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Lover in the Dark: Chapter 16
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Tina had been feeling sick to her stomach after Bette left her office that she didn’t know what to do and all afternoon she was just browsing thru some paper works but wasn’t really paying attention to it. She didn’t even know how to approach the angry brunette. All of a sudden her little adorable friend Angie crossed her mind and she remembered how her three cute and Pink Hershey’s made her smile that day when she first met her at the park and she thought and hoped the same trick would work on the brunette.
“I’m sorry Bette, I know I’m such an asshole for saying those things but please believe me I don’t mean disrespect to you. I respect you as a person and I think you’re an amazing person” Tina’s heart skipped a beat or two when she saw a smile graced the most beautiful face that she had ever seen
“Is that smile means you forgive me?”
“Probably… maybe” Bette teased
“I’ll take that as a yes then”
Bette smiled
“Bette… I know you and Tim will watch a play tonight…”
“Yes”
“Why don’t you go now I’m sure you don’t want to be late”
“I still need to lock up”
“Don’t worry about locking up; I’ll take care of it”
“Are you sure?”
“I’m sure”
“Ok” Bette hoisted her bag on her shoulder, went around her table and walked towards the blonde
“Goodnight Tina”
“Goodnight Bette”
The brunette was heading for the elevator when she heard the blonde again
“Bette…”
The caramel skinned beauty stopped in her tracks and turned “Yeah?”
“Tim is so lucky to have you as his date tonight…”
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“Oh my goodness Tim that was so freakin awesome!” The duo were talking nonstop as they walked towards the parking lot
“I told you, you’ll gonna like it!” said Tim beaming
“You are absolutely right!”
“You should have seen yourself when you cried in the finale it was as if your tears will flood the entire theater!” Bette punched Tim on his right shoulder
“Ouch! What’s that for?”
“That’s what you get for teasing me!”
“Sorry I didn’t know that you’re such a sour loser!”
Bette punched Tim again on his shoulder and this time with fury
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HEY I’m back and let me just say how I love all the comments that I’ve been getting so far. Thanks to all who have been reading this humble story, silent or not but forgive me I wouldn’t be able to do individual shout outs for I’m in the hospital right now and I don’t have that much time I just really want to post this before I change my mind and wait for another week. As always hope you all like this new chapter and please let me know what you think, thanks in advance!
–phacey
P.S You can also visit my personal site
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Hospital oh no! I hope you working there or if you’re getting treated that it’s for writers block because you took so long to post this chapter lol..And all seriousness I hope everything is ok and thanks for posting. I love where their relationship is going but can they please get there already, omg the wait for them to get together or for Tina to me Angelica is killing us lol. Be safe and well my friend.
Hey you! We missed ur story so much :) So glad to finally read an awesome update from you..
Hospital? Why what happened? Are you a doctor or nurse on duty? Or a patient? I hope that you are doing fine.
Scribe
Glad you’re back. I’ve missed this story. Hope all is well.
Great update, missed this story.
Hospital?! I hope for work, if not, i hope everything will be fine for you.
Their relationship is developing in the right direction. I am glad Bette told Tim they can be friends and nothing more.
Even better is that she told Tina about it.
Take care and i hope to see another update
Soon.
I like where their relationship is heading. This is such a wonderful story.
I hope you get out of hospital soon and mend quickly! Hope to see you post as soon as you’re feeling up to it. Thanks.
Phacey:
Hope that’s okay
and not in the hospital because you are sick
Thank you very much for the update, I was expecting too much.
I am glad that Bette and Tina are starting a relationship, slowly TiBette be routed, I love your writing.
I can not wait for the next chapter.
Hope all is well Phacey, thanks again.
Delighted to see this story update and hope it’s going to be followed fairly quickly with more!
Sorry if you are in hospital for your own health reasons and if you are please get better quicker.
Love how you are using Bette and Tina here and will wait, rather impatiently, for your next post!
Finally an update!!! I just love how you write this B and T lots of fun stuff i like it when Bette told Tina the way she looked at her and that last scene when Bette called the jealous Tina after her date with Tim.
Phacey i hope nothing serious is going on with your health and please take care of yourself. Post soon when you can.
First off! Still prayers up for your quick recovery of your health! Second, thanks for this wonderful post. I loved the ending the best. I’m glad Bette told Tina what she told Tim. I’m glad they are getting to know each other more. I don’t understand how Bette has Boo picture on her desk and Tina haven’t seen it. I’m sure now that Bette will be staying that she will see it. NO! I don’t want Tina to find out like that. I want her to find out at Boo birthday party. I’m still waiting on Boo to call Tina! I wonder do she still have Tina number. Feel better soon and HURRY and post again! Love it! PPS
That should have said “sending up prayers”! Sorry
Loved the update and that Bette told Tim only friends. Thanks
Thank you for posting. Hospital doesn’t sounds good but if it is for cure, treatment and recovey they know best. Hope eveything is fine for you.
The next chapter I wish for, is to see them madly in love, it takes two to tango, the foundation of the story flows very well… detailing everything happened for a reason.
You take care…
My dearest friend im so sorry to hear that you are not feeling well right now but please accept our deepest thanks for posting even if you are in the hospital.
As always you never dissappoint despite the erratic update. I loved how Tina “copied” Angelica’s sweet gesture in wooing Bette and the ending was absolutely superb. Ten stars all the way.
Get well soon sweetie:-)
Woohoo new update!!!! I just looove this story thanks for posting and pls get well soon!
Yes! Now let’s get this show on the road! Thanks so much for posting. Can’t wait for the next chapter. Im so sorry you’re going thru this. I hope you get to feeling better soon. Thanks for thinking of us.
Dear phasey, I sincerely hope that is not too bad at the hospital and you’re well. I appreciate your effort to post knowing that we’re waiting.
The chapter, as always, I loved it. very sweet, lowering tensions over Tina, it even seems that there is hope for improvement with their parents.
I appreciate the flowers sent Tina, good that Bette never doubted the meaning of T. ; )
It seems that both have decided to quickly resolve misunderstandings. Fear gave me the appointment with Tim, I thought at least Bette talk about it before going, but given the outcome, no matter, it seems that since the road is clear. A new way to reach a new first kiss.
Angy’s birthday when? I am expectant to see Tina’s surprise. What questions do first after lunch Bette?
You keep surprising us and post when you can, take care much.
First of all, I hope that the reason is in the hospital
to work or social service, let me not be affected
for health reasons. But …. if it is, hope you are well.
This story delights me, love how you condus it.
Bette eTina begin to know better .Tina already realizes that Bette
not turn pro money.
Love the way it looks bette tina.
They are involved every day with one another.
Congratulations! Ten stars.
First of all, thank you so much for this update. Even you were in the hospital, you were still able to post a new chapter. It was nice of you for thinking about your readers even if you were in a “not well” situation. Your efforts are highly appreciated.
But you never really failed to surprise us, or may I say leave us hanging. But this time it’s not with your story but with what had happened to you. “Hospital” doesn’t really sounds good. All we can do is hope that nothing serious happened and hope everything is well now.
About your story, seems like everything is going well for Bette and Tina. And seems like the sun is starting to shine on Tina now and nice to see her happy and blooming. But I don’t understand why Bette immediately reacted that way and got pissed when Tina mentioned about their agreement. I know she was hurt that Tina was thinking that she’s only after her money. Well, isn’t she? money was the reason why she accepted Tina’s offer in the first place. At least Tina already proved to her that she’s not a pervert person when she called off their agreement. But Bette is yet to prove herself to Tina that she’s also not a loose woman. But I’m glad that she’s started to prove it in the last part of this chapter and I’m happy that they were able to resolve their little misunderstanding. I hope it will be the start of a beautiful beginning for them. Also glad that Tim was so gracious to accept that he and Bette can never be more than friends. It lessens the complications in the story.
Maybe you’re a very laid back and never into rushing things kind if person but I hope you won’t make us wait too long and I hope you’ll be inspired enough to post another chapter despite being busy.
Thanks! and post anytime you can. Take your time and remember, there’s no rush. Another update this weekend would be enough for us. But of course your health is more important to us.
This is kinda lengthy but I know you love knowing your readers’ thoughts, so there you go.
Hope you are well because we’ve been missing you and your amazing story so wishing you post a new chapter asap.
That was good. Loving this story. But this has really been a slow burn. Glad Bette told Tim that nothing will happen and really loved her phone call to Tina. Waiting for an update
Please update on this story phacey.
Phacy, catching up on my reading, you story was a fav, for sure. Hope y0u are doing better and feel like writing again, we miss you. TBsG
can you have another author finish your stories since you are not capable of doing so?
OMGGGG AWESOME LOVE IT
Phacy, Hope you are feeling great, noticed you have written a few more stories so I hope that is an indication you are BACK!! PLEASE finish Lover in the Dark! I want to know if Tina goes to the birthday party and I want them together as a couple! That means full out with all the details! PLEASE!?!? TBsG