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More Than Satisfies (1/2)
Alice peered through the peep hole, “Dana!! You’re early!”
“By like a minute, Al.”
“Yeah, but I’m not ready.”
“Just let me in, Al. I’ll wait.”
“No. I want to be ready. Come back in five minutes.”
“You aren’t serious?”
“Do you really think I’m kidding? Five minutes Fairbanks, not a second earlier!”
Dana waited at the door for a few seconds before accepting that Alice was really going to make her wait. She leaned against the wall and slipped to the floor to wait. Five really long minutes later, she rose from the floor and knocked again.
“Who is it?”
“Al!?!”
“Oh Dana, come on in.” Alice said opening up the front door. “What’s in the bag?”
“Wow, Alice, you look great.” Dana made it no secret as admired Alice. She was wearing a simple skirt and shirt. But somehow to Dana, the way the shirt fell across Alice, it was enough to take her breath away.
“Oh, thanks. I wasn’t sure what we were doing, so I wasn’t sure what to wear.” Alice leaned in towards Dana and put her hands into the bag, “So what’s in the bag?”
“Not so fast. Keep your hands to yourself.” Dana said, pushing Alice’s hands out of the bag, “It’s dinner. I’m cooking for us tonight.”
“You’re cooking?”
“Yeah, well I was trying to figure out what to do and I realized that I didn’t want to go out. I didn’t want to share you with anyone, so I picked up everything we could need tonight and we’re staying right here. Is that ok?”
“So what are you making me?”
“Follow me.” Dana put both of the bags into one hand and grabbed Alice’s hand with the other and lead her into the kitchen.
She put the bag down on the counter, reached in and started pulling out its contents.
“First we have wine.” Placing a bottle on the counter, then pulling out a container, “Here, we have spinach and artichoke dip.”
“Mmm. I love that. Do you have the blue chips too?” Alice asked, her hands trying to get into the bag. Dana playfully slapped them.
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(66 votes, average: 4.02 out of 5)
what Layla gray and lenore said– yeah, your angst makes my toes curl…. your fluff moves them too. whatever the hell THAT means– I love this. i, like most of the danish fandom, needed it.
I love this story, you write fluff so so well. Pls post soon:)
Danish fluff…I could read this stuff ALL day, EVERY day!!! Thanks so much.
The chapter was tender and charming. I like your fluffer qualities best. You’ve short changed yourself…you write the slice of life wonderfully. Best of the season to you, happy holidays.
This is a warm & fuzzy feelng story.
I’m really enjoying it!
Thanks danish fans need this time to time.
Though you are the queen of the angst, it seems to me you also write the fluff pretty well! I’m even more impatient than Alice, and want part 2 of the story now please.
Cid, so happy you posted! Now why would you say that your fluff in not as good as your angst? Because that just left feeling all aglow with warm fuzzy feelings and wide assed grin on my face.
this is great I love it please post soon so that I can see what will happen
great story.. fluff, angst, both are good… post soon