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    My Captor- Chapter 24

    Story written on July 14, 2009 by smexysharmen.
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    The Planet was off the hook that night. The music blasted through the doors as bouncers stood guard over who was allowed in and what not. Shane and Carmen were escorted to the VIP tables. Alice saw them and ran over. She didn’t work at night, so it was okay for her to flirt around.

     

    Alice: Hey there good looking.

     

    She winked at Shane who chuckled.

     

    Shane: Hi.

     

    Alice: Want to dance with me?

     

    Shane: Well you’ll have to ask Carmen.

     

    Alice: You’re no fun.

     

    Carmen wrapped her arms around Shane’s neck and kissed her cheek.

     

    Carmen: Awe babe.

     

    Shane laughed.

     

    Shane: Surprised I’m so obedient?

     

    Carmen nuzzled her nose into Shane’s neck.  Kit made her way through the crowd too.

     

    Kit: Common DJ Suga! Your turn to shine.

     

    Shane raised an eyebrow.

     

    Shane: DJ Suga? I didn’t know you had such a sweet nickname.

     

    Carmen whispered into Shane’s ear seductively.

     

    Carmen: There’s a lot you don’t know about me.

     

    She blew a gentle blast of cool hair down Shane’s neck sending shivers all over her body. Kit led her away and to the DJ booth.

     

    Kit: Are you ready to dance?!

     

    The crowd went wild seeing Carmen there. They screamed her name over and over again. Carmen placed a hand over the headphone and a hand on the disc. Like magic, the beats started to flow and music beyond belief sounded out of the stereo. Shane watched Carmen sway to the music she made. It was awesome. She never heard anything like that before. It was mesmerizing. She couldn’t believe she had such a musically talented treasure by her side. Carmen got a 15 minute break halfway through the night. She moved through the crowd and pulled Shane onto the dance floor. Her hips rocking to the beat with Shane’s hands on her waist. Carmen’s forehead pressed against Shane’s as the song changed smoothly from upbeat and fast to slow and romantic. Carmen had her arms around Shane’s neck. Shane pulled Carmen close to her by the waist.

     

    Shane: I’ve learned something new about you today.

     

    Carmen: And what is that?

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    3. So she was held captive before? The plot thickens. This sucks for Carmen and Shane. I hope she finds Carmen quick-style. Oh, and I like the DJ thing. It’s good to see that there are more sides to Carmen. Gives her character more dimension as a charact

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