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My One Special One – Chapter 1
“Thanks, Bette.”
Her eyes lingered on mine and I swear she – yes, I know she looked down at my mouth and then quickly back up into my eyes. Okay, Bette, let your breath out and then breathe in. If you don’t, you will not live to ask her to go out for coffee or ask if she’ll marry you. What the ***** is wrong with me? I turned to leave.
“Bette?”
“Yes?”
“Tina Kennard. My friends call me TK.”
I smiled and turned to walk to the other side of the store – which, at this time, appeared to be a distant mile away. I really tried not staring at Tina. I busied myself with rearranging some pieces on one of the tables. They didn’t need rearranging. They looked just fine. I rearranged them again. My back was to the main part of the store.
She’s going to be leaving soon, Bette. Go up to her and ask her out – no, can’t do it. If she says no, I’ll die, I’ll simply die. What the *****? Am I fifteen? And when did a woman ever say no to me? When did I start to care if they did?
I was having this delightful conversation with myself when I felt a gentle touch on my shoulder. I slowly turned.
“Bette, thanks so much. I need to leave now but I’ll be back when I can spend some more time. I would like to buy something special for a dear friend and can’t seem to decide what that should be yet. But I have a feeling there is something special among all these pieces.”
IT’S ME!! I’M THAT SOMETHING SPECIAL!! PICK ME!! PICK ME!! I was screaming in my head.
“Anytime, Tina. I look forward to seeing you again.”
ASK HER!! HURRY UP, YOU FOOL!
Tina made her way to exit the store. She was just at the door –
I swallowed hard. I felt my heart beating against my chest – this is bad, very, very bad.
“Ah, Tina?”
She pivoted on her heels. “Yes.”
“Would you like to go for a cup of coffee or something with me tomorrow night?” Oh, God, please say yes, please.
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(36 votes, average: 4.67 out of 5)
I’m so far down the comment list..seems like quite a lineup for you….pls yes continue, that was way to fun to read, post long, post often, and post now!!! sorry pls
Yes, please continue. Do you plan on one with Tina’s POV?Thanks for the sappy stuff, love the sappy stuff. New love is grand.
of course!!!!!!!!!!! it was funny, sweet
Hell yes you need to continue! That was a great opening! I can’t wait to see where you take us…and could Ms Tina be a little more agressive in this story?Don’t keep us waiting long.
Great start loved your previous work so please continue with an update soon!!!
Hey rc!! I was soo excited that you had posted a new story for us! And from reading it I am definitely not disappointed. It’s awesome to see Bette fall head over heels in love for Tina for once instead of Tina falling for Bette. The change of perspective is great. Thanks rc, and yes, please do continue!!!
You have to continue that was awesome
That was great! I love the more agressive Tina. :)
More please!
Absolutely continue this story. This is very good writing. Thanks.
fergz baby, bring the popcorn and beer. rc has posted a dayum fine new story about b/t. hurry the foof up, k?rc – so glad you didnt disappoint us and not have another story. was doing a happy dance espeically after the yuck that laurel put me through. continue continue continue. thanks baby
You really do need to continue. I love that tina seems to be onthe same page as Bette in this beginning. Great job!
This was amazing! Not only do you need to continue but you MUST do it soon…Thanks!
This is a wonderful start. Yes, please continue and be quick about it. I like your strong Tina who seems very sure of herself. I’d like her point of view if possible.
albeez..popcorn and beer..right here! god..I got so excited to you post I about fell out of my chair. Thank you and please continue. I am ready for more. albeez..don’t get foofy on me
Of course we want you to continue, you know were suckers for any B&T story. Love that Bette seems to be so flustered in this one. Can’t wait for more.
Have you completely lost your mind???? First, it’s a Bette and Tina story and second it’s written by you. Like there’s a chance in hell we wouldn’t want you to continue. Please!!!!!
Good to see you back with a new story and please continue.
Wow, I havent left a comment in forever. You should feel very special lol…But seriously, i love this and I cant wait for more.
I’m loving the “Ms.ladyineedtomeetyounow” :-)please continue!
Please continue, if it is anything like you have written, previously it should be wonderful. Look forward to your next chapter.
hey there rc.. yay,new story from you…super treat!!!!!!! lol~ pls do continue
Wonderful story. Yes, please continue. Looking forward to more.
nice, i like how tina seems to kind of have the upper hand, please continue.
haven’t read it yet but just want to say, you can write anything you want about B&T, after last wonderful story of yours, i’m your loyal reader forever…back to reading
Yes… we’ve dubbed you: “Ms.ladyweneedyoutocontinuenow” ;-)
Hell Yeah are you kidding miss the opportunity to read one of your stories. Are you mad woman? This is already one of the great ones.
OH YES PLEASE CONTINUE! Your Bette really had me laughing in this one. . .great start, please post again soon!
RC..very glad that you’re back. This line “No one should have a body or face like that without being legally licensed.” is funny yet something B would say about T. Please do continue..happy you’re back.
Oh YEAH PRETTY PLEASE ……
Hi arcee, I’ve been searching for more of your great stories, where have you been? Well wherever you’ve been, I am glad to see your back. Please continue to write your sexy hot stories about B&T, my favorites females. Can’t wait for next installment.
Welcome back. Continue? Do u even have to ask. Thanks for taking the time.
Wow – yes please continue. A very very interesting beginning and I can’t wait to see what you have in mind about these 2 lovely ladies….Tina certanly seems gay. Post soon please….
so looking forward to this one
Absolutely conyinue, please!!!!!!!!!
Yes please continue.
Yes please continue, this is good starting and the kiss is hot, can’t wait to see what’s next. Post soon please, thanks!
okay, read it, loved it, want it more, need it now…well, here goes my high education out of the window, barely can manage couple of words…great beginning, i love it already, please post soon, because i love it
Love this one, by all means please continue or we will hunt you down. Next chapter please. Thanks for the post.
Awww Bette is so cute! Yes please continue! Great start so far!
wow i like this beginging can’t wait for next post
yay, it’s good to see you again :) I love the take on this new story! not that I’m complaining, but is this story going to be only from bette’s pov or tina’s too? thanks for this great opening and please continue!!!! keep writing. I’ll be reading.
ok, i’m ready 1 2 3 let’s go…
Sensual and sizzling loved reading this chapter. Post more please and soon.