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“Shane…are you ok?” She asks amused by my torment.
“No….I need to go wash my face or something…I’ll be right back.”
I feel Carmen’s eyes on me as I walk way to cool past her, past the male flight attendants little serving area. Feel is a four letter word. So is need. I need to feel Carmen hot and pressed up against me. Turning that little knob thing on the door of the restroom I think how sleazy it is to fuck in an airplane bathroom. Of all the dirty, gross places…..
“…..Shane…open up…” Carmen tries to whisper.
“Carmen….I will be out in a second.”
“Open the fucking door….come on…”
So I open the door. And before I can think. She is on me. Like I wanted. Her tongue is fighting for control in my mouth. Her hands are roaming all over me. I hear that click that the door makes when you lock it. What was I saying about how gross the mile high club is…you can throw it out of the airplane. There isn’t any room for error in the small space we are in, so hot hands unbutton my jeans, hot fingers pull my zipper down, the cool air of the restroom only makes it hurt a little when I don’t feel her crushed on me. She pulls my tank top over my head and it lands on the floor. Her hands warm me. She licks my throat with her tongue, pain in my head cause I need her to do it already and light me on fire, that sweet feel of her hair on my shoulders when we kiss. That sweeter feel of her fingers in my mouth. That sweetest feel of her hand finding me wet, I hit my head when I feel her inside me. The pain pleasure ratio fairly equal. She laughs a little and kisses me. The plane makes one of those sharp turns you don’t expect planes to make and we crash a little here and there. Carmen is pressed against the little sink. I take the chance and I use my leverage to trap her. her hand still making me, making me feel….shit……gotta stay focused…..I use my free hand, zip her down, feel my way in…..and we are in a race…who gets there faster….who can come….four letter word come….who can come harder. Its her….its me……uh………..we need to…need to…kiss…..her hot hand on my neck, my hot hand on her neck, nose to nose we are. Lips, kisses…..eyes locked….and we get there…..The captain he turns on the seat belt sign. You hear a muffled voice saying we are in for some chop. None of this really registers. Carmen makes the sexiest sounds when she comes. Sexier sounds when she comes down. And that slow way she kisses me….thanking me for everything…..Who am I to care about weather….I think as that feel hits me…you know the one that awesome moment when you know you are there….and then….you are.
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YOU CANT STOP WRITING I LOVE YOUR STORIES ABOUT SHARMEN AND CATEYE I LOVE YOUR STORY SO FAR PLEASE KEEP WRITING
Thank you. I have loved every word and every unbelievable twist and turn. You are amazingly talented and I will miss your writing immensely. If you ever decide to write again I hope I will be lucky enough to get to read it.
You absolutely MUST keep writing here. This series has kept me enthralled ever since I stumbled across it. I really enjoy your writing style. Please stay with us!SincerelyDawn (from Atlanta)
Absolutely love how you wrapped up this series. I can’t fuckin’ believe its over. It was a fan-tab-ulous run. You actually got me to look into Nine Inch Nails music. Have to second Bigprisc’s comments, for you to let us know if you’ve written or publish anything in the future. Best of luck, hope we hear from you soon :-)
Thank you for letting us into the mind of the genius that is You….your stories are awesome and even though you won’t be updating anymore, you will keep entertaining me cuz i will most likely read every single one of your stories like 20 more times. Awesome job lady…thanks again.
I just wanna say: WHY, WHY, WHYYYYYYY? We r gonna miss you girl, A LOT!!!!!!!! :'(SHARMEN WILL ALWAYS ROCK BTW !!! “What we’ve found…..we can never stop….” NEW DAWN IM GONNA MISS U GIRL
Why cant we have more than 5 stars to rate this stories…… :'(Im really gonna miss you….I am one of your lurkers, but im gonna miss you the same way as your BIGGEST FAN would be!!!!!
I cant believe its over… really, I couldnt decide if I wanted to see an update or not. Im glad they finally got an ending that was well deserved. Every twist and turn was worth the while and I cant thank you enough for taking the time to write this and letting us in into your little world. I love this series of stories and I love you.
GODDD I LOVE THIS I LOVE YOU I LOVE YOU I LOVE YOU I LOVE YOU I LOVE YOU@@@@@@@@@ YES IM CRYING…. SHIT…I CANT BELIEVE THIS IS OVER …I AM SO GONNA MISS THIS…. MAN…. I FEEL THIS IS LIK ETHE END OF SHARMEN… LIKE TH EREAL END…. BECAUSE CARMEN IS NO LONGER ONTHE SHOW THIS GAVE ME HOPE. I WANT YOU TO KNOW I LOVED EVERY WORD YOU WROTE… EVERYTHING… THERE IS NOTHING HERE THAT WAS NOT PERFECT. I KNOWYOU HATE HAPPY ENDINGS BUT I THANK YOU FOE THIS ONE… I MEAN I LOVE YOU LOL!!!! IM CRYING AGAING IM GONNA START READING IT AGAIN…. MAN IM IN LOVE3 WITH THIS AND MANNNNNNNNNN IM GONNA MISS YOU SO MUCH FOR REAL NO JOKE. BUT I RESPECT YOU DECISION. BUT IF YOU CHANGE YOUR MIND… PLEASEPLEASE PLEASEPLEASE KEEP WRITING!!!!!!
I have a few more stories of yours to catch up before I read this last chapter. But I just wanted to say that I love all your work and like to thank you for giving us a refreshing story of Sharmen. Knowing that this is your last one, makes me sad. But all good things come to an end and we all have to live on. many many kudos to you!
Thank you… thank you for the wonderful series of stories. I love them all, and I love you. I wish you would continue writing, but i can understand when real life kick in. Thank you again for this wonderful months when i get a fix everytime. I’m sorry i dont leave a comment often (too lazy to sign in), but for the last chap i knew I have to. Your story is the best I have ever read. And I hope that you will continue writing, whether it is Sharmen fics, or other stories. And if you ever publish anything, please remember to inform us, your dear fans.
A great end to a great story. It’s good to see that people with troubled pasts can exorcise their demons and live a fulfilling life. It’s an idea that I hold very dear. Seeing this evolution of Shane and of Carmen, seeing them learn that the present is much more precious than the past, seeing them endure the trials surrounding them, between them, and within themselves, well, it’s something else. Very few fics have had such an acute focus on character and character development as this saga had. You did an amazing job with that, really unbelievable. And the plot, well, that was frequently twisted and always mind-blowing. I frickin’ loved every word of it. So, thank you for sharing this story, and thank you for putting all this time and effort into it. And here’s hoping that the writing bug bites you again sometime. (ps: I haven’t forgotten your other stories, missy. [wink])
I haven’t read anything but the author’s note yet, but I just wanted to say right away, thank you. There are not enough good things I can say about this creation, so I won’t attempt to. Just know that I appreciate the time, creative energy, and brilliance you gave to this story. I hope that this will just be a break for you, and that Shane and Carmen, or whoever (but you know that S&C are my favorite, and I’m pretty sure yours too) will inspire more from you. I guess I need to express my inner-pervert more often if it makes people write stories as great as this…You are incredible. Incredible. Thank you.
my apologies for commenting so late.. but i couldnt bring myself to reading the story after i read the authorz note. well you are one gifted writer ive had a mixture of various feelings springing from within me with every word, every sentence you’ve ever written… youre stories were by far the best EVER!.. i wish u luck in everything you do.. your stories will be missed ALOT!! i for one will always always be ur fan… THANKYOU FOR EVERYTHING!!