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    Masked Feelings CH 16 Emotions run high

    Story written on December 21, 2005 by brteyes.
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    Dana, the ultimate victim…. Alice’s altered mind…. Gina and Lara face off, yikes!

    Gina – I don’t know if I can be just your friend, Alice…. but I’ll try. You’ll let me go to the counselor with you tomorrow, won’t you? Since I am your friend and thats what friends do….

    Alice – Sure…. thanks for understanding.

    Gina – I’m going to go. It will drive me crazy watching a movie and not making out with my girlfriend.

    Alice was at a loss for words.

    Gina – Come on…. you can at least walk me to the door.

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    When Lara came home, Dana was sitting at the kitchen table… staring straight ahead.

    Lara – Dana, did you make the salad?

    Dana turned and looked at her with the puzzled face.

    Lara – Ok…. what happened? You’re freaking me out, Dana. Say something…

    Dana – I just talked to Tina about what happened at the police station today.

    Lara – And?

    Dana – They want to question me.

    Lara – Yeah, I already know that part.

    Dana – It…. it sounds like…. I’m a …. suspect.

    Lara – What?! Are you kidding me? That’s ridiculous!

    Dana – Thats what I said.

    Lara – You would never hurt Alice. Why would they even think that you did it?

    Dana – I don’t know. I guess it looks bad when you take something that could be evidence from the crime scene though.

    Lara’s voice raised a couple octaves higher.

    Lara – What?…. What did you find, Dana?

    Dana – A piece of rope.

    Lara – You took it? Where is it?

    Dana – It’s in my coat pocket, I think. I guess I better take it in with me when I go in the morning.

    Lara – Yeah, you better. And I’m going with you….. don’t tell me no, either.

    Dana – I guess I need the support. I just wish Alice could remember. She’s the key to clearing this all up and bringing down the person responsible.

    Lara – Damn….. Can things get any worse?

     

    Yes, Lara was worried about Dana, but feared more for herself. Lara had to make sure that rope disappeared. This would not be good for Dana, though. Lara would do whatever she had to, to get Dana out of this mess. Even kill, if it came down to it. Alice remembering was the biggest problem, Lara would go down for sure. And the threat….. who was her enemy?

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    2. Uhm right here, your biggest fan, wants to kill you!!I cringed when Lara said “marry me, Dana.” AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!!!!! I can’t believe Dana agreed!I think Shane is the mystery person in Starbucks. Something tells me she happened to be a starbucks that morning. I dunno. I HOPE it was someone to save the day. That is just too sick though, having that psychiatrist convince Alice it was Dana… man oh man. You have a twisted imagination do you know that? lol Thanks for dedicating that chapter to me! That was pretty sweet. Don’t worry, you’re not the only one being tortued by this story. ;) Hope you have an awesome holiday season. And I hope your creative juices flow steady. Don’t get too crazy, you have an obligation now!

    3. Kill you oh no i am going to do so much more. Torture sounds very nice at this point since that is exactly what you are doing to me!! Please i know you are going on a trip, but you better come back with force and make me proud or else….

    5. Oh the ANGST! I really enjoy the story but Lara and Gina really need to be bashed! I’m sure they’ll get what they deserve though…can’t wait till the next update!

    6. i know who heard..its not alice because that would be too easy..but anyway i guess I will have to see if i am right when u get back..have a safe trip….happy holidays to u too…laters.

    7. I have a few idea about who may have been in the bathroom but I can’t wit to find out so please post very soon I love it and it just get better and better

    9. oh WTF!!! you’re killing me here! ahhgg!! that gina is soooooo evil! it’s dana that heard everything, right? or is it….alice? please tell me the hellish chapter is the next one. hope you have a merry christmas and a happy new year, too! ^ – ^

    10. Tracy got in Alices head,Dana marryed to Lara I dont think so. Gina is going to get her ass kicked and so will Lare Tony better watch out. Even tho I’m upset with the way you ended this, Merry Christmas and Happy New Year thanks

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