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Move Along
"Can I ask you something?"
"Sure you can."
"What’s wrong with you? I mean, I don’t mean to pry or anything. But when you came in at the Planet, you looked like you had been crying about something serious. You don’t have to tell me, but I just want to know what made a beautiful woman like you cry."
She felt sort of touched at Jonah’s comment, understanding what she meant by being good with words. But still, she didn’t feel like breaking the happy moment just then. But then, she wanted to talk about it. She wanted to vent and rave, bitch and complain, cry and scream. And in front of a complete stranger? Carmen was unsure what to do, her facial features turning solem and sort of sad as her brows knitted up and her lips puckered out while her eyes lost their light, turning back to the darker chocalate color that made Jonah feel like she wasn’t doing much of a job of cheering her up.
"You know what? Don’t worry about it," she smiled while standing back up, stretching her torso," how about some hot chocolate? Sound good, I’m in the mood for some?"
"Yeah, that’s sounds great." Carmen leaned further back into the couch while she continued to trace her eyes over each pattern on the red meshed run under the coffee table. It didn’t really intrigue her, but she wanted to just do something to get her mind off of it. In the kitchen, Jonah was picking up cups, filling them with water while putting them in the microwave. She felt sort of bad for Carmen, because what ever was wrong with her made her feel like she’d caused it. Well, not cause it persa but bringing it up like she had was sort of rude. It was none of her business, she reminded herself. So, just bud out, she thought while mixing the coco packets in with the hot water. Sighing, she returned back into the living room with two cups in hand. Handing the brown tinted one to Carmen, Jonah sat back down to take a sip of the newly prepared drink that had small whisps of steam eminating from the top. Taking a small sip, Jonah put it back on the table, swolled it quickly while her tongue felt like it was on fire.
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You’re a beautiful writer. This story is awesome. I like Jonah but I hope that Carmen is still in love with Shane and vice versa. What can I say? I’m a sucker for them:)Please do update soon!
You’re a beautiful writer. This story is awesome. I like Jonah but I hope that Carmen is still in love with Shane and vice versa. What can I say? I’m a sucker for them:)Please do update soon!
Very nice! Jonah is very believable as a new character, and their attraction is also believable. You’re a good writer, update soon!
Really interesting…and great writing!! Really want to know where this story is going… what happens between Carmen and Jonah? And whatabout Shane? Want to read more!