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Lucky – Chapter 35
Bette cheerfully hummed along to the music, tapping her leather-clad finger on the steering wheel. She glanced down at the clear directions she had been given to the property. When they had discussed their fantasy a few weeks previous Bette had instantly thought of this exclusive little getaway. A long-term friend who owned the property had often offered the place to Bette as a weekend retreat knowing that they enjoyed a similar ‘lifestyle’ – though this would be Bette’s first visit.
It was a beautiful property on the outskirts of a popular, yet remote village, set on the edge of a crystal clear lake. The owner had been delighted to discover the property offered everything she and her partner could have wanted when they needed to get away from the city. It offered seclusion, anonymity and what finally sold it to them was the discovery of the perfectly sized attic hidden away on the top floor…how delightfully convenient.
Pleased that Bette had finally taken her up on the offer she had made sure her contact in the village had cleaned and sufficiently prepared the property in time for Bette and her partner’s arrival. Even a delivery of fresh food had been delivered that morning from the local store. Bette was pulled from these thoughts when a foot kicked the back of her headrest. “What the fu…”
Tina had figured there wasn’t much she could do (being blindfolded and cuffed horizontally to the back seat) other than perhaps attempt to annoy Bette, knowing that the brunette was rather precious over her beautiful car. She mischievously leant her feet up against the window, a jut in the road causing her foot to tap Bette’s headrest, “ooops” she quietly muttered.
“You have exactly 2 seconds to remove your feet from my window.” Bette states calmly.
Tina was feeling particularly boisterous, even under such circumstances.
“1… 2” Bette begins.
Tina just grins to herself, until she feels the breaks, and lurches forward on the back seat. “They’re down, they’re down, look!” but it was too late.
Bette had already climbed out of the car, opened the boot, opened the door and had her arms under Tina’s, pulling her up and head first out of the car. Bette could do this confidently in the knowledge that they were now on a private stretch of road. From now until Sunday the only person Tina would be seeing was Bette.
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Yeah!!! So excited to see this chapter up, please don’t make us wait to long for the next, pleassssssssssssssss!!!! thanks so much for sharing :)
As always, great to see a chapter from you! This getaway seems like quite the paradise for these two. I’m certainly looking forward to the next installment. I’ll be sad to see the last chapter, so hope you will keep writing more! Thanks for posting!
Excellent have missed this story. Post soon. thank you.
I’m really enjoying this story. When first started reading it I was not show that continue because of the subject matter but you are an incredible writer that makes everything that Bette and Tina do together cover in love for each other. Even moments when I cringed like when Bette made Tina crawled on the floor like a dog but in the end I had no problem because of the way Tina act responded on the situation. And I love it because Tina is the submissve but she never completely give control to Bette without Bette having to fight for it and the story is really, really funny, I find myself laugh through out the play.
What a wonderful surprise that you’ve posted the next chapter. I really do like this story, and not just for the darker content – which I truly do enjoy – but also for the humour you show here. There is a sort of comedy playing between the two of them that just brings a special aspect to this story. I agree that there’s no rush in ending it either, as it is wonderfully entertaining. I do so love a cheeky Tina. Almost as much as I love seeing her punished for it, haha. Well, in any case, thank you for the wonderful story, and I can hardly wait for the next chapter. It sounds quite promising.
There is no need to end this story soon,love it.
That was great and fun, let see more please. PPST!