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Lucky – Chapter 3
“Uggggh. Bette Porter” She answers a bit impatiently.
“Ummm, hello?” A timid voice answers back.
“Tina?”, ‘Shit’ Bette thinks, ‘Why did I have to let her know I knew it was her’.
Tina relaxes instantly. ‘She remembers me’, the blonde had been perched nervously on the edge of her seat. She now relaxes back into it, with a big grin spreading across her face. “Bette, is everything OK? You sound a little… stressed”.
“No I’m fine, sorry, I’ve just had some rather ‘difficult customers’ today”.
“Oh OK, I’m sure you dealt with them… accordingly” Tina responded, surprised at how quickly Bette seemed to bring out her flirty side.
“That I did Tina. Well I have to say, I’m glad to hear from you. I was a little worried”. ‘Damn, I have I said too much’, Bette winces.
‘Awww, she’s been thinking about me’, Tina grins back into the phone, unconsciously leaning forward and twisting her hair between her fingers. “You were worried?”
“Well yes Tina”, Bette responds. Tina loves that Bette keeps saying her name.
“If you remember back to how we first met, I think I’m quite in my right to worry too. Did you keep the promise you made to me?”
“Of course” Tina responds, a little unconvincingly.
“Tina?” Bette responds deeply. There is silence on the end of the phone.
‘Ughh, what should I say’. “Well I phoned you, so I at least kept up half of my promise right?” She answers, hoping that is good enough.
“Hmmm, I thought you would have known better after the other night. But yes, I am glad you called.”
“So is the room still available?”
‘The room?’ Bette thinks. ‘Oh my god, the room’. “It is, well I have someone having a second viewing tomorrow night”, Bette says slightly concerned at how easily the lie rolls off of her tongue.
“Oh” a quiet voice responds.
“But, as it’s you, I’m sure we could fit a viewing in tomorrow before they arrive. And if you promise me you’ll look after yourself properly before then, I may even give you priority – if you’re interested that is.” Bette offers.
Tina’s grin instantly returns. “It’s a deal, and I promise I’ll stick to it this time”.
“Fantastic. Right, first things first, the person I have viewing tomorrow is booked in for 8pm. So, how about we pencil in 6.30?” Bette has one eyebrow raised.
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(41 votes, average: 4.46 out of 5)
Hey Bayley, Good to have TIna phoning Bette while Bette was anxious to hear from her.And the joy of Alice was so funny. SHe really barged in to this meeting. I hope that Tina and Bette are living together soon as I am sure the close proximity will lead to their realization of the attraction. And then who knows where it might lead.Many thanks, A Fan.
This is adorable. Great start. I can’t wait for your next post!
This is delightful. Who would give you only three stars? What an a**hole! Please continue.
alice better watch her ass… bette is either going to kick it or what ever… looks like tina is ok with the info she just heard… love this story… keep it going your doing great…pps
Alice is a trip! If Tina can survive her and still be interested in renting the room that’s a good sign. Please post again soon.
Kitty Cat!!! ahahaha Love it.Love Alice. Love the story! :)
OMG that was funny and cute, so sweet love them. Alice is crazy but gotta love her. Please post more, thanks!
Looking forward to the next chapter.
I just love Alice!!!!!!!!!!This story is looking so good. Bette living with someone, sharing her space.Oh what fun things are going to happen. lol lol
Awwww, this is fun. Bette has done a good deed and no one believes it was an altruistic moment. Alice with her dirty mind. Tina doesn’t seem at all bothered by what she just heard, in fact, she seems to be overjoyed by it. More please. Thanks for posting.
Awwww, this is fun. Bette has done a good deed and no one believes it was an altruistic moment. Alice with her dirty mind. Tina doesn’t seem at all bothered by what she just heard, in fact, she seems to be overjoyed by it. More please. Thanks for posting.
Awwww, this is fun. Bette has done a good deed and no one believes it was an altruistic moment. Alice with her dirty mind. Tina doesn’t seem at all bothered by what she just heard, in fact, she seems to be overjoyed by it. More please. Thanks for posting.
Just caught up. Excellent updates. Thank you. Can’t wait for what happens next.