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My Captor- Chapter 17
Bette: That didn’t stop him with Jenny, he still threw her out the door. He could just as easily do worse to Shane.
Tina: Well, it’s a gamble.
Bette: What do you propose we do now Tina, sending her back is dangerous. Too dangerous.
Tina: You analyze the files asap for Shane and we’ll know if Cezar and Jenny are planning something.
Bette: I’ll get Bobby to send you the stuff Shane.
Tina: Get back there right now. You can’t have Carmen knowing who you are right now. Or if you decide to tell her, you have to tell her before Jenny does!
Shane: You advise me to tell her?
Tina nodded.
Tina: If she really loves you, she’ll turn a blind eye towards what you’re doing. Maybe even help you.
Shane: I can’t ask her to do that.
Tina: Go back now Shane. This is the only way to keep you out of harm’s way.
Shane sighed. She had to find a good way to tell her. She took out her phone and dialed Carmen’s number.
Carmen: Hey. You coming back?
Shane: Yeah, could you meet somewhere?
Carmen: Why?
Shane: I want you to meet someone. I’ll text you the directions.
Carmen: Ok.
Carmen got the directions from Shane and changed into some nice casual clothes and went out. Jenny heard Carmen and knew what was going to happen. She needed to get Carmen away from Shane like Cezar wanted. She stopped her at the stairs.
Jenny: Carmen I need to talk to you.
Carmen looked down at the floor still uneasy.
Carmen: Can it wait?
Jenny: It’s urgent. It’s about Shane.
Carmen: I’m going to go meet up with her right now.
Jenny: She’s not who she says she is.
Carmen: Don’t make up lies Jenny. We’re not going to work out. Shane is the one I need right now. That’s not going to change.
Jenny: She’s just using you.
Carmen: That’s enough. I’m leaving.
Jenny: She’s a cop!
Carmen ran out the door. Her red sports car was waiting for her. She hopped in and left. Jenny’s words kept bothering Carmen. She got to the church and saw Shane’s dark silver bike there. She parked the car next to Shane’s motorcycle and walked up the old church. A nun stood by the door.
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(21 votes, average: 3.67 out of 5)
I continue to hate Jenny!
hmmm what can i say…i know…ditto, got to agree with everyone here
oh shiiiit. i hope carmen realizes how shane really feels and not fall for jennys bs. pms :)
You are right, smexysharmen. I misse wonderful sharmen fic writers. I just know some other sites for only sharmen fics and I usually go there.To comment about this chap. It’s my fav. cahp. Can’t wait for the next.