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More Than a Feeling
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"I was out with the girls." Tina lied. "Just hanging."
"Oh." Samantha replied, lifting her head up to look down at Tina, suspicious. "You look red. You get a sunburn?"
Tina looked down at her arms and finally realized how red they actually were, even at night. That was going to hurt tomorrow. "I guess. We were out in town."
"Okay."
Tim bent down, connected Jagger’s leash to his collar, and was pulled forward, past Tina. "Whoa!" He yelled, stumbling into the driveway. Tina and Samantha both chuckled.
"Mom’s still at work. There’s some leftovers in the fridge if you want them." Samantha said, stepping out of the house as Tina stepped inside. "We’re gonna take Jagger for a walk."
"All right. See you in a bit." Tina tried her best to sound normal, but there were too many things on her mind at the moment. She smiled at her sister and neighbor before closing the door.
Samantha turned and caught up with Tim, who was trying his best to keep the Herculean dog under control. "That was weird."
"Huh?"
"Tina. What’s up with her lately?"
Tim shrugged, an uneasy tingling feeling spreading around in his stomach. "I don’t know."
"Didn’t she seem a little…off to you?"
"I-I guess. I don’t know." Tim felt hot. It was suddenly very hot outside, and not the nice kind of hot either. He had noticed how sad Tina seemed, and how different she was acting since that night…He’d nearly forgotten what Eric had done to Tina and now it was eating her up. But he promised not to tell. Well, he was going to talk to Tina soon. Very soon.
"And another thing, she said she was out with her friends, but Dana called and said she hadn’t seen Tina since school."
"Maybe she meant Alice and Bette."
"Maybe…" Samantha trailed off, squinting as she contemplated. "But I don’t think so." She bit her lip, beginning to worry for her little sister. Something was up, and she was going to find out what it was.
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Tina shuffled into the kitchen and grabbed a soda and the phone before going to her bedroom. She threw down her book bag and flopped back on her bed, groaning in frustration. She dialed the number of the one person she knew she could talk to at a time like this. Dana. There was barely half a ring before Dana picked up. "Hello?"
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Love it as always.
oh, now they are going to play a phone tag…nice to see that shane is getting somewhere with carmen…hopefully B&T can talk and everything will be right…and if dana gives alice another chance, she better not screw up again
Wow, so Tina thinks it’s pretty dumb to Google something like that huh? I’m not ashamed to admit I’ve used Google for things like that. lol I wonder why Tina didn’t answer the phone? Maybe she went to the bathroom like Bette did. Or she just zonked out from exhaustion.
Manda! finally! honey i’ve been waiting for this chappy forever..lol, glad your back!..very perfect chapter too i must say. Lol, i am def one of those “google” losers. What can i say?!..i really hope that Dana does give alice another chance, and B and T to stop playing phone tag and start talking. I love dana and T’s relationship, i can’t wait for the next chapter manda, post soon.
Tina was going to googlr that. If any thing can be found that is the place. Alice is a butt,but Lara is a bigger one. poor Dana give alice another chace Now One bette and Tina Tina is afraid and Bette is being so sweet about it. thanks
Welcome back. Tina and Bette do need to talk and hopefully soon. Maybe now they can really talk and begin to understand how both are feeling. Dana should give Alice another chance. Lara is nice but she is not Alice. Shane is finally making headway with Carmen. Can’t wait for the talk.
Thanks for the great chapter. I am enjoying how Tina and Bette are taking their time with each other.
aw shucks, Bette and Tina should just get it on already!!!!!
5 pages = high-5 for Manda! So, Tina doesn’t think she’s ready/she’s afraid to disappoint Bette? Well, as the G.I. Joe soldiers would say, “Knowing is half the battle.” Perhaps after discussing the debacle that I shall call Beachgate, Jr. Tibette can, um, round the other bases before sliding into home (insert joke). Good Lord, Tina has to worry about telling her mom and Sammy about Bette, her hormones, and Tim keeping quiet about Eric. Tina’s plate is definitely filled at the buffet known as life. The Hot Mess of the Week award still goes to Alice and Dana. Expect what you accept Dana…Clarity tried to warn you! As for Shane and Carmen, perhaps this is a perfect example of what parents around the world mean when they say, “You can do anything you set your mind to.” You can also insert a joke there. Brilliant Manda! If this is what writers block produces I could use some. If you can, please post soon. Holla!
LOL Indeed kind of familiair! Great minds think alike eh? Great! Love where this story is headed… Ok just love the story through and through! THANKS!
YAY, happy to see your post again, I really enjoy reading it. I guess Tina is heading to Bette’s house? Can’t wait for more.. please continue pretty. :)
Great Chapter Manda, I can’t wait to read the next chapter =)Five Stars
loving this story… ok now get them talking… and i was laughing when dana wanted to check out the internet… waiting for your next post…
Missed this story, Manda. Great update. Thanks. Glad to see that B&T are going to talk. Pls post soon ^_^
Hey! Where did Tina go — to google or not to google? I missed this story — education is overrated.
Glad that you post again after a while, i really enjoy it so much! B&T need to talk, i hope Dana will give a second chance to Alice. take care
Great as always. I love your B&T SO much!
So glad you updated, was wondering where you went. Dana is too funny, lets look it up on the internet. Tina just needs to talk to Bette, and relax.
Good chapter. Bette and Tina need to talk and work thing out. Ok post soon please, thanks!
Great as always, I love this story and please don’t wait that long with the next post :o)) Dana, cut Alice off and go explore with Lara – btw Dana and Tinas relationship is really something, they are sweet :o)) Why didn’t Tina pick up??? and I’ve a feeling that Sammy will find out about Bette before Tina tell her…..more please :o))
Great chapter, can’t wait for the next one.