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Mixer From Hell/Part 2
All too frequently, we let the pressures and tensions of day-to-day living claim us. Work becomes number one in our lives, and our responsibilities become our character. It’s almost as if we’ve forgotten the things that are most essential to us.
We fail to remember to give meaning to the things that will nourish us most. When it’s all said and done, will we really say that we are most pleased of how controlled our day was, or will we be disappointed that we didn’t stop to smell the roses? Will we grieve the affairs that we could have fed along the way?
That’s all Bette could think about while listening to every word Tina said to her. Even as all the things Tina said went through Bette’s mind, at the quickness of thought, she sat there not sure whether to accept her words. After taking in every word, Bette got up and removed Angelica from her high chair. She placed her in her room and put up the safety gate.
Tina had just poured out her heart to Bette. She has thought of nothing else since Bette left her in the hallway soaked and wet. Since that night, Tina had slowly pulled away from Henry. Every time he reached for her, she recoiled in response.
“Tina, are you telling me all this because you know I’m seeing someone new? Tina, I gave you a fucking month. It’s been a month in a half. Why fucking now, Tina!” Bette demanded.
Tina was so into her thoughts that she didn’t hear Bette return. Tina stood, but her legs threatened to betray her. Looking at Bette was a breath-taking sight!
“No, Bette–it has nothing to do with you dating someone.”
Tina walked over to Bette, who was standing by the kitchen table. She slowly unfastened her jeans and grabbed Bette’s hand.
“I’m doing this now because of how I feel when I’m around you versus how I feel when I’m not. I’m doing this because I get fucking wet when I smell you.”
Tina placed Bette’s hand inside her pants, past her panties, and into her tunnel. Bette suddenly took her other hand and, for support, placed it on the table behind her. Her legs had turned to jelly under her.
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See? That’s cold to leave us hanging again! You know folks want to know what happened after Jodi saw them! But baby, this is sooo hot! Maybe your fans will pressure you to continue again!
AHHHHHHHHHHHHHH you did NOT just end it like that!
That made me laugh at the end. You know, that cruel laugh because I find Jodi so grating. Bette was being completely turned OUT by Tina. Glad you decided to give us another part. Maybe make it a three parter? Finally hooking up with out any attachments in the background. Something sweet after all the lusty stuff.
OMFG!!!!! You have to give us MORE!!!!! That was just so MEAN to stop there.
So glad you decided to give us another shot of this. Love how they didn’t even notice Jodi, but thats fine by me cos Bette and Jodi just don’t do it.
I agree: this is hard on us. This is really hot and touching. Geez what will happen when Jodi is stepping in ? Willit be full of hysteria ? Thanks
OMG!!! that was so hott… I like how tina went all alpha on bette.. I think that is so hott… again remind me to never read this… after I get out of the shower… Imagine if this really happend at the mixer.. wow that woud have been… THUD THUD THUD…
OH HOLY SHIT………..LOL…….OMG……THAT WAS HOT AS HELL…….
Hey S, what is the problem with u leaving us like that, that was cold, but I love it!!! For a moment I thought it was a dream,LOL!!!
OMFG!THUD!THUD!You did not just leave it right there,right?Fu*k Women you are too good of a writer not to continue on with this is working making u feel bad? god women you soo rock.
I know you didn’t!!! That’s just cold, S1. You’ve got to make this a three-parter!
luved it, luved it, luved it!!!!!!!!!
Ok, you can’t leave this like that. We want to know what happened next. Please!!!
Damn!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! hot
OK, I like this one a whole lot better than the first one. I felt Bette was playing a rather mean game in that one. However, you can feel free to dump on Jodi anytime.
I’m sorry…did you just type “the end?”**looking at computer screen with dazed and confused look** Are you freakin’ kidding me? Oh no….***pacing back and forth, with my hand on my hips, shaking my head “no”*** I don’t think so Ms. Succulent1, you did not just leave all us all hanging on again, did you? Come on hun? Please post another chapter? First you turn up the heat with Tina taking Bette in Uber alpha mode and then you type “the end?” That is COLD! LOL! You are such a tease! Ciao.
That is just plain mean
I am with everybody else please dont leave it there PLEASE
Mean way to end it. I would pay money to see this scene played out on the show. Laurel and Jennifer have so much hot chemistry when they’re together on screen, and it just wasn’t there with Jennifer and Marlee. Maybe it was supposed to be played that way. Oh, don’t think I didn’t notice you capitalized THE END and put an exclamation point behind it like you’re saying there’s absofuckinglutely no way you’re continuing this! :) You cracked me up tho, saying that B&T didn’t HEAR Jodi coming in….shit I wonder if she could read Bette’s lips (either pair) when she was screaming “Oh, my God …..I’m cummmmmmming! I’m cuuuuuuuuuuming!!……..” LOL!!! This was too good succulent1! You must continue!
part3 pluheeese.
Oh my VERY HOT… no part 3???? If we ask nice maybe???
Oh Shit!!! WTF? It’s Jodi??? Umm that so can not be the end! I’ll be waiting patiently for the follow up chapter succulent1.
Damn thats hot and love it!
Very hot but I’m tempted to PM you. I think I will; I hope you don’t mind. 8D PPS!
wow plz continue this could become a great on going story !!!
Ha-ha-ha…fucking ha…now get lost Jodi…well done T, touche!!!!
Why did it take her a month and a half??? What was the other two weeks for?? I love that no matter which author writes about these two, the idea is the same – just out of reach because of some silly thing. And it was mean to leave off with Jodi walking in on them but you know something like that will take place next season. PPS
YOU CANNOT END THIS WHEN JODIE COMES IN!!!! COme on!!!! I’M sure you wanna know too what’s next ..PPS
Wanted to add – I too would like to hear what happens after Jodi comes in – if you care to write more on this, if not write something else cause you rock.
wow and YES to the conclusion.
OMG! LOL! How could u end it? :))
ohhh shit!!!
Sooo, I guess that that means that Jodi is a goner. I sure hope so. This chapter was extremely hot and juicy. Thanks for making my day.