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Mending Hearts – Chapter 5
Id say that is totally up to you.
Meaning?
Stay single for a while and give everyone a chance to know independent, strong willed, enchanting Tina.
Tina laughed, Well when you put it that way how can I not?
Just then Tina looked up and saw Shane coming through the door.
Shit, shit. I didnt think anyone from the gang would be here. Why isnt she at milk.
Perhaps she is looking for a new supply of women.
So she and Carmen never straightened things out?
Oh they straightened things out all right. Carmen told Shane to fuck off and thats exactly what Shane has been doing. Fucking every woman she can get her hands on, fucking up at work, fucking up with her friends. She is on a downward spiral that none of us can seem to pull her out from.
Ive missed out on a lot havent I? I have so many regrets Helena. I wish I could be of some help but Im sure she wont talk to me.
Looks like youre going to find out sooner rather than later. She is heading our way.
Oh hell. I took a long swig of my beer and turned to face Shane.
Hey Helena. Tina, would you like to dance?
She must see the look of astonishment on my face and she says What? Is there a problem? Youre here and that must mean you want to have some fun. Im all about fun these days right Helena?
Shane, I think your invitation has nothing to do with fun.
Youre wrong Helena. I havent seen Tina in what, about a year, right Tee? I just want to dance and have a chance to catch up. We can swap stories about sucking guys off. I made a lot of money doing that once upon a time. What you say Tina? Want to tell me how it got your rocks off? The power you felt when you had him in your mouth. Did you swallow? Did you let him lick you the way Bette did?”
I had stood there long enough thinking I deserved the verbal abuse but my temper finally blew at the mention of Bettes name. I swung my right hand up and smacked her hard enough on the face to send her flying back into Helenas arms. Helena had quick reflexes and managed to catch her before she hit the ground. I was towering over her now as I said with vehemence in my voice that I didnt even recognize, Dont you ever compare my past with yours. We each made choices that we are going to have to live with for the rest of our lives. Im trying to make amends. How about you? How long are you going to wallow in that pool of self-pity and loathing? You know Shane, were not that different except I have the balls to try and start over. Where is your sense of self worth? You made a huge mistake Shane but you need to move past it and move on. Dont get lost in the past.
Shane struggled out of Helenas arms and came towards me. We were face-to-face, inches apart. This is your fault. You showed me that forever is never meant to be. I watched as you systematically undermined Bettes confidence and self worth. You tore her heart to shreds, unable to forgive her past indiscretions. Dont you dare lecture me you have no right.
Tears cascaded softly down my face as her harsh words sunk into my rattled brain and heart. Youre right. Im sorry. So very sorry.
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(39 votes, average: 4.59 out of 5)
chase keep um cumming! please let bette/gang walk in please LOV THE E-MAIL. POST SOON
Wow. Great chapter. Loving the story, completely intrigued as to how this is all going to pan out. So glad I found your story. Genius. Thanks for writing.
luved the first e-mail, and then you hit with the rest of the story, great one two punch!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
a hard works from Shane but Tina deserves that! but i hope Tina keep strong abut star over cause won’t be easy for her
WOW – that was one very very powerful chapter. I love reading what you write – from sexy to the dramatic you bring it all. Thanks.
oh my god that was so good please again.
Couldn’t see Bette send something that vile to anyone. Shane was way out of line. What happen between Bette and Tina ,Bette could have left and choose not to. Glad that Bette got at least part of Angie upbring. thanks
lol.. You had me with the 1st email. Shane shouldn’t blame Tina for her own insecurity of commitment. Learn from your mistakes Tina and Shane. Love it, please continue
Shane had every right to say those things to Tina. Everyone has always been so nice and accomodating to Tina. Shane did look up to them and to see them crumble probably scared the crap out of her. If Bette couldn’t keep Tina how was she going to keep Carmen? Also Shane articulated exactly what Tina did with her passive aggressive nature, she didn’t even deny it. Tina was cruel and I don’t believe she couldn’t stop herself. Tina was out of line with the slap who is she to hit Shane? First she hits Bette, now Shane, issues are still there with this chick. Too bad Tina will get to see a pregnant Bette. Fun story. Can we get daily doses?
and I am sorry that this chapter is tooooo short…great Chase, now I wait… impatientlylol
I would have loved to have seen Tina’s face if Bette sent the first e-mail. Lol. Love the story, please post soon.
Damn you funny, you got me with the first e-mail, I though what the hell and I just laugh. Damn sad to see Shane and Tina like this. Ok now this is sad and hope they will be ok when they see each other.
oh please, post an update, I miss your story, thank you :-)
Please post again soon…I want Tina to see Bette pregnant and see that she didn’t curl up and die without her!
Chase….PLEASE post again, I have read and re-read this story over and over waiting for an update. If it sounds like I am begging…it’s because it’s true….lol
Man Chase what can I do to get you to come back and post again on this story? I miss this story so much. I was a silent reader for so long but now I am screaming from the rooftops…COME BACK CHASE…COME BACK.
So wish you’d added more to this story – i was a good start – no complaints if you were to pick it up again…
god i wish you would finish this story…it has the potental to be something wonderful it started off great…plz
WoW! You almost had me crying! God! I just caight up with this story… Please continue! This is sssoooooooooooooooo what should be happening! Tina finally realizing what she has done!
Sad to see Shane falling apart just as Tina’s beginning to get her shit together. It’s understandable that Shane should be disappointed and hurt by what Tina’s done, but to blame her for her own poor choices is unfair. Somebody needs to kick Shane’s ass, not literally, bad enough Tina slapped her.
OMG you had me there with that first e-mail lol. Glad Bette didn’t send that one. Please post more often.
This was a great chapter Chase :-)!
OMG, That was so great. Tina hitting Shane WOW!!!! I loved Bette’s first e-mail. More Soon Please
WoW, that was great…intense! I just have a question, What was wrong with sending the first e-mail?(lol..joking..not really! lol) I am so glad you don’t have Bette wallowing in pity and longing.I have questions about the sperm donor and sorts but I am sure all will be revealed soon. Tina has got a tough road ahead of her.I am glad she has Helena with her, despite my feelings for tina at the moment, she does need someone there for her. Shane has no right to judge with all the shit she has done, but I can understand where she is coming from. Hopefully that slapped knock sensed into her, when will shane learn to love herself, until then she can’t really love anyone else. Looking very forward to your next post! Your stories are aleays the best!
I thought maybe Bette would accidentally hit the send button on that first email. LMAO I have to agree with funnyone yet again. Shane shouldn’t blame Tina for her shortcomings.
Ladies start your engines…you came roaring out of the starting gate with this one. I was glued to the screen from start to finish. The first email was waay funny, I giggle even now when I think about it. Tina’s melt down reminds me of Bette’s car accident where she is screaming and grabbing the guy’s collar saying who says I’m not sorry. This was fun to read.
I love that, simply love that.
OMG..how many times have I typed an email just to feel better and then revise it so I could send it off. Chase….this is awesome…I will take once a week, once a month…as long as you continue this wonderful story.
Chase… long time… i loved the first e mail… and what shane said… wow… talk about hitting the nail on the head… so does bette now walk into the bar… come on chase… bring it on
Chase…Your tone is always spot on. No different today. Glad to see Bette has more of a backbone than on the show during S3.Tina doesn’t take to the truth to well, eh?
Does this mean that Tina is now coming to her senses? Is she now going to start to fight for her lost love? It may take Shane rattling her cage a little to get Tina to take a closer look at herself with and without Bette. She is less happier without Bette than at anytime when she was with Bette. Those walls need to have an opening somewhere. It is time for Tina to find that opening and stop allowing Bette to add more and more steel to those walls.
you know how to hook up the people to a history…don’t you?
I like it, i hope Bette has decided to go out as well, so they meet. If not, i can’t wait for the first meeting with her and kit. Post soon, thanks
Wow Chase, that was simply an over-powering update. I could expect nothing less from you as your writing is amazing! I can’t, can’t, can’t wait for the next episode. Always a Fan, MIAMIGRL
please, we’re still waiting for this story to continue, please don’t stop it there, post again ! I love your story and your writing :-)
Dear Diary…it’s now into the 4th month here in limbo, and I think maybe I won’t get rescued. I hope I am wrong…cause I love this story so…Oh Auntie Em…Oh Toto…there’s no place like home…There’s no place like home.
Hiya Chase…I once again read this story and I feel as strongly about it as I did 7 years ago…wow 7years. I would love for you to continue this story as I’m sure others would also. You writers have so much power. We are at your mercy.