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    Making Up Is Never Easy Chapter 80

    “I want to see her…Everyone has seen her apart from me…She’s my bloody daughter for god sake” Tina snapped “It okay for all you to tell me how she is…I want to see for myself”

     

    Bette looked pleadingly at Ashley

     

    “Arghhh…Okay, But you will be in a wheelchair and it’s on my conditions…is that clear”

     

    “Crystal” Tina stated

     

    Ashley returned with a chair helping Tina.

     

    Ashley attached the oxygen tank to the chair. “10 minutes max…you’re still my patient and you’re still really fragile”

     

    Ashley wheeled Tina into Amy’s room. Bette followed.

     

    Jacqui looked up at Tina with a half hearted smile.

     

    Tina took Amy’s hand.

    “Hey baby it’s your Mum…I’m sorry your in this condition.” Tina cried “This is me just being allowed to see you…Ashley was being un reasonable”

     

    “Like mother, like daughter” Bette smirked

     

    “It’s always my fault” Ashley laughed “I hate being the boss”

     

    “You saved my daughter’s life for that I’ll be forever grateful” Tina stated

     

    “I wouldn’t go that far yet” Ashley said. “I know she’s breathing on her own but she’s still not out the woods”

     

    “I wish it was me instead…She doesn’t deserve all this, its one thing after another she deserves a break” Tina stated

     

    “I don’t wish how I’m feeling on anybody…Especially not Bette” Jacqui admitted “Knowing your wife might never wake up again it’s a pain you cant describe until your in it”

     

    “She will wake up” Tina stated

     

    “Ok guys we need to empty this room now, Tina I’m sorry you need to go back to bed” Ashley said as she seen Tina’s pressure go down a little “I’m not taking chances”

     

    Tina looked at Jacqui. “Your not going anywhere are you?”

     

    “She’ll be fine Tina I won’t leave her” Jacqui promised

     

    “Jacqui’s not left her side all week” Spencer stated

     

    Ashley took Tina back into her own room. They got her back into bed.

     

    “I’ll give you two some space” Ashley smiled

     

    “Thanks Ashley” Bette smiled

     

    Ashley left the room closing the door. Bette sat on the bed beside Tina. She took both Tina’s hands.

     

    “This isn’t your fault” Bette stated “So don’t even consider thinking it”

     

    Bette knew Tina was blaming herself. She wasn’t going to let Tina away with it.

     

    “Bette we can’t lose her”

     

    “Baby she’s going nowhere…You heard Ashley she’s a fighter just like her Mum.”

    Comments

    1. Gosh I am hurting like crazy right now. This family and friends need a break. I cannot stop crying. Gosh!! nice to see all of them supporting each other. What a strong group, don’t matter what it’s thrown at them, together they face it. ohhhh!!!! man I love this story.

    2. Oh My how much can one girl/family take. So she is still not out of the woods and it seems that Jacqui may be blaming Tina a little-“half hearted smile”. Waiting…

    3. My goodness, please don’t send this family any more tragedy, they don’t need it. They just need peace and quiet and lots of love from each other and the rest of the family. Great update. Thanks.

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