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    Masked Feelings CH 16 Emotions run high

    Story written on December 21, 2005 by brteyes.
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    Dana, the ultimate victim…. Alice’s altered mind…. Gina and Lara face off, yikes!

    Lara – Dana, look at me. I know things look really bad right now. I won’t let anything bad happen to you.

    Dana – You can’t stop this.

    Lara – You told the detective that you loved Alice, right?

    Dana – Yes, what are you getting at?

    Lara – You didn’t say you were ” in love with her.”

    Dana – So?

    Lara – I can save you from this….. Marry me, Dana.

    Dana – What?

    Lara – You heard me…. Marry me, Dana. This will show the detective that you and I are together. All he has are words that can be interpreted in so many ways. He has nothing… as long as Alice keeps quiet. I’m sure Tina can convince her.

    Dana – I don’t know… what to say.

    Lara – Say yes, Dana. I know its sudden and not at all romantic, but I’m asking. I love you and want to be with you forever.

    Dana was truly bowled over by Lara’s proposal. Stunned.

    Lara – Well… will you?

    Dana – Can I think about it?

    Lara – Yes, but you better give me an answer soon. This could all blow up if Tina doesn’t get through to Alice. We still have a better chance if we’re married. If Alice does accuse you, it’s her word against yours. No real evidence, Dana. Think about it….

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    Everyone was out looking for Alice. All her friends now knew what happened to her and worked together to try to bring her home. Dana knew, but everyone told her it would be best to keep her distance, given she was a suspect. Reluctantly, she backed off. Letting her friends do all the work. Dana didn’t know what hurt worse, her best friend thinking she betrayed her in the worst possible way or all the pain Alice was going through because of the torture she had endured. She knew that she had to save herself and hope that the truth would finally come out.

    Dana- Lara, let’s do it. I’ll marry you.

    Lara – You’re doing the right thing. It will all work out, I promise. I love you. We’ll be so happy together, you’ll see.

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    The Next Morning

    Dana was gone when Lara got up. Just as well, she needed to find Gina. Strongly thinking that she had something to do with this. But she had to be sure. She was glad that Dana had decided to marry her but the circumstances of the proposal left a bad taste in her mouth. Setting Dana up…. no one hated Dana enough to do that. Had to be Gina.

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    2. Uhm right here, your biggest fan, wants to kill you!!I cringed when Lara said “marry me, Dana.” AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!!!!! I can’t believe Dana agreed!I think Shane is the mystery person in Starbucks. Something tells me she happened to be a starbucks that morning. I dunno. I HOPE it was someone to save the day. That is just too sick though, having that psychiatrist convince Alice it was Dana… man oh man. You have a twisted imagination do you know that? lol Thanks for dedicating that chapter to me! That was pretty sweet. Don’t worry, you’re not the only one being tortued by this story. ;) Hope you have an awesome holiday season. And I hope your creative juices flow steady. Don’t get too crazy, you have an obligation now!

    3. Kill you oh no i am going to do so much more. Torture sounds very nice at this point since that is exactly what you are doing to me!! Please i know you are going on a trip, but you better come back with force and make me proud or else….

    5. Oh the ANGST! I really enjoy the story but Lara and Gina really need to be bashed! I’m sure they’ll get what they deserve though…can’t wait till the next update!

    6. i know who heard..its not alice because that would be too easy..but anyway i guess I will have to see if i am right when u get back..have a safe trip….happy holidays to u too…laters.

    7. I have a few idea about who may have been in the bathroom but I can’t wit to find out so please post very soon I love it and it just get better and better

    9. oh WTF!!! you’re killing me here! ahhgg!! that gina is soooooo evil! it’s dana that heard everything, right? or is it….alice? please tell me the hellish chapter is the next one. hope you have a merry christmas and a happy new year, too! ^ – ^

    10. Tracy got in Alices head,Dana marryed to Lara I dont think so. Gina is going to get her ass kicked and so will Lare Tony better watch out. Even tho I’m upset with the way you ended this, Merry Christmas and Happy New Year thanks

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