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    My One Special One – Chapter 17

     

    “I’ve got to call her and tell her what’s going on.”  Tina started digging in her purse for her cell phone. Bette was on speed dial so it was just a one button push of only seconds.

     

     

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    Bette was in her office at the back of the store when she heard the door open.  She looked up and saw a tall, well-dressed man enter.  Just as she began to walk over to him, her cell rang.  She caught a momentary glance of the stranger’s steel blue eyes as he turned his head in the direction of her and the ringing of the phone.

     

    Bette raised her index finger.  She thought it might be Tina and didn’t want let it go to voice mail.  “I’ll be with you in just a moment.”

     

    “No problem. I’ll be browsing.”

     

    Bette knew enough from working on South Street or anywhere in a major city, you never turned your back when you’re alone in a store.  Nothing had ever happened to her or anyone she knew and she wanted to keep the statistics at zero.  She reached the phone, leaned against her desk and looked out in the direction where the man was standing, and pressed Talk.

     

    “Hey, I’ve got someone in the store but I’m glad you called.  How’s my girl?  You still in court?”

     

    With a low and deliberately steady voice, Tina relayed the latest event to Bette.  She had hoped Bette would not pick up her underlying fear, but it wasn’t working.

     

    “T, what’s the chance this is a for real threat and not just a scare tactic?”

     

    “Baby, these days with the amount of money involved in the drug traffic and this defendant’s place in the hierarchy of the money making machine in Philly, it’s got to be taken seriously.  There’s a squad car probably sitting right outside your store at this moment.  They’ve obviously followed us and know of my connection with you.  That alone says they’re serious in finding out what’s important to me.  Bette, I…I couldn’t bear anything happening to you…”  Tina broke down.

     

    As Tina was talking, Bette began walking towards the center of the store where the man was browsing.  She turned her head to the right, looked out the front window and, sure enough, there was a squad car sitting about ten feet from the front door.

    Comments

    1. Yeah, this story is getting more and more exciting. The badies are coming out of their holes… I love Tina as a lawyer (I am one myself ;-) ) and hope she will win her case and be happy with Bette after they have got rid of the drug gang.Thank you for this wonderful story, I am really looking forward to your next post.

    2. Have been eagerly awaiting this chapter with a little sense of anxiety myself. We trust that you will not let anything happen to either of our girls. You are doing a wonderful job with this story. Keep writing andI will keep reading. Really enjoy your work. Thank you very, very much.

    3. I hate it when one of the ladies is having trouble with evil people. I hope that Bette will be safe and that Tina will win that case. Baddies are always out there (including IC) and people need to be protected. Sorry about not doing comments before. I was one of those silent readers.

    4. Hey Arceextl, It is wonderful to have you returning and continuing this magnificent story. There was such a serious sence of forebroding in this chapter. Tina’s emotional turmol was expertly conveyed as was Bette’s realization of who her last ‘customer’ may have been. Truly edge of the seat stuff as I am waiting to read what transpires next. Will there be an attempt to harm either gal or more physiological pressure laid on them. It is down to your fantastic skills and talents as a writer that keeps the story fresh and a ‘must-read now’. Thank you do much for this gift. Your Loyal Fan.

    5. This story is so good and really exciting, so please post more often. I love this story and your writing and I hope the next post is about B&T’s evening together. Take care :o))

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