Fan Fiction

    This story has been set to a rating of R. Age verification is required to proceed.

    Age Verification

    I am years of age as of today, November 11, 2026

    Enter your current age into the field provide above. Stories with a rating of R or NC-17 may contain material not suitable for children. LesFan requires that all individuals wishing to read these stories confirm they are of at least 17 years of age. LesFan uses the MPAA rating labeling system for all stories.

    LesFan will also make a best attempt to filter profane words in stories that are not rated R or NC-17 unless the individual confirms they are of at least 17 years of age.

    LesFan uses the following rating scale for stories.






    Submit

    Masked Feelings CH 16 Emotions run high

    Dana – Want me to go?

    Lara – No, you just got home. I can go.

    Dana – I got you parked in….. just take my car.

    Dana tosses her keys to Lara.

    Lara – Thanks….. see you shortly.

    Lara went to the supermarket to get something for dessert. Then it was off to the hardware store to make a copy of the key.

    Lara tried to call Gina before she got back to Dana’s but no answer. Gina stood by her phone and laughed. ” So now you want to talk…. too bad, Lara. I’ll talk to you…. when I’m damn well ready.”

    _______________________________________________________________________________

    Dana picked up the phone and dialed.

    Tina – Hello?

    Dana – Hey, it’s me. How did it go today?

    Tina – Well, we all got interviewed today.

    Dana – I got a call while I was gone, guess I have to go in first thing in the morning to see a detective. Landry, is it?

    Tina – Thats the detective assigned to Alice’s case. He seems pretty thorough. He asked a lot of questions. He seemed a little too interested in you, Dana.

    Dana – Oh? I’m sure it’s nothing.

    Tina – I don’t know…. I hope my feeling is wrong, but I think he is looking at you as a possible suspect.

    Dana – That’s ridiculous.

    Tina – Maybe so but you did take a piece of evidence from the crime scene.

    Dana – Oh, *****! I forgot about the rope…. what was I thinking?

    Tina – Just tell him everything, Dana. Make sure you bring the rope in with you.

    Dana – Yeah, sure. So how did Alice do? Did she remember anything?

    Tina – Still the same, no memories. This was really hard on her today between the interview and the exam.

    Dana – The Exam?

    Tina – The medical examination….. looking over every inch of her body and lets not forget the rape kit.

    Dana – Oh my God…. that must have been horrible for her. I wish she didn’t have to go through all that.

    Tina – I know….. when she was done, it was like she was victimized all over again.

    Dana – Maybe I should come over and talk to her.

    Tina – No, Dana. Bad idea. Gina’s coming over to visit Alice. Seeing you two get in a fight again, would make her feel worse.

    Comments

    1. Uhm right here, your biggest fan, wants to kill you!!I cringed when Lara said “marry me, Dana.” AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!!!!! I can’t believe Dana agreed!I think Shane is the mystery person in Starbucks. Something tells me she happened to be a starbucks that morning. I dunno. I HOPE it was someone to save the day. That is just too sick though, having that psychiatrist convince Alice it was Dana… man oh man. You have a twisted imagination do you know that? lol Thanks for dedicating that chapter to me! That was pretty sweet. Don’t worry, you’re not the only one being tortued by this story. ;) Hope you have an awesome holiday season. And I hope your creative juices flow steady. Don’t get too crazy, you have an obligation now!

    2. Kill you oh no i am going to do so much more. Torture sounds very nice at this point since that is exactly what you are doing to me!! Please i know you are going on a trip, but you better come back with force and make me proud or else….

    3. Oh the ANGST! I really enjoy the story but Lara and Gina really need to be bashed! I’m sure they’ll get what they deserve though…can’t wait till the next update!

    4. i know who heard..its not alice because that would be too easy..but anyway i guess I will have to see if i am right when u get back..have a safe trip….happy holidays to u too…laters.

    5. I have a few idea about who may have been in the bathroom but I can’t wit to find out so please post very soon I love it and it just get better and better

    6. oh WTF!!! you’re killing me here! ahhgg!! that gina is soooooo evil! it’s dana that heard everything, right? or is it….alice? please tell me the hellish chapter is the next one. hope you have a merry christmas and a happy new year, too! ^ – ^

    7. Tracy got in Alices head,Dana marryed to Lara I dont think so. Gina is going to get her ass kicked and so will Lare Tony better watch out. Even tho I’m upset with the way you ended this, Merry Christmas and Happy New Year thanks

    Leave a Reply