has Boo picture on her desk and Tina haven’t seen it. I’m sure now that Bette will be staying that she will see it. NO! I don’t want Tina to find out like that. I want her to find out at Boo birthday party. I’m still waiting on Boo to call Tina! I wonder do she still have Tina number. Feel better soon and HURRY and post again! Love it! PPS
That should have said “sending up prayers”! Sorry
Loved the update and that Bette told Tim only friends. Thanks
Thank you for posting. Hospital doesn’t sounds good but if it is for cure, treatment and recovey they know best. Hope eveything is fine for you.
The next chapter I wish for, is to see them madly in love, it takes two to tango, the foundation of the story flows very well… detailing everything happened for a reason.
You take care…
My dearest friend im so sorry to hear that you are not feeling well right now but please accept our deepest thanks for posting even if you are in the hospital.
As always you never dissappoint despite the erratic update. I loved how Tina “copied” Angelica’s sweet gesture in wooing Bette and the ending was absolutely superb. Ten stars all the way.
Get well soon sweetie:-)
Woohoo new update!!!! I just looove this story thanks for posting and pls get well soon!
Yes! Now let’s get this show on the road! Thanks so much for posting. Can’t wait for the next chapter. Im so sorry you’re going thru this. I hope you get to feeling better soon. Thanks for thinking of us.
Dear phasey, I sincerely hope that is not too bad at the hospital and you’re well. I appreciate your effort to post knowing that we’re waiting.
The chapter, as always, I loved it. very sweet, lowering tensions over Tina, it even seems that there is hope for improvement with their parents.
I appreciate the flowers sent Tina, good that Bette never doubted the meaning of T. ; )
It seems that both have decided to quickly resolve misunderstandings. Fear gave me the appointment with Tim, I thought at least Bette talk about it before going, but given the outcome, no matter, it seems that since the road is clear. A new way to reach a new first kiss.
Angy’s birthday when? I am expectant to see Tina’s surprise. What questions do first after lunch Bette?
You keep surprising us and post when you can, take care much.
First of all, I hope that the reason is in the hospital
to work or social service, let me not be affected
for health reasons. But …. if it is, hope you are well.
This story delights me, love how you condus it.
Bette eTina begin to know better .Tina already realizes that Bette
not turn pro money.
Love the way it looks bette tina.
They are involved every day with one another.
Congratulations! Ten stars.
First of all, thank you so much for this update. Even you were in the hospital, you were still able to post a new chapter. It was nice of you for thinking about your readers even if you were in a “not well” situation. Your efforts are highly appreciated.
But you never really failed to surprise us, or may I say leave us hanging. But this time it’s not with your story but with what had happened to you. “Hospital” doesn’t really sounds good. All we can do is hope that nothing serious happened and hope everything is well now.
About your story, seems like everything is going well for Bette and Tina. And seems like the sun is starting to shine on Tina now and nice to see her happy and blooming. But I don’t understand why Bette immediately reacted that way and got pissed when Tina mentioned about their agreement. I know she was hurt that Tina was thinking that she’s only after her money. Well, isn’t she? money was the reason why she accepted Tina’s offer in the first place. At least Tina already proved to her that she’s not a pervert person when she called off their agreement. But Bette is yet to prove herself to Tina that she’s also not a loose woman. But I’m glad that she’s started to prove it in the last part of this chapter and I’m happy that they were able to resolve their little misunderstanding. I hope it will be the start of a beautiful beginning for them. Also glad that Tim was so gracious to accept that he and Bette can never be more than friends. It lessens the complications in the story.
Maybe you’re a very laid back and never into rushing things kind if person but I hope you won’t make us wait too long and I hope you’ll be inspired enough to post another chapter despite being busy.
Thanks! and post anytime you can. Take your time and remember, there’s no rush. Another update this weekend would be enough for us. But of course your health is more important to us.
This is kinda lengthy but I know you love knowing your readers’ thoughts, so there you go.
Hope you are well because we’ve been missing you and your amazing story so wishing you post a new chapter asap.
That was good. Loving this story. But this has really been a slow burn. Glad Bette told Tim that nothing will happen and really loved her phone call to Tina. Waiting for an update
Please update on this story phacey.
Phacy, catching up on my reading, you story was a fav, for sure. Hope y0u are doing better and feel like writing again, we miss you. TBsG
can you have another author finish your stories since you are not capable of doing so?
OMGGGG AWESOME LOVE IT
Phacy, Hope you are feeling great, noticed you have written a few more stories so I hope that is an indication you are BACK!! PLEASE finish Lover in the Dark! I want to know if Tina goes to the birthday party and I want them together as a couple! That means full out with all the details! PLEASE!?!? TBsG