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    My Captor- Chapter 21

    Story written on July 9, 2009 by smexysharmen.
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    Too sweet for you.

    Carmen cupped Shane’s face. She opened her mouth to speak, but nothing came out.

    Shane: It’s okay, do you want me to bring you an eclair?

    Carmen nodded smiling happily.

    Shane: I’ll be right back.

    She got up to leave, but Carmen caught her hand.

    Shane: You want to go too?

    Carmen nodded. Shane picked her up in her arms and carried her down to the kitchen and set her down on the counter. She filled and eclair with cream and dipped it with chocolate.

    Shane: Here you go my princess.

    Carmen clapped her hands together smiling brightly. She took the eclair from her hand and ate. Shane had never seem such a bright carefree smile from Carmen before. She wanted to know what was going on inside of Carmen’s head. What was she thinking? Was she living the nightmare over and over again? Shane didn’t even notice Carmen finish the eclair. Carmen saw Shane distracted. She cupped Shane’s face in both hands and kissed her.

    Shane: Too sweet.

    Carmen opened her mouth. Shane expected nothing to come out.

    Carmen: Too… sweet… for you…

    Shane looked at her wide eyed.

    Shane: Carmen! Say that again!

    Carmen: Too sweet for you.

    Shane: Yes! Yes!

    Carmen: Too sweet for you!

    Shane hugged her and spun her around in circles.

    Carmen: Too sweet for you!

    Shane placed her back on the counter.

    Shane: Carm, do you know anything else?

    Carmen looked at Shane with her wide sparkling eyes. She took a wad of whip cream and smashed it against Shane’s face.

    Carmen: Too sweet for you! Too sweet for you!

    Shane: Carmen!

    Carmen made a dash for the door. Shane ran after her.

    Shane: Get back here!

    Carmen giggled, running around the house with Shane chasing after her. They didn’t notice Cherie Jaffe walk in. Carmen crashed right into her. Shane immediately helped Carmen up.

    Shane: Are you alright?

    She pat the dust off Carmen’s clothing.

    Shane: Running gets you into trouble. Stand right here Carmen.

    Shane helped Cherie up.

    Shane: Sorry, Miss Jaffe. Carmen’s a bit ill.

    Cherie: That’s okay.

    Carmen’s eyes grew wide with unspoken terror, as if she had seen the devil himself. She tugged at Shane’s shirt and hit behind Shane.

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    4. Please Kill Jenny.I am so glad Carmen still want Shane even though she is not normal now. I think Cherie has done to Carmen very bad. She will get a revenge from Shane soon.

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