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My Captor- Chapter 14
Carmen: I just want to get to know you.
Shane was a bit suprised and worried. Maybe she’s caught on about her identity.
Shane: A dog.
Carmen: Siblings?
Shane’s face turned to stone. Her eyes stared into space. The thought of her brother resurfacing in her mind made her want to cry. She had been so wrapped up in Carmen, she had been neglecting her job. Shane pulled away. Carmen felt Shane put up walls around herself.
Carmen: Shane?
In Shane’s mind, she was replaying Shay’s death over and over again. How she could’ve prevented it, if she did her job. If she wasn’t so distracted. She could’ve stopped everything from happening. Shay wouldn’t have been caught in the middle of the gun fight. He would still be here. Carmen reached out to touch Shane’s cheek but Shane brushed her off. She had neglected to visit him. What a terrible sister she had been. She promised to visit him always. How could she forget Shay and be happy by herself.
Shane: I need to go.
Carmen thought Shane knew about the incident with Jenny last night.
Carmen: Wait! Don’t.
She embraced Shane from behind. She didn’t want Jenny, she had SHane. Carmen knew last night was all just a fluke. It wasn’t right.
Carmen: Last night wasn’t real. I was not thinking right.
Shane: What? Last night? What happened last night?
The horror and guilt was written on Carmen’s face. Shane was talking about a totally different thing. She thought about still hiding it, but the lonely look on her face made Carmen feel pain in her heart to keep on lying.
Carmen: Last night… Jenny and I, she made a move on me and I didn’t stop her at first, but I did reject her!
Shane was silent.
Carmen: But we didn’t do anything. I promise, it was just a kiss.
Shane: Just a kiss? Get off Carmen.
The world was sprialing out of control. Carmen didn’t want to let go of her. Shane pulled herself away from Carmen. She ran through the house with Carmen chasing after her. Shane just ran, she didn’t know where to, but she just did. How could she have forgotten Shay for a petty girl. Shane wasn’t allowed to be happy. She had to repent for her mistake. The mistake that cost her her last family member.
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Oh my God!!!! Please update soon. I am happy for your back. Shane has to get out of remorse for Shay’s death soon. Hope Carmen can help her.
Damn Jenny! I hate her! Hope Sharmen can fix their problems.PPS!
jenny go back to nyc!!!!
I like Jenny. She can be evil ha! Oh poor Carmen. Hope Shane would go back to Carmen.
Finally ur back !! I’ve been waiting for your update..Thanks and this is a great chapter..i like how shane brush carmen off!! Drama baby !! Lol…Thanks again and Please update as soon as u can cuz i’ll be waiting for it…Good job * cheers*