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Tony – What do you know about family, Alice? Your’s is hardly normal. My family is always there for me, can you say the same?
Alice – Your’s is normal? That’s hilarious…… Your’s is like the Addams family with the exception that you’re a bunch of killers.
Tony – Better watch what you say… this is your family now too.
Alice – I’ll never look at them that way.
Tony – You will when our son is born.
Alice – I wouldn’t want this kind of life for any child of mine.
Tony – It’s destiny and you can’t change that.
Alice – You are so delusional… being forced to do something is not destiny.
Tony – You see it your way, I see it mine.
Alice – I need to go back and get my things at the motel… at least my purse.
Tony – Everything is being taken care of.
Alice – And I want to be sure that Dana is alright….
Tony – She’s fine as long as you’re with me. Leave me and see how quickly things might change.
Alice – Always with the threats….
Tony – Only until you fall in love with me.
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His henchman stood by the door, guarding it so she couldn’t leave. He wouldn’t talk but only looked in her direction. Dana was creeped out by the thought that this was the man that had touched her. She wasn’t entirely sure that nothing happened as Alice said. He was looking at her like a hungry dog drooling over a t-bone steak.
Dana – I think it’s safe to leave now.
The man shook his head.
Dana – Can I at least go to the bathroom?
The man looked like he was actually thinking about it.
Dana – While you’re thinking about it, I’ll just go.
She headed for the bathroom and the man followed.
Dana – Do you mind? I’d like some privacy.
He glanced inside the room. Dana was trying to block the view of the phone on the wall by closing the door just a bit.
"Leave it open."
"Turn around then, I don’t need an audience."
Alice’s cell phone that’s sitting on the dresser rings. The man turns his head away from her for what was only a few seconds. Dana didn’t have much time to react and grabbed the closest thing to her… a can of hair spray. When he spun his head back around, she was ready for him. She sprayed him directly in the face. He immediately pawed at his eyes and cursed out loud. Dana ran past him, intending on going for the door. The man managed to trip her and she fell to the floor.
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Welcome Bak :D. Ur not gettin rid of me no matter how hard u make it to read lol i will just have to complain about it and then compliment u on ur great writing skills lol. What a chapter this was, reli lookin forward to the next one :D. Poor Roxy i know i say it everytime but she was so close to freedom! And now she on a downward spiral to the worst addiction possible. Im pleased how Dana is fighting for Alice,even thou it nearly got her raped :O! Thnk god for Sharon and who ever thought we wud be saying tht! I hate Tony more and more everytime i read a new chapter i reli do! I reli hope David gets to him. Anyway i just loved this chapter and reli am lookin forward to the next one so hit me with wat ya got :P lol Thnks for some fab story writing. XxX
So happy to see you back!! I’m glad to hear I helped you in some small way. Don’t worry: I plan to stick with you — as rough as it may get. You really are an amazing writer. Just try to watch out for our girls, ‘kay? David has such evil plans for them. On to comments… I feel so bad for Roxy. She is going through hell and the one thing she had was that little bit of fight left. Not only did it not get her free, but, now David is aware of it and, I’m sure, will make sure it is destroyed. Is the voice that of her dead girlfriend? At least maybe that is some small comfort to her — or an impetus to try and join her. Makes me wonder if the tub thing was an accident on her part or not. I won’t be sending any flowers to Brent’s funeral. I wonder why David told Roxy about Alice/Tony. I would think that would harden her resolve. I understand why Dana may have needed some time to absorb what Alice said, but, it still was a bad idea. I am glad Alice found her. I am also glad Alice came clean on almost the whole truth and was able to convince Dana. I think it was smart of her to keep back what she did and that Dana will understand if it does come out. Tony is unbelievable. Alice will never love him. At least Dana knows Alice wants nothing to do with him — but has no choice right now. So glad Dana was able to fight back with the help of Sharon. Maybe this odd sequence of events may help their relationship. Feel free to have the henchman shot in the balls and then hauled off by the police. I don’t think the “family” would bail him out. And where the hell was David when Tony was taking Alice away? He knew there was something going on there. As if I need more reasons to hate David… I have circled August 21st on my calendar. And I will make sure to have plenty of wine on hand. Thanks for continuing on, brteyes! Great chapter!!
Firstly, I would like to thank The Pineapple Head for requesting your next chapter as her birthday present. Honestly, all week long I was thinking that it would be about time for your next update. I am thrilled that you posted tonight. You amaze me each time with your shout outs. One can easily post them as a chapter all by themselves. You obviously put a lot of thought into them and they are much appreciated. So karma prevailed with Brent. I wished for a few seconds that Roxy could have escaped. I couldn’t believe that David had laced her food for weeks. David, as insane as he was, really knew how to meticulously execute his revenge. btw, “Lara was just as crazy if not more” did not sound good. Because in the past, Lara did not do half the stuff that David had done to Roxy. That could only mean one thing – Lara was still alive. And she would be back for more evil deeds? Dun dun dun dun … THANK YOU for granting A & D a chance to talk after the chaotic fire. I thought the talk went really well even though there was no conclusion as to how to get out of their predicament. It was horrible for D to find out A made the sacrifice for her. I won’t even know how anyone can get beyond that. For the past weeks, I could not stop thinking that D was taken by Tony. Thank goodness I was wrong. Witness Protection Program? I have to agree with A that D would resent her later. Maybe it would not have to come to that.I love a feisty Dana and am glad that she fought off the A-hole as much as she could. That was a close call. Thank you for Sharon, being the heroine of the night. May I suggest that D would shoot him between his legs because he was trying to attacking Sharon. Just make sure that D disengaged the safety device first. lol. brteyes, I promise that I will here on the 21st unless for some unforeseen circumstances. I will not miss any posts of the story ‘coz they are all so good and addicting. Thank you very much again for this incredible story!!
I love Sharon!!!!! So glad she came in time to save Dana. This story is getting better and better. The girls seem to be fighting back and that’s more than welcome. And no, your chapters aren’t hard to read. I do enjoy each one of them and I hope you never stop writing this amazing fic. What other obligations do you have? Brushing your teeth and eating doesn’t count, lol. Does it mean you don’t want to have my number? So not nice of you, missy. I thought we could be at least friends….now we can forget about that;-(( Your gf hates that you’re bi??? Why are you with her then? She must be a real witch, hmmmm? If it shouldn’t work out with her you can try it out with me. But then you’ll need my number, lol. You can pm me when you’re single again. I wouldn’t say that this story is my drug….but it’s close to that. And I won’t be begging, not for that, lol. There are better things, right? Is your gf even jealous? Or are you allowed to flirt with me? Because, that’s what you’re doing here, lol. You better tell her I’m your sister or she’s not gonna let you write anymore. Am looking forward to the 21st;-))) Hope you fill this day with angst, death and a lot of drama. See you around, missy!
Damn, this was super evil towards the end. I’m very happy that Sharon came along and hit that fucking bastard. I’d rather hit him myself but I’m not in the story, lol. I’m sorry for not being able to read this chapter when it came out. I had some computer problems and I had no internet as you know. Guess, the internet became my drug, lol. Roxy could have escaped and I’d rather see that then David having the control over her again. I wish he wouldn’t come in time to stop her. At least, one bastard had to die already. Brent deserved that…..absolutely. Now it’s Tony and David who have to say goodbye to their lives. When will this happen, hmmm? Will you ever free Roxy or will she stay in this bunker forever? I didn’t know that “Dick” made her take heroin when she was younger. This is just awful but I constantly hope that she’ll become stronger and fight for her life. I can’t see her giving up. You’re very evil, darlin’….but I love it, lol. Just more of it and please kill someone who really deserves that (and I mean both David and Tony). I’m confident that Roxy, although she’s taking drugs, will make it through this hard time. Maybe she just needs some inspiration, someone from the past like you mentioned in this chapter…..someone that becomes real to her in her mind. It won’t matter if she hallucinates in that time. It’ll help her extremely. Please free Roxy!!! The drama about Dana and Alice is keeping me conflicted. On the one hand I want to see them together, fighting every single battle they might encounter….and on the other hand I want them to have separate lives. I don’t want to sound cold or anything but it’s really breaking my heart when I see them lose what they rebuilt after so many losses. This isn’t fair to anyone, especially not to Danish. At least, Dana knows about Tony and Alice. Of course it wasn’t easy for her to hear all the details. I wouldn’t know how I’d react if this happened to me but I wouldn’t sit on my butt…..just as Dana seems to do. We need more Danish action here. Dana has to learn kung-fu or something like that and kick those gangster’s butts, lol. It was a very dramatic scene when Tony and his henchman broke into this motel room and Tony took Alice with him. I wanted to scream…..and I scream lately all the time when I read your chapters, lol. You don’t want me to lose my voice, do you? *wink* So, who are you going to kill in the nearer future? Mind to tell me or is this still a secret? Sharon’s past would interest me as well. I’d like to know what made her so proud and grave….and pretty much emotionless. Yes, you should make Alice pregnant but only with Dana’s sperm, lol. Now that we know it’s not possible, don’t make her pregnant, please. See, I’m begging again. I still want Dana by the way. Will you fulfil me that wish? Please? *sigh* I’m sorry, but I won’t write you a rabbit story. Not today, not tomorrow….never ever! I’m gonna write you something else instead, okay? And speaking of waiting: I changed my mind completely. It’ll be 3 hours if you’re okay with it. Am having different plans now and I’m certain you won’t like it, lol. Please excuse my late commenting. I’ll try to do better next time, means the 21st. I’ll be asleep at the time you’ll post but I’ll write you a comment the first thing I get home from workïŠ Thank you for this beautifully angsty chapter. I hope there are more to come in the future. Don’t be so lazy and write more, lol. Have a wonderful day and enjoy this shiny Sunday;-)) Love you, brteyes!