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Mixer from Hell Finale
Bette’s eyes closed as Tina’s lips grew closer to her now blistering hot pussy. She wanted Tina so bad, to feel her licking her and sucking her, and to know that she wasn’t the only one enjoying herself.
“Yes,” Bette moaned.
Tina whispered, "Just let me please you…”
Bette looked down at Tina. They stared into each other’s eyes with complete confidence. There was nothing left to be said.
Tina lowered her head and gently pushed her legs apart. She began kissing and sucking along the inside of Bette’s right thigh. Tina loved the fact that Bette gave herself over to her.
She paused slightly over Bette’s opening and breathed very heavily and close. Bette let out a quiet moan, and her anticipation was becoming more and more noticeable.
Tina kissed down her other thigh and paused for another second. Bette silently said the word “please” and opened her legs wider. Tina took in her scent, and her own body was beginning to strongly react.
She finally found the sweet, hot, needing part of Bette. She brought her mouth to the center of her woman and ran her tongue along the edge of Bette’s lips.
Another shudder went through Bette’s body, and Tina’s excitement rose. She covered Bette’s pulsating clit with her hot, wet mouth and teasingly flicked it with the tip of her tongue. Another rush and Bette’s hips began to rock with a strong steady beat against Tina’s mouth.
"Don’t think you are in control here!" Tina said to Bette as she noticed her legs shaking.
Tina slid two fingers into Bette’s wet pussy.
"I think you are ready."
Tina’s fingers went in and out as Bette gasped with pleasure and got even more wet. Her clit was so hard that she wanted to scream to Tina to just fuck her hard right then and there.
Tina could tell that Bette was going to lose it soon. She wanted to teach Bette a lesson. So she slowed down the pace.
Tina’s fingers slipped in, parting her lips and entered her slowly this time. Oh, so…slowly.
Slowly, the fingers went to her clit, teasing and rolling, just enough to make her want to scream for more, harder, faster!
“Tina, I want it. I want it…NOW!” Bette screamed.
Tina felt Bette shudder as her hand snaked up to grab Tina’s hair, smothering her closer into her begging pussy.
Tina’s mouth worked slowly then quickly up and down until Bette’s head was spinning from desire. She felt her orgasm building from deep within. She grabbed Tina’s hair again and pulled her hard. Bette fucked her face.
Bette’s body began to shake as Tina teased each drop to the surface. Bette’s orgasm hit like an atomic bomb. Bette’s hot cum gushed deep into Tina’s mouth, and Tina drank every drop as a thirsty vampire would devour her prey, not stopping until Bette was completely weak from pleasure.
Tina moved slowly upwards toward Bette’s mouth and kissed her passionately. Tina moved away from her a little, smiled, and said, "Good girl.”
“Tina marry me,” Bette whispered.
Just outside the Porter residence, Kate and Jodi stood there watching the whole thing. Before they walked away, they shook hands.
The End!
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Like Probie I’m unsure what the handshake meant. League of Voyeurs secret handshake? Like the others, I agree that was steamy. And FYI, I never meant to suggest that these two weren’t engaging in an expression of love.
I too didnt get the handshake to that of Kate/Jodie, but at least we got Tina and Bette together and was it hot or what? LOVed it S, great job!!!!
Yowie! Zowie! Indeed, you owe us a followup–with the twists and turns you put in your stories, it is definitely not safe to assume anything, even whether Tina said yes! And I told you folks might not get the handshake thing (shoot, I don’t, either!), so you have to do another chappie to explain that! lol Whatever you decide to do, you know your loyal readers will go along with you for the ride! So get to writing again–this is not finished, baby!
i should of read this before my shower… now i need another… loved this babe… but i am slow wondering about kate and jodie… i don’t/can’t believe they wanted them back together… maybe they got together in the middle of this mess… whatever… i loved it… and like someelse said you can fill us in the next chapter… just before the wedding…NOW WHAT ABOUT THE WINNER IS… PPS
Damn women,you sure know how to leave the ladies happy.and thxs a million for continuing on even when you didnt want to we are soo blessed with all the great writers on this site.:)thxs for sharing lady.
I’m with the others I read this at work. Damn. I’m figuring Kate/Jodi had this planned all along. I think we need Tina’s answer.
this story has been hot from start to finish, you cant leave us hanging for more!!!!!please??????????
My body is trembling and I’m so glad that I was home while reading this. You brought to life a reality that we both want to see. You leave me breathless; panting for more.
Did Jodi and Kate shake hands because they were secretly working to get the girls back together? Ummmm that was extremely erotic and sexy, and hot and steamy and what ever other word that comes to mind when reading something of this nature.
You win Suc….I’m breathing hard and still wanting more!**picking tongue off the floor** LOL! I knew you would bring hot and heavy and you did not DISSAPPOINT!!
Damn that was fucking hot and sexy, love it!
I read it at work too. LOL! Um, WOW! Too bad we won’t get Tina’s reply to Bette’s “Tina marry me.”
Oh Crud!! I should not have read this at work! Bad idea! Bad idea! Don’t knnow what I wasn’t thinking. LOL! Too hot Succulent! Too f*cking HOT!!!!!!!!
Oh Crud!! I should not have read this at work! Bad idea! Bad idea! Don’t knnow what I wasn’t thinking. LOL! Too hot Succulent! Too f*cking HOT!!!!!!!!
man that was melt the sun hot!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
That may have been hotter than hell itself. Didn’t quite get the Kate/Jodi handshaking thing. But you can explain it all in a follow-up(lol).
luved it, luved it, luved it!!!wish there was more of it!!!!!!!
wow great chapter !!! is this really the end?! i to would like to know tina’s answer…
Uh, Succ, I’m almost certain that if you look up the definition of finale it’ll say:Going to have a sequel; also, The End: Repeat;Come again(snicker at come again). So you know what you need to do…No pressure.*smooches*
hot indeed…altho i don’t get the jodi and kate bit…have i forgotten something…u r the queen of erotic at the moment…lol…whats next for u and us…i look 4ward to something in the future….