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More Than a Feeling
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“You’re starting to think like Alice.”
“She gave me the idea.”
“Of course.” Bette rolled her eyes.
“Well, what did you tell your dad?”
“I told him I was going to Alice’s. He didn’t ask any questions.” Bette pulled from the curb. “So, we’re off. You ready?”
“To clean? Hell yeah!” Tina exclaimed excitedly.
Bette had to laugh out loud. “You are too cute, you know that?”
“Is that a good thing?” Tina asked, taking hold of Bette’s arm, making her remove her hand from the steering wheel. She ran her hand up to meet Bette’s, intertwining fingers with her.
Bette kissed Tina’s hand. “Yes.”
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“Come on ladies! We only have five hours until party time!” Alice shouted through her cardboard bubble wrap roll.
Alice had somehow managed to convince all of the help they had the day off, so the girls were all alone. Just Bette and Tina, helping Alice rearrange her entire house.
“That’s getting really annoying Alice.” Tina said, carefully rolling an orange cat knick-knack in some bubble wrap before gently placing it in a cardboard box.
“It passed annoying half an hour ago.” Bette muttered, taping bubble wrap around a very expensive looking vase and placing it in its own box. She turned to Alice, her eyes menacing as she pointed to the cardboard roll. “In ten seconds, that’s going right up your–”
“Hey!” Alice shouted through her makeshift megaphone. “This is no time for a revolution. We still have ten more rooms to cover.”
“You know, your house doesn’t look that big on the outside.” Tina whined. Alice’s house was a mansion in its own right, but it gave off as much a modest vibe as it could. It was actually quite large inside, with three floors, each with three bedrooms and one and a half bathrooms. Then there was the den, solarium, library, game room, dining room, kitchen, family room, exercise room and office. Two hours into work, Tina regretted agreeing to the whole thing.
It seemed as if Lenore Pieszecki was an avid collector of anything tiny, expensive, or breakable. There were at least a thousand little knick knacks, lamps, bowls, vases, statues, and plates, all antique or foreign, but most definitely expensive, strewn about the house in the most fashionable way. It was a page right out of those magazines that showcase homes of the rich and famous.
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Oh man.. what a place to stop, CLIFFY! lol.. great as usual but more Tibette please. Hope you get well soon. :)
Hey – I haven’t been able to comment on the last couple of chapers, but I’m back now and I loves this story….but what a cliffy, you better post soon LOL. Bette is overreacting a little, she owe T to listen to her…..and when is Shane going to score the hot DJ :o))) Post soon please….
And like Lamentamini I missed the “study” session after the dinner at Bettes house the night before….can you do a flashback???
Manda, i love this story, AND I’M OFFICIALLY ADDICTED, it’s perfection…keep up danish too, they are so cute…and obviously tee and B are, hopefully bette will understand the ridiculous kiss…PLEASE POST SOON!
Damn those drunk women. There they go messing with Bette and Tina. I sure hope that Tina is able to defuse the situation between her and Bette because of that bimbo drunk. Sammy needs to stop messing with Tim’s head. He really does like her and I would hate to see him get hurt. I hope that the next chapter has Tina and Bette talking and getting things straighten out. Great chapter, and post soon.
Oh I forgot to say get well soon. I don’t like to garden even in the sun so the rain would be out of the question. I just don’t understand planting stuff and then cutting them. I know that they look nice, but darn just too much work when I could be reading FF. Thank you so much for a fun loving story.
Damn I thought I was gonna have to send a posse to look for you! That sucks that you got sick. :( The chapter wasn’t as bad as you made it out to be. Since you had to keep changing it up and eventually starting from scratch I can’t really complain. I was just glad we got a chapter. I swear this story is like a drug. If I don’t get my normal dosage I start getting the junkie itch. lol Gabby still sucks, Nadia is gonna feel real bad in the morning, and Carmen is sassy as always. I wonder if there is a young Yoda lurking in the shadows who saw the drunken smooch and can talk some sense into Bette? By the way, how did B&T’s “study” session go at Bette’s house? ;)
so bad that you was sick i hope you feel better now. This was a good chapter i don’t know what don’t you think the same but i like it a little of drama and i thing the next will be better cause Tina will have to do some thing to make Bette happy. take care please post soon i’ll be waiting!
What you can’t end it there!!! That’s horrible and wrong. So more soon really soon. Please! Please! Loved it.
Good chapter. Let Tina catch up with Bette and talk thing out. Ok post soon please, thanks!
What is there not to love about this story? I think you did a great job with this chapter! Thanks!
nadia is a bitch in this story too!!! Tina take your woman upstairs and make it up to her…LOL!!!!
Ok Bette has to understand this situation. Come on. Cliff-hangers are so not right.
You know what I realized this week, Manda? That I have a actual yet serious addiction to your writing. Someone pray for me! All week I was forced to focus on this thing called “work.” Once again I tried to will chapters into existence this week. Did the chapters appear? Sadly, no. However I did learn that staring at computer screen for hours is a good way of reminding myself to refill my migrane medication. Despite what you think, you definitely worked it out with this chapter so a hi-fucking-five to you x2! I can’t wait to read the next chapter because hell hath no furry like Bette scorned. All of that aside, I hope you feel better soon.
come on now!! party..booze…free beds???? t will explain hopefully bette will listen
wha– love this chapter but not enough b/t. please please please post soon >_<
this was really good…i hope tina will get bette in time and explain everything, don’t make this too much of a drama…love this story
Why the hell didn’t you like it?? I loved it but that’s not break news.. anyway, sucks that you’re sick, I got colds pretty easily, I feel like poop everytime. I was dissapointed that you hadn’t posted, and missing Alias on Wednesday frustated me even more, that’s not the point, you’re doing a great job, I love the details that you give to the characters and mostly the direction that the story is taking.
I’m a [normally] silent reader, and I just started reading l-word fanfic about a month or so ago. Your story is my favorite! I love the teenage innocence of B&T and Alice is exactly how I would imagine her at 17 years old. Well done! I hope you get over your writers block and post more often, I suffer from “More than a Feeling” withdrawl w/o new chapters! You’re a fantastic writer.
Manda, Another perfect chapter as the party preparations were made in all their tiresome entirety adn then the party started in full swing. Nice to see that Carmen is true to her character and practising her art of DJing even in her teenager years. And Gabby and Nadia are always bad pennies that turn up and almost ruin all things good. Wonderful to see exactly how Nadia was uppity with Tina. Bette has magnificant timing in waliking in right at the wrong time. Stormy times ahead as Tina tries to explain herself but will Bette give her the time of day to tell the truth. Much joy and anticipation for this chapter and the continuation of on night at Alices’s. Please make it soon. Your Loyal Fan.