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Masked Feelings CH 16 Emotions run high
Lara – Make yourself comfortable, Dana. I’ll go get you some water.
Lara came back with a bottle of wine instead. Handing her a glass.
Lara – I thought you needed this instead. Relax, Dana….
Dana downed the first glass pretty fast. Lara poured her another.
Lara – Are you feeling better?
Dana – I guess.
Lara – Thats good enough. Now tell me exactly what happened in there. Don’t leave anything out, Dana.
Dana told her everything…. down to the last detail.
Lara – Don’t worry about the rope. They can’t prove that you took anything. Its Bette’s word against yours. Telling the detective that you love Alice wasn’t your smartest move, Dana. Thats what gives motive.
Dana – How did you get to be so smart? I should’ve had you in there with me.
Dana was now almost finished with her third glass of wine. Really relaxing now….. stretching out on the couch.
Lara no longer wanted to talk about the disaster before them. Dana looked too good laying there. Dana noticed Lara looking at her…. wanting her. If she was possibly going down for something she didn’t do….. she might as well enjoy her free time.
Dana – What are you doing…. all the way over there? I’m yours for the taking.
Lara – I love it when you talk that way.
Dana – What else do you love?
Lara – I love you, Dana….. and the way you make me feel….
Dana – Just shut up and show me…
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It was starting to happen already. Gina could tell Alice was remembering something…. seeing her flinch, was surely a sign.
Gina – Here we are. Want me to come in for awhile?
Alice – No, I think I’m going to lay down and take a nap.
Gina – Yes, please get some rest. I’ll check on you later.
Alice – See you later.
Gina – Sweet dreams, Alice.
Alice’s flashes were becoming more frequent and more vivid. Seeing objects more clearly, a knife and a flame. When she fell asleep….. the dreams gave her memories life. Flooding her head with torture and lots of pain. Writhing under the assault. Over and over again, reliving it all. Making out a figure…. the one responsible for her misery….. screaming out her name.
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(45 votes, average: 4.00 out of 5)
wow things keep getting better, eh..lol I suppose we can only hope whoever heard what happened has bigger balls than gina or lara.
Uhm right here, your biggest fan, wants to kill you!!I cringed when Lara said “marry me, Dana.” AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!!!!! I can’t believe Dana agreed!I think Shane is the mystery person in Starbucks. Something tells me she happened to be a starbucks that morning. I dunno. I HOPE it was someone to save the day. That is just too sick though, having that psychiatrist convince Alice it was Dana… man oh man. You have a twisted imagination do you know that? lol Thanks for dedicating that chapter to me! That was pretty sweet. Don’t worry, you’re not the only one being tortued by this story. ;) Hope you have an awesome holiday season. And I hope your creative juices flow steady. Don’t get too crazy, you have an obligation now!
Kill you oh no i am going to do so much more. Torture sounds very nice at this point since that is exactly what you are doing to me!! Please i know you are going on a trip, but you better come back with force and make me proud or else….
Lara asked Dana to marry her? God, I hate her so much right now. I really wonder who overheard….please post soon!
Oh the ANGST! I really enjoy the story but Lara and Gina really need to be bashed! I’m sure they’ll get what they deserve though…can’t wait till the next update!
i know who heard..its not alice because that would be too easy..but anyway i guess I will have to see if i am right when u get back..have a safe trip….happy holidays to u too…laters.
I have a few idea about who may have been in the bathroom but I can’t wit to find out so please post very soon I love it and it just get better and better
and I really hope that dana does not marry lara so wrong I just hope that they all find out soon
oh WTF!!! you’re killing me here! ahhgg!! that gina is soooooo evil! it’s dana that heard everything, right? or is it….alice? please tell me the hellish chapter is the next one. hope you have a merry christmas and a happy new year, too! ^ – ^
Tracy got in Alices head,Dana marryed to Lara I dont think so. Gina is going to get her ass kicked and so will Lare Tony better watch out. Even tho I’m upset with the way you ended this, Merry Christmas and Happy New Year thanks