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Love’s deciples part 4
“Yep”
“Te quiero, Te quiero, Te quiero” Carmen burst out covering Shane with kisses again
“Oh ***** Spanish” Shane mumbled getting aroused
“Sorry, I love you so much, you know that! So much words cant describe” she said pulling herself and straddling Shane’s lap.
“I love you too!” Shane rasped moving her hands so that they grazed the cord of the dressing gown.
“You have any other doable fantasies?” picking up on Shane’s arousal
“I liked your idea of the examination” Shane said stroking Carmen’s sides up and down as the music stopped
“Ok well Miss McCutcheon, What seems to be the problem”
“Well I have this girlfriend and she is soo *****’ hot, I cant keep my hands off her”
“I see.” she said unrobing herself so she was naked and pulling off Shane’s t-shirt slowly. “Well maybe I can help with that.” She undid Shane’s trousers and kissed her all over her exposed flesh
“oh god!” Shane mumbled
Carmen sucked Shane’s erect nipples softly and moved her pelvis up and down building friction between their wet pussies.
Shane looked down at Carmen and moved her hands up and down her naked back moaning softly
Carmen got off Shane’s lap and pulled her girlfriends trousers off with rapid ease, throwing them onto the floor.
“Much better Miss McCutcheon” She giggled moving her hands up Shane’s thighs towards her *****. She lent in and kissed it gently then parted the flaps with her mouth and began sucking on Shane’s *****.
“Oh ***** Carmen” Shane gasped
Carmen continued her assault biting gently and then soothing the area with her rapid tongue. Shane put her hands down on Carmen’s head and began intertwining her fingers in Carmen’s loose ponytail.
Carmen moved one of her hands from Shane’s thighs to her lover’s ***** and began a slow rhythm in and out of her hole.
Shane was in a frenzy. It felt like she was on fire. She began to feel perspiration dripping down her face as the waves of pleasure began to come.
Carmen feeling Shane begin to shake removed her head whilst continuing to ***** Shane with her hand increasing the tempo.
“Carmen, Carmen. ***** *****” she said very loud and breathlessly as she felt her body enter ***** at full speed.
Both Carmen and Shane heard a loud laughing coming from behind the locked bedroom door and then a voice recognisable as Alice say mockingly “Oh Carmen oh Carmen.”
“Alice?” Carmen said very embarrassed, grabbing the discarded robe and frantically wrapping it round herself whilst Shane dizzily laughed quietly
“Oh hi Carmen (she laughed). Yeh it’s me. How long you guys gonna be. Were guessing by Shane, not long” There was another very loud explosion of giggles from the girls outside
“You taken to listening at my door now Al. That’s sick” she jested
“No Shane. We have your takeout. The man delivered it when I was arriving with Dana and Jen. You guys were so loud, it was hard NOT to hear” Al said sarcastically
“You’re all there?” Carmen said going very red
“Yep.”
“Hi Carmen” Dana said cheerily
“Yeh hi you two. Having fun?” Jenny said laughing
“Hi guys” Carmen said feeling like she wanted to crawl up and die
“Al, seriously dude can you go to the kitchen or something?”
“Yeh sure when we know when your coming out”
Alright, we’ll be out in a minute” Shane said irritably
“Ok see you in a minute” The girls left planting themselves in the living room
Carmen crawled onto the bed on all fours and pulled the duvet around her head hiding it
“Are you ok?”
“I have never been so embarrassed in my whole entire life” came the muffled sound of Carmen’s reply
“Don’t worry about it. I have walked in on Al before and Jenny come to think of it”
“They’re never going to let this go”
“Don’t be silly” Shane said pulling Carmen away from the duvet which she held onto with dear life and wrapped her arms around her
“Why don’t you get a shower and I will talk to them so they get the jokes over with me before you come out. I will put the pizza in the oven to keep it warm”
“Thanks babe.” She said smiling up at her. She kissed Shane lightly on the cheek and then picking her clothes up headed towards the bathroom while Shane entered the living room
To be continued.
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Just read all your chapters. Can’t believe I missed them before. I love this fic and it’s so fucking hot!!! I also like to add that I like you’re writing style, it’s very fluid. You’re doing a great job, so update soon!
That was awesome update! The bit with the girls was hilarious,please post soon.
Shane’s a dirty birdie (wonder if they’ll explore the washing-machine-in-the-launderette thing later, hmmm). Alice is a crack up (she doesn’t cut Shane any slack does she? lol). And Carmen’s got talent (’nuff said). Loved the chapter. Keep ’em coming (no pun intended).
Whoa! How embarrassing for Carmen, although it was too funny. Very good job, looking forward to your next post.
grt!!!!! al is funny
great update!
nice update
i agree…very nice and I didn’t expect the interuption…very funny.