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My One Special One – Chapter 5
Tina was as lost in the moment as Bette was. Emotions were somersaulting in her brain; butterflies tumbling in her belly.
and a powerful, tropical heat wetness and pulsing ache building in her sexual core.
She had enjoyed her sexual encounters with men, even though none were spectacular. She definitely had nothing else to compare it with. It was what most told her it would be. *****? Only if she pleasured herself. Yes, she had faked it and knew she had to because the guys were just so into ‘performance’; once they were done, it never seemed to matter whether she was or not. Did it ever evoke anything near to what she was experiencing right now? Not even close, she thought. And I haven’t even had ***** with her! This is a kiss, Tina, a damn, simple – no simple doesn’t apply – only a ***** mind-blowing, pulse-pounding, sensual, off the wall, grand-slammost erotic kiss I have ever had
Tina knew right then and there – and she would never be able to explain why -no other lips would ever again make her feel as she did in this moment. She shouldn’t but she did, want more. This kiss was moving her to the edge of an orgasmic cliff – she wanted to be taken the rest of the way. She wanted this woman to push her
Over
Fall with her
Deeply
* * *
The slow music had turned to a pounding beat minutes ago, but Bette and Tina were still embraced and moving in a slow grind to their own seductive tune.
“Tina” whispered Bette.
“Ummyes.”
“Could we leave and be alone?” Bette implored.
“Yes, please.”
Bette took Tina’s hand and led her back to the bar area, then headed for the exitbut not before being intercepted by
“Hey, girls, where ya’ going? The night’s still young, music is great, not to mention the great company of your dear, dear friend here”
“Al, we’re calling it an early night” Bette said.
“Oooh, must be time for the horizontal grind, wink wink, and a snack at the Y”
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(32 votes, average: 4.78 out of 5)
If hot and romantic was what you were going for, you were successful. Please don’t leave us waiting for an update for too long!
Love the story can’t wait for more, post a new chapter soon.
Wow, what a fantastic build up to what we hope is coming. Alice as usual, sticks her foot in her mouth, but ya gotta love her. Can’t wait for your next update.
wow, romantic and hot – i love it…this is so poetic and amzingly written, love their thoughts, love the metaphors..btw, i don’t know what snack at the Y means either…
I think I need a whole pack of smokes after this chapter. Good GOD by the time they make love I’ll need a whole damn carton. I am 2 seconds away from getting on my knees and begging for another chapter soon.
Oh and for those who are still lost on the “Y” thing, um, Urban Dictionary gives a pretty cut and dried definition. You just have to scroll down a bit. Yes I could just say it but I’m actually going to be a lady this time and not go there. ;)
HOLY SHIT!!! OMG this has got to be it damn i’m sitting on needles ova here. what a way to end a chap. i thought i was bad but damn!! please post soon. PEACE.
Very romantic and dripping with anticipation. Alice is always Alice LOL, but Bette refuses to let her ruin this moment. Love it PLEASE continue and VERY soon :o)
FANTASTIC!!! MORE MORE MORE!
I quite liked the Bette/Tina part. If I were Bette I don’t think I would have stopped for Alice’s stupid questions, and if I had I think I would have killed her, well maybe just hurt her.
RC…That was so sexy and romantic. They both know in their hearts that each is the other’s soul mate…the missing piece of their puzzle. They are instinctively peeling layers of protection off so that they can fully enjoy and connect in the moments they are sharing. Totally awesome chapter. Thanks RC for sharing…please continue.
WOW and u have decided to leave me like this….beautiful, love your analegies
GOD DAMN IT! just when it was getting good, i really wanted to see the turnout of that! update soon,………as a matter of fact its what i want for christmas, three in a row! yay! get writing!
Amazing writing! Please post soon. Can’t wait to read more.
damn this is so good..please post soon
TBC…???? OH NO…….SOMEONE HAS TAUGHT YOU WRONG…..YOU DONT DO A “TBC” RIGHT IN THE MIDDLE OF “TLC”……COME ON NOW……BRING SOME MORE……IM LIKIN THIS FIC……
this is real good…!
What an incredibly romantic and beautifully written chapter. Please update this weekend.
Mission accomplished arceextl – this chapter and the whole story is definitly HOT and ROMANTIC….and so many other wonderful things :o)) Please post soon…I can’t get enough.
hey rc that was wonderful. i think my monitor melted. loving this story. thanks.
The girls know instinctively that they have just met the person they are to love forever. They are each experiencing that feeling of complete euphoria from being with the one person that blows your mind. WHAT A FEELING!! Love it. Post soon please. Thanks rc for this post.
I’m with ID18, that was incredible.
HOT!! ROMANTIC!! perfect! please please post soon!! keep writing. I’ll be reading.
Like this. It going to be hard to wait for the next posting thanks
Wow, your writing is just so beautiful. I’m really enjoying this story. Thanks!
oh babe that was fucking amazing — you are without a doubt in the B/T forever club of writers. wonderful build up — so you going to set light to the bonfire ?
Ahhh they’re sooo meant for each other!! Beautiful chapter. *Fate slaps Destiny a high five* Hehe
Wow romantic and hot and sweet. Ok let see some more hot coming, thanks!
OK again im ALMOST lost for words i just sooo love the romantic stuff and you do it so well… that was as always amazeing…thanks
hotttttttttttt