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More Than a Feeling
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“Really?” Tina asked, looking at herself. “Does it look bad? I mean, it only stings a bit, do I look like a lobster?”
Lara laughed. “No, no. It’s not bad…my mom makes this cream from tomato juice and buttermilk, it sounds gross, but it actually works pretty well. I can bring some tomorrow, if you want?”
“That’d be great.” Tina smiled. “Thanks.” She seems nice. Really nice. And pretty too. No wonder Dana’s crushing on her. Tina turned to Dana, who hadn’t said a word in a while. She was kind of just gazing at Lara, off in her own world. “So, off to lunch?”
“Wha? Huh? Oh.” Dana shook her head, making Tina and Lara laugh. “Yeah, sorry. I just kinda zoned out there.”
Tina shook her head, looping arms with Dana. “Come on space cadet.” The three of them headed off to lunch.
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Bette knocked on the English department door, looking around the hallway, as if she were doing something wrong.
“Come in,” came the soft reply.
Bette opened the door, nervously playing with the sheet of paper she had in her hands. “Ms. Stone?” Bette called out, reaching for the middle of a line of doors. “May I come in?”
Ms. Stone, who had been chewing on a piece of broccoli, quickly wiped her mouth with a napkin and stood, motioning Bette in. “Of course, come in. Have a seat.” Bette looked around the small, cramped office that was Ms. Stone’s, and sighed. It was just as she pictured it.
Her desk was tidy, not surpisingly. Ms. Stone, for all her hippy free ways, was a tidy person. Everything seemed in it’s place, especially since she had four filing cabinets. Four! What in the hell does she keep in there? Of course, the walls were cluttered with clichéd posters, like “Save the whales,” and “Reading is fundamental.” Blah, blah, blah.
Bette took a seat beside Ms. Stone’s desk, smiling uncomfortably. “Sorry to interrupt your lunch, but this was the only free time I had–”
Ms. Stone waved her hand, cutting her off. “No, no, don’t worry about it. What can I do for you Bette?”
“Uh, I was wondering if you would write a letter of recommendation for me.”
Ms. Stone brightened. “Of course. You’re one of my best students. I would love to write one for you. May I ask which colleges you’re applying to?” She asked, taking the paper from Bette.
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Hey do i get to be fist since i actually read it and then commented? I realy missed this story, and am glad you are back. Bette realy needs to talk to Tina about the applications and the future.Hope you post again soon. =)
You can be fist, sure. But I’m first. =p MANDAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA! Holy crap it’s been awhile. Glad to see this story again. =)
where have you been? i so hope bette will choose tina or at least will talk to her…i understand that education is important but so is love
i also missed this story… now correct me if i’m wrong but is tina a grade or 2 behind bette… bette has to talk toher… and i’m sure tina would want her to live her dream… please continue soon
It is so good to see this story and you do suck! lol Okay you don’t suck! I really misse this story and hope you don’t have us waiting too long for the next update!
OMG…i haven’t even read this yet and i already know it’s an amazing chapter..the end..post soon thanks for remembering us manda!
LMFAOOOOO AT JENNY AND ALICE..haha nice touchh.
I believe the salty discharge seeping from my eyes are tears of joy (you thought I was getting at something nasty for a second, huh?) due this update. You writing again means that I can start to neglect my work once again as I read new chapters from you. Sweet! Nonetheless, I truly hope that life is treating you well. Take care and you know that I’m looking forward to the next chapter.
good to see you back :D I’ve been missing this story heaps :) Hope you can post more soon and hope that Bette can make a wise decision… while Dana and Alice can sort their things out soon too :D So happy u’re back! ;)
I’VE MISSED THIS STORY SO MUCH!!! Clearly, really glad to see you back!
Holy mother… Its true… *blinkblink* MANDA IS BACK! */doing a happy dance! Oh my… I wish Bette would tell Tina about all this… im ure they will be able to work it out… Now T will probably hear it from miss broccoli…erm… Stone I mean ;) GREAT CHAP! PPS!
Is a pleasure read your fanfic again, plese don’t let us hanging son long! I think that Bette should talk to Tina, they are partners and need to talk and make some decision together or at least tell each other what are their wants. Take care and welcome back!
I wondered what happened to this story. I am glad that it is back. I love B&T in this story and not to mention the rest of the gang. Bette needs to go to Yale but then maybe Tina can follow her there.
Good chapter and drama coming!!!!!!!
Welcome back – I’ve really missed you, so I’m ecstatic to see a post from you again :o)) Hope you let B&T talk about this stuff. Post soon please….
I’m so happy you posted again. I was beginning to think you had given this story up. I love it and sincerely hope you will be posting regularly again. Keep the girls happy and together ;-)
So glad you started writing again! I love this story!
Hey! Welcome back!!! I missed this story so much!!! One of my favorite! Please please stick around, and delight us with more of this tiny B&T! About the story, I think Bette should talk to Tina about her fears… Thank you so much, this is so great!
Your constant clarifications in the author’s note that you haven’t given up on your story give me hope that sooner or later you’ll post again. Great update but I’m missing the interaction between Bette and Tina and Alice and Dana.
Oh wow! Soo happy to see you post again. Missed this story! Bette shouldn’t give up on Tina to pursue her studies. Maybe she can workout something much closer to home? Hope you would continue to post. Thanks Manda.