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More Than a Feeling
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Bette took the ball from Tinas hand. That can be remedied. Then, she threw it across the park as far as she could. Jagger took off without a second thought, both Bette and Tina watching him go. Bette took a seat on the bench, close to Tina, but far enough so that she didnt feel uncomfortable. And then there were two.
For the next minute and a half. Tina laughed, leaning back on the bench. She could feel the tension melting away. All of the doubts she had earlier had begun to dissipate. There was something about Bette that made her feel at ease.
After a few minutes of comfortable silence, Bette spoke. Sohow are you?
Tina knew the context of the question. UhIm good. I was a little nervous before, but Im okay now.
I was nervous too. Bette admitted. Her stomach was performing acrobatics just a few minutes ago. Now it was settling.
But theres something about you that relaxes me.
Bettes face flushed. Yeah? She couldnt believe how happy she was feeling. I feel the same way. Bette decided to be bold and took Tinas hand.
Tina felt electricity jolt through her body. Thats newthats amazing. She intertwined her fingers with Bettes and squeezed.
Can I hold you? Bette asked, biting her lip. Is that too forward?
Tina only laughed a little. Bette, you dont have to ask me all the time. Do what you want and Ill tell you if I feel uncomfortable.
Do what you wantif only. Bette smiled, stretching out her leg so it ran against the back of the bench and pulled Tina close, so that Tinas back was flat against her chest. Without breaking contact, Bette swooped her arms under Tinas and held her around the abdomen, still clutching on to Tinas hand and grabbing her other, resting them on Tinas stomach. It felt so good to hold Tina in her arms, to feel her body resting against her own. Bette wanted to freeze this moment, fold it up and put it in her pocket, savoring it forever.
Tina felt herself relax completely in Bettes hold, feeling the brunettes steady heartbeat through her back, feeling her chest rise and fall. She closed her eyes, suddenly feeling so at peace she could almost sleep. The warmth and security that Bettes arms provided was something that Tina hadnt experienced in a long time. She sighed, drifting offuntil Jagger came swaggering back, his collar jingling as he ran. She opened her eyes, smiling. Uh oh, weve been caught.
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yes this is what falling in love is all about… love this story… i can just see melvin… hmmm Ms. Kennard…. please continue
Just caught up. This is an awesome story. They are soo cute together. Take it slow – I like it slow. Thanks for takin the time to write.
“Bette wanted to freeze this moment, fold it up and put it in her pocket, savoring it forever.” Everyone should be able to savor these beautiful moments in their lives. Wonderful update! I so truly enjoyed reading it. Please continue and thank you so very much for writing and sharing this story. The pace you are setting for Bette and Tina is just right for each of them.
Of course she is fall in love with her! even a blind can see that! very good chapter i like it so much. continue post please
Bette thinks they are going snail pace. Tina wants Bette but seems afraid. thanks
bette and melvin dialog was so right on the spot…i could see melving talking to bette like that…i hope candyass is not coming back to claim bette…post soon
OMG Clarity you’re such a dork. You shed a tear. Guess that makes me a bigger dork because I cry over everything. lol Just playin’ with ya, but I DO cry over everything. So I take it Bette hasn’t actually slept with anyone unless she slept with Alice but didn’t say anything, or she slept with a guy a long time ago. Loved when Bette was thinking they were going so slow they were barely moving. God I can’t remember the last time I went THAT slow with anyone. Maybe that was around *mumble*12 years ago*mumble*. And now that I have made myself feel old and reminded myself of a dorky ex-boyfriend (that’s right, I said boyfriend =p), it’s time to bring this comment to a close. Danke!
I loved how you brought in some old memories into the story with bette. :) It’s so sweet, with bette holding Tina in the park. great job like always. Hope to read a new chapter soon!!!
great chapter, they are so sweet together, please post soon
sweet convo.
Great chappy, but no first kiss :( Guess when the time is right it’ll come eventually! Loved this chappy. Post as soon as you can!
Manda…i freakin love you and this story..you are an amazing writer, no lie, love the way you write all the characters, perfection!..ya but i love me some danish so keep that in mind..lol..okay post soon! pleaseeeeeee!!
Thanks for this great chapter! So glad you are not suffering from post-S3-depression are are keeping our girls happy! Your story brings up memories of the times when just holding hands was breathtaking and a hug made your heart soar. Sigh! Keep the girls going… I liked the flashbacks into Bette’s past, this way not only Tina can get to know her better, but we can, too.
Made my morning to see your post. Love the story, so sweet. Gives me that warm fuzzy feeling.
It’s official: I’ve run out of ways to describe how wonderful your story is. So I’ll say it in spanish. Su historia es maravillosa. These girls are super sweet. I loved how nervous they both were. And Yay to your first use of “asshat”. I’m glad to hear it was deserved.
OH, Bette has got it bad, and I don’t think that Tina is too far behind her in that department. Taking it slow at that age is the best. I know that we as readers are ready for the good stuff, but Bette and Tina really do need to take it slow. The fact that Tina is even wanting to meet Melvin shows me that she is serious about Bette. My Tibette heart wants to thank you for this story. Please don’t let IC and company get the gruby little paws on them. They do not know how to treat real love but only know how to make grown women cry.
Good chapter. They look cute together!
lol yea i think am gonna use ur stories as my bed time stories that way i can 4get bout the fucked up days..lol…great post like always plz post soon!!!
As Manda’s fanfuckingtastic chapter came to an end, Clarity “felt cold, empty, incomplete. She stood there,” waiting for the next fanfuckingtastic chapter to be posted. This chapter, or any, was definitely worth the wait, Manda. Okay, let me keep it real and admit that I shed a tear when Bette put her arms around Tina…Ilene’s made me an emotional wreck marroned on the formally beautiful island known as TiBette. You know I’m looking forward to the next chapter whenever time allows (per the equation).
I think if you continue to write like this you will be a terrific writer. I love the way you capture the characters, it’s so like them before I.C. gave them a lobotomy in S3. Awesome!!! Oh, and I love the way you portray Alice, it’s great love me some Danish though…ahem…thanx post soon. Cheers
*deep sigh* I love this story so much… Please don’t tell me Candace is gonna come back claiming Bette??? I agree with AIDANNE… When does your first book get published? LOL
Manda,You caught me thre then. Aliteration is my middle name. Just like the way they roll off the tongue. As for your tremendous and terrific tale, another slice of heaven as Bette and Tina tentatively tread towards one another. This slow and easy narrative will make the pay off so much sweeter. I love the way you incorporated Candace and Yolanda in such non-threatening roles. And the Scooby Doo moments were ideal. Giving Tina a pocture of Bette’s past helped me appreciate this blossoming and budding relationship all the more. Much gratitude for your fantastic writing. Yes, as Marina said, “Writing is re-writing.” so please continue to ponder and agonize over each word and phrase because the result is a rich reward for all your readers. Your Loyal Fan.