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More Than a Feeling
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Tina could feel herself losing control. She felt the burning sensation of desire in her center. She could feel tingles where Bette touched her with her soft lips.
But she also felt fear.
"Bette…please."
Bette’s lips landed on the tiny exposed area of Tina’s chest when she heard Tina speak, and expelled a huge sigh, her body relaxing. She knew that tone, the tone in Tina’s voice that told her to stop before things got out of hand. She had gotten used to it. She lifted her head to look at Tina, trying not to look as disappointed as she was understanding. Tina looked at her, flushed and apologetic, but firm in her request. Bette nodded, propping herself up and then moving off of Tina, sitting on the blanket.
Tina shot up like a rocket. "I really don’t mean to–"
"It’s okay Tee." She was trying really hard not to sound disappointed, but it wasn’t working.
"I’m sorry." Tina whispered meekly, pulling her knees up to her chest and wrapping her arms around them, resting her chin on her knee.
Bette didn’t look at Tina, and instead stared ahead, looking at the ocean, but said, "I understand." I’m just going to need a cold shower when I get home.
"You’re upset."
"No. I understand Tina."
"Do you really?" Do you really understand that I’m afraid I’m not going to be good enough for you?
Bette then looked at Tina. Tina looked frightened, and distressed. She wrapped an arm around Tina’s shoulders, letting the blond rest on her. "I do. I’m sorry if I sound upset. I don’t mean to."
"I’m sorry."
"Don’t apologize. You don’t need to. There’s nothing to be sorry for." Bette squeezed Tina’s shoulders a bit before patting her on the back. "It’s all right."
Tina didn’t answer, but nodded, and they spent the rest of their time looking out at the ocean, watching the sun go down.
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Carmen was packing her crates into the back of her van, getting ready to head to her gig, when her phone started ringing. She looked at the screen with excitement, but frowned when she realized the number wasn’t Shane’s. She could be calling from a different phone… "D.J. Carmen."
"Hello, yes, D.J. Carmen?" That definitely wasn’t Shane. The voice was higher and more girly.
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YES! FIRST TO COMMENT! HAHA!…too bad i haven’t read this chap yet, lol, brb
YES ITS MORE THAN A FEELING! BETTE NEEDS TO BE PATIENCE WITH TINA SHELL CUM AROUND,AND BETTE WILL ROCK HER WORLD! PLEASE POST SOON.
Okay done, and i must say, great post manda. I’m feeling really bad for bette but then again i understand where tina is coming from. But c’mon t! relaxxx a little. Anywhooo btw, alice running to dana was hilarious. Hmmm and maybe dana did drive al away. I hope they can work things out, but now that lara is in the picture i dunno. Can you tell i love this story?..lol oh! and i can’t wait to see what happens to carmen and shane…PLEASE POST SOON MANDA!..lurveee ya
enjoyed this much. please post soon :D
Damn and I thought I had it bad about not feeling like I can be open. It can’t be easy when you’re that popular and feel like you have to hide. Casey can get run over by a bus, or Carmen’s van. B&T are cute as always. Man I don’t think Bette was the only one who totally got “blue-balled.” LOL I remember those days of being afraid of going too far or not being good enough. And dammit now I have to go through it all over again! *sigh*
Bette and tina don’t need sex right now. It will just complicate situations. That’s how you start to f up and then get caught out there. Post soon!
Tina is afraid to go all the way,if it was anyone but Porter they wouldnt stop. Shane is after Carman hot and heavy thanks
Young love…at least B&T don’t have to worry about an unwanted pregnancy – Bette could use that to bolster her position. Thanks!
Great chapter, keep them coming =)5 stars
It’s hard time for Alice but she deserve it! just i hope Dana give her another chance! B&T they are so cute!
So Bette is hard up and Tina is afraid -I do believe it’s time for an honest *um* solid chat. I dig Alice but standing up your girl is so wrong, she should marinate in guilt a bit.
What a brilliant story! :) More please
Good chapter. Poor Bette, they will get better next time. Alice and Dana need to talk and hope they will work thing out. Ok post soon please, thanks!
Honestly I am such a bad lesbian i.e. female I was like come on Tina give it up j/k (not really). Cause really it’s Bette’s first time too ya know she is also scared. I think it’s interesting how most fanfic writers write the dynamics in their relationship; Bette stud Tina pillow queen. I think when it finally does happen Tina should be the one to get them there.
i love this story…B&T are great, but i hope bette doesn’t have to take too many cold showers for long…shane is really smooth, carmen should be happy…and i sense alice is in deep trouble with dana and lara in the picture
I always enjoy your posts, but this was a bit heavy. Poor Bette, but then again I totally understand Tina and Bette has to be patience and not show how dissapointed she is, when she is all worked up. I don’t think Dana and Alice is right for eachother, they live too diffirents lifes, they should just be friends if you ask me. Keep’em coming…loves this story.
When I see u have posted I always sing ‘what a feeling’ from flashdance… I don’t know, guess that is your themesong ok ? LMAO Thanks for giving us another chappy of your great story! you are incredibly gifted and I am still wondering when your first novel will come out! CU Fellow FFA-er
I agree with slipperynipple when it comes to Bette always being the leader. Tina loves Bette as much as Bette loves her. They do need to talk it out and maybe understand that both are scared about what comes next. Maybe then Tina will be the first one to initiate their coming together. Too bad Shane lives in the type of situation that she does. No wonder she is so introverted when others are around. Hopefully she will get together with Carmen who can bring her out of her shell. And then there is Alice always putting her foot into her mouth. I am hoping that Dana will choose Alice. Lara maybe a nice girl but Alice is the girl for Dana.
And the award for Complete Cluster Fuck of the Week goes to (envelope please)…Alice Pieszecki and Dana Fairbanks! Man, I felt for Bette in this chapter. The sexual healing was so close, yet so far! Well, you’ve written another spectacular chapter Manda. You know I’m looking forward to the next one. Please post soon!
please a lot more of bette and tina!! They are so cute together. I love your writing style!!!
Thanks Manda for another wonderful chapter! I think it’s really time for B&T to have a talk… or else Bette is gonna lose control one of these days :))
Great chapter Manda, loved it really.