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My Captor- Chapter 18
Carmen: Shane, it’s okay. I’m here. I’ll protect you.
Shane: I’m sorry you’re always… always seeing me like this.
Carmen: Shush, I’m getting you out of here.
The garage door opened again. Cezar walked in with Carlos and a bunch of other guys.
Cezar: You’re not here to protect her. You’re just here because you’ll watch her pay for her actions.
Carmen: Stop it! Let her go!
Cezar: Carmen! You’re my daughter and you’ll listen to what I say!
Carmen: If you’re going to hurt her, you’ll have to kill me first.
Carmen cuddled Shane’s head. Her eyes determined, just like her mother’s. Cezar and Carmen stared at each other fighting. Cezar gave up. It was like fighting against his wife. Useless.
Cezar: She stays with you 24/7. I’ll deal with her later.
Carmen: You don’t dare touch her.
Cezar: That will be up to me and her, depending on how useful she is to me.
Carmen untied Shane and helped her into the car.
Carmen: I warn you, don’t touch her.
She tended to Shane’s wounds. Carmen’s heart broke tending to all the cuts and scraps. She hated always seeing Shane lying there helpless and hurt because of her.
Camren: Shane, I can’t say I’m sorry, but I… I really can’t let you go. I am sorry for my dad. You just made me crazy for you. You know I hate you sometimes. Why didn’t you tell me? You stupid person. I wish you would tell me instead of me hearing it from someone else. I don’t even know why I’m rambling.
Shane: I’m sorry. It’s my fault.
Shane looked up at Carmen. She raised up her hand and touched Carmen’s cheek.
Carmen: Stop moving around. If you’re better you’re going back to live in your own room.
Shane was all bandaged up. She was healing well and moved to her own room three days later. Shane just paced around in her room all day long. She tried to go outside, but the door was locked. She found the book Julius Caesar on the bed stand. This was her only way of passing time. She yearned to see Carmen, but even the food was brought in by a chef or a maid. There was a knock on the door.
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(22 votes, average: 3.77 out of 5)
Wow drama drama drama …the tension between shane and carmen is sooooooooo powerful..but i like it..Lol..Shane just needs to put Jenny’s head in the toilet bowl and flush 10 times..LOL..keep up the good work and im waiting for more~~ Thank you so much
WTF is going on? Would someone please just kill Jenny now??!! Sharmen needs to get their shit together!
can carm toss jenny off the balcony now
shane needs to slap Jen silly that bitch is nothin but trouble! I’ve been following ur fic since the begining and I’m sorry i haven’t commented but i really luv this story and i hope there’s a happy endin in the works for our sharmen…great job my friend!!!!
Romeo and Juliet indeed, but that’s more Shane and Carmen than Carmen and Jenny. By the way, Jenny is a total psycho. She beats Shane with a golf club, then, mere days later, she talks to Shane like it never even happened. WTF? She’s crazy. I wonder how Shane will react to seeing Jenny hugging up on Carmen. Jealous Shane? We already have a jealous Carmen thanks to Cherie Jaffe.
OH please update soon, I love this story.
Great chapter. Jenny is a real cold bloody evil. I would hit Jenny with a golf club. Is Shane jealous or going to give up Carmen? Hope Shane got out of this crazy mention with Carmen soon.