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More Than a Feeling
When Bette and Tina started to kiss, they didnt realize how hard it would be to stop. It was as if their lips had suddenly become polar magnets, desperate to connect. Every sentence, every word, every other syllable would be followed by a quick kiss, as if it was needed for proper communication; as if they wouldnt understand what the other was saying without a kiss in between. Bette loved every second of it. Tina did too. The holding, hugging, kissing, everything
But, as with all good things, it had to come to an end.
It was getting late, Samantha would be home any second, and Tina didnt think she would be able to hide her emotions from her sister, since they were so fresh and overwhelming at the moment. Samantha would surely figure it all out as soon as she saw the way Tina and Bette looked at each other.
Thats why Bette had to go.
Amazingly, Tina was able to gather Bettes jacket and bag with her lips still connected to the brunette, and managed to get them both to the front door without knocking anything over. When Bettes back hit the front door, Tina kissed her hard for a while and then finally pulled herself away. You have to go. She panted between short kisses.
I know. Bette responded, holding Tinas waist with one hand as she grazed her fingers along Tinas lips with the other. Kissing Tina again, her face scrunched in pain. I dont want to.
I dont want you to either. Tina whispered breathlessly, caressing Bettes face. But you have to. Tina turned the doorknob and began to open the door, but Bette slammed her back against it, making it close.
Wait a minute. Bette barely muffled before attacking Tinas mouth again.
BetteBeBette Tina kept trying to say, laughing a little. She finally pulled away, completely breathless. You have to go.
Pouting, Bette sighed. Fine, but Im going under protest.
Ill make it up to you.
Im holding you to that. Bette kissed Tina one more time before letting her open the door. She grabbed Tinas hand and squeezed it tight before finally leaving. Ill call you later.
Okay. Tina leaned against the door, biting her lip as she watched Bette leave. Suddenly, a deep, nagging pain settled in her chest. I want her to come back. Tina did her best to ignore the pain as she closed the door and went to her bedroom. Dana definitely had to know about this.
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(52 votes, average: 3.69 out of 5)
i’m in the middle of an essay myself when i decided to sneak in here to get my fanfic fix only to find out that you’ve posted a new chapter!! i’m so happy. i love this chapter a lot mainly because b/t are so sweet with each other. thanks so much for this and please post soon.
Wow, Manda! After I read your chapters I find myself in a deep refelective state in which I analyze how caca infested S3 was. I dont mind telling you again that your story and writing is fanfuckingtastic. Here’s to hoping none of the girls end up on Girls Gone Wild: House Party Edition at Alice’s party. Best of luck with those essays.
This is great and awesome, love it. Let see whats next, thanks!
I swear I’m like a little kid at Christmas when you give us a new chapter of this story. So Friday night is dinner with Daddy Dearest. It’s such a shame that Melvin will probably not like Tina after finding out that she and Bette are together. I REALLY lucked out in that my parents are cool with me being gay. Granted I haven’t brough anyone home to meet my parents as if there are so many women here to date. *rolls eyes* And Saturday is the party. I wonder if Alice and Dana will get it on? lol Honestly, I’d rather B&T not go there that soon, especially at a party. Yes, I’m a hopeless (hopeful?) romantic. =p Can’t wait for the next chapter!
love it, love it…they are so cute together…i hope their love will stay strong forever and tina won’t have problems to come out to her family
Oh to be in love. I know it is the real thing for these two and I know that they will have a hard road ahead of them. Parents and school mates can make their life very difficult. I hope that their love is strong enough to endure. Please Post soon.
This story remainds me so much of my first time. Love your story. please post soon.
Thanks for the treat, I love these two sweet girls! I think Melvin will succumb to the Kennard charm on Friday. Hey, why don’t you let him have a harmless accident and get him to hospital where he can meet Amy Kennard and fall in love with her? It would make it easier for him to be happy for his daughter then.
I’t just such a sweet and wonderful story, I can’t get enough of it!
Ditto with Lamentamini, they’re in love but it’s too soo for sex. I’m a hopeless romantic myself too. Anyway, I love where this story is going. Goodluck with your papers and please post soon!
So sweet. I love these girls. They can’t get enough of each other and I can’t get enough of your story. Thanks.
Manda, That was perfect. I loved the way that you counterbalance the realization of depth of Bette and Tina’s love for each other with the humor of their best friends interfering and their knowledge that they need to hide their feelings from their families. Tina’s mom and sister will be fine after the initial shoch wears off as they have been through soon much as a family unit. Yes, there may be surprise but their relationship will survive and strengthen once the full truth is known. As for Bette’s father, fabulous way to introduce the ‘Miss Kenard’ acknowledgement. I think he will continue to ignore this part of Bette’s life and allow this partnership to flourish. The main fly in the ointment may be the deceit involved in keeping the union secret. Yip, Friday and Saturday are going to be very interesting so al alway will be here awaiting your next exciting and entertaining installment. Thank you, Your Loyal Fan.
Excellent as always Manda
this was a terrific chapter! i always like see B&T together and happy! i can’t wait to dinner on friday what will happen? i am diying to know! take care, continue post please
i just love this… i love happy bette and tina stories… please keep them always happy… and please continue
(high picthed) Awwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww! this story is sooo sweet.. I cant get enough of it :) Great job. update soon.. please hehe