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Lucky – Chapter 11
“Tina” the brunette says squinting her eyes and looking across at the blonde.
“Yes Bette?” Tina answers immediately.
“Can you do something for me?” Bette says, thinking about her next move.
“Sure” Tina says, trying to remain calm.
“Sure? You don’t know what it is yet” Bette grins
“Well I’m sure it can’t be anything that bad.” Tina says, inwardly hoping that it is.
“Oh no, and what makes you think that?” Bette raises an eyebrow.
“I just think your bark, is worse than your bite” Tina says a bit smugly.
Bette looks down to the floor grinning, her arms crossed. She looks up at Tina.
“Kneel”, Bette says looking her in the eye, all amusement gone from her face.
“Ummm?” Tina looks at her scrunching her face.
“Ummmm?” Bette says, now slightly amused at the cute blondes confusion. Bette knew this was a bold move, but she’d sensed something in Tina, and this one request would clarify, or immediately put a stop to everything.
“I said kneel, Tina. In front of me, at my feet.” Bette stays leaning against the desk, not wanting to use her physical presence in anyway to force Tina to make a decision she didn’t want to. “Alternatively, you can sit yourself down on that sofa, and wait for me to finish, and we can try to pretend this moment never happened.”
The moment Tina heard the word come from Bette’s mouth she felt a pang between her legs. The word almost caused her to buck forward. Tina had never before kissed a woman, and here she was preparing to kneel before the feet of this person who had seemingly swept her off her feet. Looking in to the eyes of the brunette, there could be no question as to what Tina’s next actions would be. The trust, security and respect she felt far out weighed any fears that the young blonde had.
Bette could see all these thoughts playing across Tina’s face. After a few short moments, the blonde looked to the floor, and up again one last time, before she slowly lowered herself to the floor, arranging her dress so that she was able to kneel in front of Bette, instinctively lowering her head.
Bette bit her lower lip, her hands moved gripping the desk either side of her. “Good girl”, she said her voice suddenly full of lust. “Now just stay there until I’m ready to go”.
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(34 votes, average: 4.12 out of 5)
Oh good im first , but love the way you took this chptr. Tina is sooo cute
Just caught up with your story. I really like the build up you’ve given to the B/T realtionship. Thanks for writing and I hope you post again very soon.
Hmmm, I think I like where this is headed. PPS
Excellent story and chapter. Thank you.
I was hoping you would take the storyline this way!!!^^ and you just did exactly this!! :D thank you very much!!!!!
Dammit! Now, I’ve got to go and change! I’ll be late for work! LOL! Good Lord, that was sexy! Bette can tell me to kneel anytime she wants. Sh*t, I had to go back and red that part again! Now, I’m really going to be late. Oh, in case you haven’t figured it out yet, I loved this chapter. Crud, a dominant Bette just makes me melt all over the place. =)
So Tina is so gay. Like being told what to do. ???? not my thing.
Based on your many clues, I’m not at all surprised by this “turn” in your story….it will make for some very interesting relationship development.
loved this… tina is to cute… all she wants to do is kiss and then she confesses she would do anything for bette… we all know bette would never do any thing to hurt tina… like i said… i love this story,.. pps
That was so fun and sweet!!!!