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Lucky – Chapter 23
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Bette does so as Tina very gently begins to rock back and forth. Bette is silenced; she simply stares in to Tina’s eyes, needing to see love and understanding.
“That’s it. Is that OK for you baby?” Tina asks, adoring Bette’s expression. Although aesthetically she didn’t feel comfortable with the strap-on, she was enjoying her first time using it. She felt so close to Bette in this moment. “Are you going to be… a nice Domme… from now on?” Tina breathes smiling.
“I believe… that’s an oxymoron… T” Bette pants, looking up, her eyes conveying a dark warning.
Tina reads the expression and knows she’s going to be in serious trouble later on, but for now she didn’t care. She begins to feel Bette’s arousal picking up, the brunette’s breathing increases, and her skin beginning to flush.
“You are so beautiful baby” Tina expresses.
Bette just looks up, too aroused to talk. She couldn’t believe how much she was enjoying handing this level of control over to a lover.
Tina begins to up the pace. She feels Bette’s wetness, and begins to rock back and forth with more force. Eventually Bette’s body begins to shake, a gush of liquid pouring from her legs on to the bed. Tina holds her body still, holding on to Bette, allowing the brunette to ride out her orgasm.
Moments later Tina begins to pull out.
“No, please stay” Bette asks.
“So you liked being put in your place huh?” Tina smiles.
“Don’t push it T” The brunette responds, putting her arms around her girl and pulling her in close, stroking her hair.
After a few minutes, Tina feels Bette’s breathing level out. She looks up to see her lover in peaceful slumber. She smiles, knowing she had in her own way reprimanded her dominant lover. She slowly pulls out, putting the strap on to the side. Moving up the bed, she gently tugs under Bette’s arms, pulling her partly into her lap. The brunette curls up in her sleep, snuggling into her comforting lover’s warmth. Tina looks down admiring the beauty that lay in her lap. She lay back against the headboard, closing her eyes, and going over again how she had come to this very moment.
A short while later the blonde feels her lover stirring. She opens her eyes, to see Bette stretching. “Welcome back” Tina grins.
“Hey” Bette looks up, and rolls on to her front.
Tina couldn’t help notice how cute she looked from this angle.
It’s almost as though Bette suddenly realized where she was, she looks down sneakily, and then up again, asking permission with her eyes.
Tina adjusts herself, opening her legs wider, allowing Bette the access she craved.
Bette moves on to her elbows, dipping her head and licking the full length of Tina’s moist lips.
Tina’s head leans back against the headboard. She then looks down, slowly lifting Bette’s hair, so she could watch her lover.
Bette senses this and looks up at the blonde. Their relationship had developed so much since they had entered this room an hour earlier. Bette felt she wanted to show Tina just how much she loved and trusted her, as she begin to lick and suck, while keeping constant eye contact.
It was enough to send the blonde over the edge. Within minutes she was squirming around, bucking into Bette’s face. Bette felt Tina begin to cum as she placed her lips tightly to her entrance, and tried to swallow all she had to offer.
Minutes later the two were lying in each other’s arms. There were no words to explain how they both felt. They knew they would have to get up at some point and eat, but for now they were happy to look into each other’s eyes, smiling occasionally, letting their familiar silent exchange communicate all that needed to be said.
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wow. though I have never personally experienced a relationship such as this one, you write so beautifully. Bette is naturally the alpha and therefore in charge but giving herself to Tina is the ultimate act of love. good job. pps
Hi Bayley,your comments made it clear what you were going for in this chapter, and I think you achieved your goal. It may not have been the most “on the edge” chapter you have written, but it does show the overall dynamic of this B/t relationship. You may have put it best in the last line of this post where you talk about the “silent communication” and how they both seem to understand the other’s desires. Hope you post soon. I’m with sporty, I check to see if you’ve posted!
Bayley – This is going to be long and I may be totally off base from what you are trying to portray in this story but this is my comprehension. In the context of this story “punishment” is not a penalty for wrong doing or a means of discipline to correct bad behaivor or change a behaivor instead it’s the endgame for their BDSM game play. Tina’s need to be sexually pleasured in ways that are dehumanizing, cruel and painful is satisfied by Bette dolling out “punishments” and Bette gets her sexual pleasure from the power she feels over Tina when she brings her to the brink of tolerance. Since Tina has such a high tolerance level and Bette has a cruel nature her acts and actions get progressively more intense to the point of almost breaking Tina. In order to maintain control they implement safe words, consent, and the “contract” to establish the boundaries of how far they will take their roles and each is trusting the other to stay within these established boundaries so it remains pleasurable for both. For me this chapter of Bette “submitting” to Tina was necessary to give Tina the assurance that the agreement between them is binding and that Bette can be trusted to follow through on her word giving credence to Bette’s genuineness in this relationship but what I got from it was just another of Bette’s manipulative tactics of keeping her possession and reasserting her power. The actions and thoughts that went through her mind whether it would pleasure Tina or not just confirmed that Tina doesn’t have any recourse should Bette really get out of hand and I’m not convinced that even the “safe word” would work with Bette if she was out of control. Bette knows exactly what methods to use whether it’s cuddling or spanking to keep her plaything and pet exactly where she wants her. I don’t think what Tina did to Bette to “put her in her place” was important. As a reader I was more interested in seeing Bette wholeheartedly giving “temporary control” over to Tina by showing her that she totally respected, trusted, and loved her and that it wasn’t just an act to satisfy her deviant proclivities. By trying to worm out of the agreement and only agreeing to submit once Tina threatened to disregard the other rules gave me the impression that Bette is more devious than already established and things are going to get progressively worse.
Quite a remarkable chapter, I must say. I really enjoyed Bette’s thought process in this chapter, and that you let on how truly vulnerable she can be. It’s important to know one’s strengths and weaknesses, just as Tina is finding out here. It is obviously difficult for Bette to take what she gives, and that’s understandable, but I think this role reversal was crucial to their relationship. A Domme or general “top” should know how each punishment feels before using them on someone else, otherwise he/she could accidentally injure their partner. I’m really glad you decided to write and post this chapter, because it really peers into the emotional depths of a game like this, and allows others to see that while it might not be a usual practice, there are reasons for every tease and jolt. Bette and Tina’s play was well-constructed, as was the rest of this chapter. Well done.
Didn’t really like the role reversal but totaly understand why it had to be done… Bette giving her self to Tina in that way shows how deep her love is for her… Please keep them coming I looke for updates every hr ;)lol
Maybe it’s my naivete about BDSM relationships but I don’t see how this is an act of love or how Bette gave up any control. Tina didn’t gain any ground. All she’s done is given Bette another reason to punish her and the cruelty is escalating. If it’s in the contract that Tina can put Bette in her place if she gets too cocky why are there repercussions? Like I said I just don’t get it but I’m trying to be open minded so hopefully I can stick it out until the end.
Thats it??? Bette treated Tina as a pet and what not. And Bette gets THIS punishment??? Treat Tina well or get Bette punished more. What does equal relationship mean?? BDSM is fine, but … where is EQUAL in it??
Thanks for your comments. Maybe I should explain a little about this chapter. The purpose was for Tina to indicate to Bette that she had on a couple of occasions pushed Tina a bit too far (the shelf incident, the conversation on the phone). By the end of their little switch they both come away feeling they understand their boundaries better. Bette’s naughty visions of what she would do to Tina would have happened regardless of whether chapter 23 happened or not. And when Tina is on the receiving end, she will not see this as a punishment – she will love every minute. My intention was for Bette to learn she needs to rein in her cheekiness, and for Tina to witness Bette’s love and respect by seeing her temporarily becoming the submissive. We all respond in different ways, for Tina to possibly restrain Bette and spank her would not have worked in this instance, as Bette does in no way enjoy being spanked – whereas Tina does. Every relationship is different. I hope this explains this one a little better?
I’m glad that Bette was strong enough to let Tina be in control. It’s nice to flip the script every now and then =) Gorgeous story.
Great that Bette let Tina take control. Excellent update. Thank you
That was hot and nice to see Bette giving herself to Tina !