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Masked Feelings CH 33, More Teasing?
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Roxy pulled up in front of Dana’s house. Before going in, she recreated in her mind the events that occured that day. The scene ran through her head like a movie in slow motion. Roxy taking her 9mm out of the holster…. shooting Lara in the chest twice. Watching Lara’s body twitching from the impact of each bullet….. falling face first to the floor. She thought it odd that Lara fell face first. Normally an impact like that would send someone sailing backwards…. but each circumstance was different.
She steps out of her SUV. Making her way up to the house, she unlocks the door. Ducking under the yellow tape, Roxy lets herself inside. The smell of chlorine filling her nostrils, giving her the impression of being at the public swimming pool. The odor got stronger as she made her way to the bedroom. Her team had come in and collected evidence, most assuredly not any of it would give her what she needed…. the proof of Lara’s demise. Someone had gone to extreme measures to make sure nothing else would be found. The place was wiped clean as well as huge bleach stains on the carpet. It was proving hard to stay one step ahead of the game when so much was going on. Now Roxy would have to wait and see what the evidence collected showed.
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Alice liked the easy access those hospital gowns possessed. Never breaking off the kiss, Alice reaches behind with her good arm to untie it….. so she could take it off. The nurse clearing her throat again, much louder this time. Both turning to look at her …. groaning with frustration.
The nurse looks at Alice.
Nurse – Are you her spouse?
Alice – Nope.
Nurse – Well, you’re going to have to leave for a few minutes while I take her vitals.
Dana – Its ok. I want her to stay.
Nurse – I advise against it. Your bandages need changing, too.
Alice – It’s ok, Dana. I’ll wait outside.
Dana – Please stay, Alice.
Alice – I’ll be back in a few minutes. I want to grab a cup of coffee.
Alice left before Dana could beg her to stay again. Truth be told, Alice couldn’t handle seeing Dana’s scars again. She knew eventually she would have to see them, especially if they pursued this relationship. For now though, she just couldn’t deal with the fact that Dana was hurt. Alice could barely look at her own scars. The scars that they both had on the inside would surely be bigger then the ones on the surface. Those would be the most difficult to heal.
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AWESOME update baby! You better make sure Alice behaves herself! What is this? They are happy, they are together, the bitches are dead or so I think, yet there is still Roxy. If they don’t stay together I have no hope, and who knows where you’ll go with this sequel. Dana cannot find out about what happened, the shit will hit the fan. Have you really written 33 chapters? wow, it doesn’t seem like that many. Not that I’m complaining of course. Aw this was a really good update, very steamy in the hospital room. Yeah yeah. I can’t wait for the next update as always, yes I feel honored knowing when they’re coming out. But that’s the plus of being your biggest fan, dontcha think? You’re amazing, this story is amazing, and I can’t wait to read more. Until next time my love….
That was fantastic, I loved the hospital scene..;-)) Please let Roxy back of from Alice. I want happy Danish…great update, keep um coming!
oh man Alice and Dana hospital scene pretty caliente! Oy Alice doesn’t want to hurt Dana physicaly, but if Dana catches whats going on with Roxy and her its gonna hurt a lot more. Hope you post soon!!
awesome update!! yes, you redeemed yourself not that u needed to. you do know that i was only joking when i said u were mean, right? i even wrote “j/k” afterwards. anyways, loved the hospital scene. dana sure is holding a grudge against roxy. it’d be very bad if dana finds out about roxy and alice any time soon. roxy better keep things professional or get herself a woman. can’t wait to read what tony does. so the sequel’s gonna be more twisted. should i be worried?
I love my danish together – in a hospital bed… very naughty! lol You made me happy for a little while – until I started to realize that Roxy’s feelings for Alice are becoming a problem. I like the aggressive Dana. I wonder how hard she’s going to be able to fight for Alice. There’s still Lara (maybe), Tony and Roxy to deal with … lots of drama – good job, my friend…
Loved Dana and Alice in the hospital.,Still got to get Roxy into someone else and not Alice. This was really great. thanks
I saw that it was rated NC-17, but when Alice and Dana got interrupted and with Roxy joining them, I tought they wouldn’t share a moment…and that Alice and Roxy would end up together again at Alice’s house (Alice being all turned on by the earlier encounter with Dana). I’m so glad that you let Dana and Alice be the ones who were having all the fun (without interruptions!). :P And lets keep it that way…I agree with Tanja, please let Roxy back of from Alice! (But then again, I think you will suprise me with this new developement…) And Alice being all alone at Gina’s funeral (altough, Roxy is protecting her from a distance). I’ve got the feeling something is gonna happen to Alice. :S
Thanks so much for the Danish moment. Loved that! But my views of Roxy are starting to change, I think she’s a manipulator. She says that Alice and Dana belong together and are so in love yet she purposely puts herself in compromising situations where she has controlling herself. Alice needs to make sure that Roxy knows where she stands- which is of course with Dana! ;) Right…! Great update I can’t wait for Dana to come home so we can have more Danish moments!!! Update soon!
god I love this story so much and you write it so well please post soon as I can’t wait to see what happens next great post as always
I just read it and man I agree with everyone, great hosp. scence a lot better then the one they’re going to show this Sun. I’m gonna miss them…a lot. Hope ya post soon, Cheers. Peace