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Match Made
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“Bette I can’t promise you that my actions and words will never hurt you but I can promise that I will never consciously hurt or do wrong by you.” It was the best I could do, it was the best anyone could do, nevertheless I find myself wanting to backpedal when I see the hesitation in her eyes. Perhaps I should have promised her the impossible.
“I can’t promise more. I’m sorry”
“Don’t be. I’d be selfish to ask for more and –“ her gaze drifts down from my eyes to lips. “and I’d hate for a weak lie to pass these lips” she says this with a look that can only be described as ravenous. Her index finger traces my bottom lip in the sweetest most deliberate way, tantalising me to do something. I accept the dare and suck her finger into my mouth, smiling against it when I hear a sharp catch in her breath.
“Tinaaa” she groans.
I suck her finger in deeper trying to create and envelope it with as much wetness as possible. She trembles when my tongue slides up against the pad of her finger tip. I’ve never been one to dominate my lover but I can’t help the rush of pleasure I get from knowing I have the ability to make her tremble by just sucking on her finger. Even with her on top, I feel in control.
“How much do you want me?” I ask, enjoying this new power I’ve been bestowed.
“A-a lot” she pants, frowning when I hold out on pleasuring her finger.
“How much?” I repeat firmly, refusing to accept her persisting finger back into the warmth of my mouth. “Details Bette, I need details”
As infuriated as she looks Bette doesn’t rush to answer. In true Bette Porter fashion she takes her time and evaluates my question. Its amazing to watch her mind at work, knowing that to her any odd answer wouldn’t do, it’d have to epitomise her core desire and place me right on top.
“I want you more than a Luc Tuymans painting” the intensity with which she says it sends a delightful shiver through me.
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Love your writing!
That was pretty good. Thanks for posting.
Thanx for writing!
WOW.Great.Thank you.PPS
Need more… Thanks for sharing.
Damn it stops there…. i love this story and if i say so Ally this is your best fic yet… beautifully written!
hello. i am new to this fanfiction site and im thoroughly enjoying stories here. will there be any update on this story? its really good
Wow…All a dream?!…Come on?. I’m confused….is this a one off?……will read again, just to be sure. ^_^… and thanks for this.
Thanks for writing!
Thanks for writing!
Ohhh it was all a dream. A very nice one, though. ;P Who knows what breakfast will lead to? Thanks for the post! :)
so good ally so good!!! more please pretty please thankssss!!! :)
EXCELLENT! That was an amazing dream! Thank you!
That was fantastic, couldn’t believe it was all a dream. I was hoping they were finally together. Must go back and read the other chapters before this one. Loved the update. Thanks for posting.
Okay, okay now that I’ve caught my breath and drank a freezing cold cup of water, I gotta say you tease! Hahaha
Read both your updates on this story. Wonderful thank you.
Sexy
So freaking HOT! I have other comments, but it’s past 9:30 for me. hehehee!!!
I will keep telling you how brilliant you are though. Wonderfully worded and exceptionally paced.
Keep up the good writing my little blueberry pancake. ;)