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My Savior- Chapter 11
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5 hours later
Bobby and Tidwell came to pick up Carmen and Jenny in their squad car.
Carmen: Bobby! Tidwell!
Tidwell: Hey little lady.
Carmen: How’s Shane doing?
Bobby: Not so good, lets hurry up and get over there.
They all jumped in. They turned on the sirens and weaved through LA traffic.
Carmen: Have the doctors said anything?
Bobby: Not yet. They won’t disclose any information to us. We need Shane to wake up.
Carmen sprinted out of the car with Jenny chasing after her. The paparazzi had blocked the door. One of them noticed Carmen.
Paparazzi 1: Carmen!
She was swarmed. Thank goodness Tidwell and Bobby were there to help her and Jenny.
Paparazzi 2: How do you feel about coming back to L.A.?
Paparazzi 3: Do you still love Shane?
Tidwell: Shut up and let the ladies through!
Tidwell and Bobby got them behind the police force that stood guard in the lobby.
Bobby: Up the stairs. They’ll show you the way.
He said pointing at the officers lined up in the halls and corridors. Carmen was so nervous. She hadn’t seen Shane in so long she didn’t know how to act. The elevator seemed like it was taking forever.
Carmen: How do I look? Can you see the puffy eyes?
Jenny: Yeah, but it’s not that noticeable. Told you not to cry!
Carmen: I can’t she’s hurting because of me.
The police officers were standing by a door at the end of the hall. Carmen darted towards there.
Police: The doctor said if we don’t quiet down she’s going to kick us all out.
Carmen nodded. She walked inside and saw the lifeless Shane laying there. She was hooked up to a heart monitor. IVs were stuck in her. She had one of those tubes that brought pure oxygen to her. Molly was there watching Shane who was mumbling in her sleep.
Carmen: Shane.
Molly turned. She got up and walked over to Carmen and slapped her.
Molly: You probably had a good reason for leaving, but Shane tried so hard and you just left her there.
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Oh HELL no!!!
liver cancer!!!!!!!!! Oh Common smexy don’t do that please
noooooooooooooo you must be joking. this is killing for sure. Not a cancer. Well liver is better than kidney hey at least bit of liver is enough for a possible ansplant once the donor is found as this organ can regenerate itself. please don’t let her die.
When I just thought Sharmen overcame the wave then the bigger wave hit them. Liver cancer?!!!! You are not only killing Shane and also killing us!!! Beside that, you are awesome!
OMG your killing! your really killing me. My heart was finally beating again when Carmen came back and Shane instantly forgave her BUT then you hit me with CANCER WTF?? I really hated it when Carmen left the L-word but your posts give me real hope of a Sharmen reunion. Love it!!! Lucky I did not have to Jaffy Carmen’s sexy ass – Thank God she came back! I like the twist with Molly though – Good Job! Can’t wait for the next update – don’t take too long though……
LIVER CANCER?!?! Ohhh god nooo. Really that surprised me so much I loved it. It’s so sad. I sooo knew Molly and Jaffe had some sort of a relationship, but I hope molly ends up not working with her. Ohh god, how is Shane going to say it to the press? post soon! it’s getting exciting!