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Part 3 – Into the Wild.
“Helena!” Otto shouted, “Come see …”
She left the small group of students she was sat with, their morning lesson going on in the middle of the camp as the men drafted in to help with the building repairs at the school got on with their job. She smiled to one of the little girls sitting on her own beneath a tree, her head buried in a picture book,
“Natonya … fetch some water for the men,”
Her liberated life somewhat turned on it’s head; Helena smiled as the little girl leapt to her feet, running off in the direction of the well, delighted to be asked. She joined Otto on the steps of the falling down building, eager to see how they were getting on.
“I think you will be pleased,” he said quietly, taking her by the arm as they walked together up the steps, at the doorway they paused and he covered her eyes with a slightly grubby hand, “Ready?”
She nodded,
He released his hold and allowed her to wander in. The roof was finished now, where before the beams were bare and the iron sheet rotted and exposed, a whole new sheet roof had been fitted. The clay floor was covered, every inch in brightly coloured mats and in keeping with the local traditions Helena paused before entering, slipping off her shoes at the door.
She walked barefoot around, running her fingertips across the bumpy wooden surface of the crafted benches, laid out carefully in rows. Hanging in the centre of the front wall was the middling sized blackboard she’d managed to hunt down in Dar es Salaam. She came to a stop in front of it, tears trickling down her face as she gazed at the pictures and drawings the children had put there, with words of love and affection for their ‘Mama Helena’.
Silent and muffled giggles from behind broke her stare and she turned to see Sarah with the group of children from their earlier lesson standing huddled in the doorway.
She grinned, “I love it, it’s fantastic, it’s the best schoolroom I’ve ever seen!”
Sarah smiled, her recognition the children’s go ahead to race inside and look around. She joined Helena by the blackboard, overwhelmed by the children’s awe filled eyes as they ran round,
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*jaw hits ground* never…ever…perhaps ever…even perhaps in your other stories…have i ever understood the tina/bette thing like i get it here…i spent half that story with my eyes getting all teary, what on EARTH is wrong with me? *grin* that was beautiful sweety, really, it was. and no, i’m not trying to embarass you, i’m just telling everyone the facts: you’re beautiful in person and as a writer. i honestly can’t wait for this to move onward not because it’s already not amazing, but because the way these two are interacting, so absolutely freely, fits completely with our little ‘goal’. it really does, because it’s that openess that is so amazing in this story, between the main characters. ok, gonna shut up now. *grin* xoxoxox baby, excellent work!
*falls over with goofy grin on face*
Well… golly. That was really… nice? splendid? divine? All of the previous? How is the lovely Hels (and this Helena really is more than lovely, she’s just… she’s More Than, isn’t she? She’s so much more than she used to be) gonna fit in here? How do you top perfection? I bet you can, so do post more, sofa. Can’t wait for the next. Thanks
i agree…i love helena in this story…she’s really a lovely human being…ok ok, i’ll stop, but your stories are always so wonderfully written!!! ;) xx
Ah Ms. sofa, I’m not your nemesis. I reject that role. And clearly the various pants were layered correctly. So, in case you need me to tell you, that was sweet and tender, sexy and intelligent. But I’m glad that B & T got a room to romp in the second night. Once while camping with my parents a young couple with a tent not far from our campsite went to turn in for the night. Inside the tent they had their flashlight on (that’s a torch to you lot) and started to remove their clothes for the night which provided all the other campers a silhouette striptease. They doused the light when the giggling and catcalls began. City-folk. You’ve got to love them. I can’t promise I’ll have an anecdote for every chapter, but I’ll try.
Hey Sofa… I conducted a poll and everyone feels you should quit your “day job” and write Tibette fan-fic, full-time!!!…:} This story is sending warm fuzzies all over the place… love how Helena is transforming..and how something old and familiar (Tibette love) becomes “new” and exciting in a different place…like it has been on a slow simmer for so long, and the flame finally ignited… wow!…amazing!!!!
I think I voted twice …um no three times or may be more in bxmom’s poll:), love this PPS, this story is just amazing.
Is this a Bette/Tina story?
this is the second OMFG scene,lol wow..
From the storyline, to the dialogue, to the setting, every part of this is absolutely spectacular!!! Thanks!
I think I may need to hop in the shower after that one.
What a great read! I think that was everything and more as far as reconnections go.You do turn out page after page of sweet lovin spiced up with very interesting character developments. Just fan-f****tastic!
Hmmm. Gonna be hard for Helena to top this. Fabulous as ever. Everything. Dialogue, sex, plot, atmosphere!! Mwah!!
wow… WOW!!!!
Damn woman that was so loving and sweet!!!! Did I say HOT!!!! too. Thank you PPVS
Sizzling reconnection! That was so very sexy while still such a tender and loving moment between the two.
Nice very nice
WOW!
Repeat all comments above!