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Mesmerized part 12
Venus won the first set and I was getting tired, she was playing very well, as always. Despite this, I remained optimistic and determined, looking up at Alice every now and then to calm down and focus my mind. Every time I glanced at her she was looking at me intensely, a huge smile on her face.
I managed to fight back and I won the second set, only just. Both of us fought hard and we often ended up in a pattern, one of us winning one point and the other winning the next. The third set was very much in like this and we soon reached 5-5.
My nerves returned as we neared the end. Continuing the pattern, we won a point each, both of us playing fiercely and every time I thought I had set up a difficult shot for Venus she managed, somehow, to return it. There were many shots that were incredibly hard to reach but I used all my strength and managed to reach most of them.
As time passed I noticed that Venus seemed to be getting tired and she missing some of the difficult shots I fired at her. I used this to my advantage and managed to win the next set, making it 6-5. All I needed to do now was win the next set and I would win. This realization boosted my energy and I pushed my tiredness to the back of my mind.
I won the first two games before Venus once again made it hard and regained two games. I was determined not to let her win and I fought until I had the lead I needed, making it 5-3 and match point.
The crowd fell silent as I prepared myself to serve. Once again I turned my head and searched out my girlfriend in the stand. I found her, the only one standing and her hands clasped together, still smiling widely at me. Our eyes met and for a moment all I could think of was how beautiful she is and I got lost in her deep brown eyes. I then remembered where I was and I sucked in my breath, turning to face my opponent. I threw the ball up above me and hit is hard, using all of my strength. It must have been my fastest ever serve and I watched it sail over the net and straight past Venus.
I stood in shock as the umpire called Ace and declared that I had won the game. I was still stood firmly in that spot as the crowd let out a deafening cheer and Venus ran over to shake my hand. I snapped out of it as she took my hand and smiled at me.
“Congratulations Dana” She knows my name. Venus Williams knows my name- and I’ve just beaten her!
My next thought was to get to Alice immediately. I ran through the gate at the side of the caught and rushed up the stairs to where she was standing. She was just about to congratulate me before I stopped her by pulling her into a firm kiss, my hands on the side of her face. We stood, lost in this kiss as people cheered around us and cameras flashed and snapped. I pulled apart, straight into a hug, holding my girlfriend as close as I could and sinking into her warm embrace. I had never felt happier as she rested her head on my shoulder.
I felt her breath against the side of my face and Alice whispered into my ear. “I’m so proud of you. I love you so much”.
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(26 votes, average: 3.42 out of 5)
I’m glad you kept going, I didn’t want to have to make good on my threat on the boards. This is excellent, yay!
I’m happy you decided to continue also. This stroy is good, dont doubt that. The things you write are very realistic, and very in character. I loved this update. The situation about the broken miror between Danish was very realistic, and hot. This whole update was just adorable. Good job!
Yay I’m so glad you decided to continue this, it’s super cute. Well done :)
Yip Im pleased you contuined the story. I wonder what now for Dana after she has the 2 things in the world she wanted the most, that being Alice and wimbledon championship.
I can only echo what all the previous ladies have said, I am really glad you are continuing this fiction and look forward to more and more.