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My One Special One – Chapter 11
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Bette’s legs buckled at the feel of Tina’s arousal. She’s so wet for me.
“Do you have any doubt to my need, baby?” Tina growled. She moved her hips into Bette’s hand and long fingers.
“Nono, I don’t, T.”
“Fill my need, baby. Please, move inside me. Touch that spot only you have found.”
and Bette complied, moving in and out and then slightly curling her long fingers to touch the spot that sent Tina spiraling out of control. She had backed Tina against the wall, holding her up. Tina was close to orgasm. Her walls were beginning their spasm and clenching Bette’s fingers. The core of her being was the center of an enormous rippling circle in a steamy river as it meets the giant sea. She wrapped herself around Bette and her fingers were digging into her back as the circles of her climax were widening.
Bette wanted – no, she needed the indescribable sensation of tasting Tina as she climaxed, to feel the explosion of her release in her mouth, on her tonguelick and swallow the steamy wetness, the tropical heat of their passion
She kissed her way downdown to Tina’s now
Pulsing
Wet
Hot
center and placed one of Tina’s legs on her shoulder. Bette moaned a deep near cry when she ran her tongue through passion slick swollen lips, then circled her throbbing clit and began slowly but intently sucking.
Tina’s mind was swirling, her thoughts in a vortex of emotions. Her body, bathed in the sweat of desire, was trembling. All nerve endings were sparking; the heat passing through her body was increasing the incredible rush to an intensity and magnitude of bursting proportions.
Once again, as a powerful climax was building, soft words seeped through:
This is special, Tina. This is once in a lifetime. Tell her. Say it. Say it and own it.
“Oh, God, Bettebaby, I.wantI needto tell you” Tina tried grasping the wall with one hand; her other holding Bette’s head close to her. Her orgasm hit as hard and as fiercely hot as the molten red iron of a blacksmith as it is pounded into the desired shape. That piece has no choice but to bend to the shape demanded. Its soul is owned by the one shaping it. Its molecular makeup remains the same, but its form is forever changed in those blistering, blazing moments.
Tina Kennard’s mind and definition of all things beautiful and worthy with regard to “falling in love” were taking new form. The cautious, somewhat fearful and protective part of her could no longer fight the new shape her heart and soul were taking. But did she have the courage to voice these much deeper feelings, speak them, let Bette know? Would Bette run for the hills?
Tina gasped as the ripples and aftershocks of her orgasm spread out. She touched Bette’s shoulder, trying to pull her up.
“Please, come here, hold me.” Tina pleaded. Bette rose and held her tight, her lips next to Tina’s ear.
“TTinaI’m so inI’m so happy.”
Tina cradled Bette’s head. She fought the tears. She so wanted to say what Bette couldn’t bring herself to say either. They were both so afraid to let go and let be.
So afraid to say the words to match the feelings.
So afraid to speak what their hearts and souls already knew.
They are each other’s mate, for all the days of their lives. These days of forever would begin, if only Fear didn’t own their words of admission.
TBC
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your metaphors are incredible, this is a very beautiful chapter and i hope they will overcome their fear and express their love….should we be scared about the person following Tina? i hope not…….don’t give up on B&T, i hope Ilene will find the way to finally bring them back together as well
That was a great chapter, rc. Please let them overcome the fear and say it, “I love you.” Now who is following Tina and what for? Please don’t let anything happen to her it would kill Bette for sure. Can we just have a beautiful love story and not too much drama, please. lol. Thanks for the post.
WOW!!!! Is all I can SAY!!!
Oh good God! That was phenomenal…bloody phenomenal. I hope you’ll post soon, arceextl.
loved this… and just what we needed.. and now we need to for them to say those little words… so please continue
Awesome update, and so HOT!!! Please post soon.
Like Van said….that was so intense – WOW. I absolutely love your writing and can’t get enough – I’m addicted :o))….more please and have a great weekend…
wow that was worth waiting for-damm that was a great chapter
Damn that was hot and awesome. Ok who the hell is following Tina and I think the drama is coming. Ok post soon please, thanks!
what a wonderful chapter! i enjoy the way that you put this 2 together, i hope that they soon be available to said the magical words! post soon
Love your writing and your story!!!!Hope you will continue and ignore the misery of season 3!!
Great story. Just caught up. An award icon is in the future I think. Thanks!
I know how fear can paralize a person to do nothing. I am struggling with the need to take a cold shower, watching Charmed and needing to put new batteries in my toys. Keep writing.
Arceextl,Another piece of heaven.I adore the way that Bette and Tina are falling head over heels in love with their hearts as their heads put barriers in the way. Hope and trust are the emotions that overcome these obstacles. This is a highly emotive story, wonderfully written and crafted. The care and attention to detail are splendid as your supreme storytelling fills every reader will a little sliver of your imagination. I can’t wait until these gals admit their true feelings to each other. The tenderness and adoration is evident in their lovemaking and constant thoughts of one another. Much gratitude for continuing this marvellous melodrama and making my day magical. Your Loyal Fan.
words don’t fail me, that was a fantastic piece of writing. Post soon
Glad to see another chapter from you! I’ve been in there shoes before, where you want to say it but are afraid it’s too soon or whatever. But your eyes give it away anyway. I guess saying it actually makes it more real, and reality can be scary as hell.
Goodness that was sooo….. intense!! Beautifully written. Now I know that drama is around the corner, who is following Tina???? And Y ??? I know you won’t let anything happen to her (at least I hope not). Looking forward to another update….VERY VERY SOON!!!! LOL!!!
Who is following Tina? The love semse was so intense,Love how Tina was the one at the door,Post soon.thanks
This whole chapter was beautifully written. I loved the descriptives with shaping the steel, and how “its molecular makeup remains the same, but its form is forever changed in those blistering, blazing moments.”That was fabulous, along with these two thoughts which will stay with me for a long time. 1. “I just cannot live my life through the eyes and minds of other people.” 2. The core of her being was the center of an enormous rippling circle in a steamy river as it meets the giant sea.” Incredible writing. Thank you very much for this chapter.
B & T love one another to intensely, totally, and completely that the fear of saying it out loud keeps them silent. They know how they feel, but to hear those words spoken with true intent is what will make the seal unbreakable. Who was following Tina? Does it have to do with a case she’s working on? Drama and mystery…